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naughtiestmommy
Over 90 days ago
Bi-curious Female, 53
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Quote by Mazza


I became a huge fan quite recently, I love most of them, but this is my very very favourite...

(the version I've posted here is the best I've heard too. Heart wrenching!)


Love it. Check out "Thank you". (If you cannot find it, PM me and I'll send you a DL link.)
{{sigh}} I guess I'm the odd man out. I love good guys. If a man is chivalrous, reliable, wonderful AND has good self-esteem, bring it! Good guys always.
Thomas Jefferson. Maybe Poe. Would love to say Wilde, but he probably would not have given me the chance. I'll probably have to amend this.
I wish I could say I do...I really don't. I think it's like any time I'm trying to create something (i.e. sewing, building, painting, etc.). I am so caught up in getting it right that by the time I get it done, I rarely even get to enjoy the finished product lol. But I write for other people's enjoyment, so I don't think that's such a bad thing.
Okay, someone did it with The Beatles. I just listened to "Thank You" (one of my fave Led Zep songs), and I'm wondering: aside from Stairway to Heaven (which EVERYONE says is their favorite LZ song), what's your fave?
Quote by WellMadeMale
You do understand, that if you've been intimate with the same fellow a few to several times...and he suddenly becomes the Minuteman on a rare occasion...it's sort of a compliment towards you and the thoughts you've conjured in his mind all day long.

Is that a bad thing?

If so, than I stand guilty as charged. More than a few women have coaxed me quickly. And I suspect they bragged about doing so, to their associates (out of my earshot).


Is this because you grow more fond of her? My last lover said that the more he got to know me, the quicker he came. That was seriously one of the best compliments I've ever received. Luckily, he never got soft, either lol.
To my dismay, many of my partners don't last long at all (we're talking under a minute, honestly, unless he pulls out), but I think that's partly an anatomy issue, and partly because of the intense build-up beforehand (I love to seduce as foreplay). Shortest was under ten seconds...no, maybe under five! lol Luckily, I just see that as "Getting the first out of the way"...there's a lot to be said for a short refractory period! ;)
This is an awesome question. I definitely agree with DD and scott, make your story realistic and don't make your characters perfect (although, if you don't see anything wrong with a character and idealize them, you want to do that from a first-person perspective, because it speaks to the psychosexual nature of the writer, rather than being expressed as factual information).

Well-developed characters have "ticks", or characteristics unique to them, and leave readers with a sense of camaraderie and relation. "Word painting" is great when used to assist the reader in visualizing the scenario, but it's easy to overdo it and end up confusing your reader.

Some writers write as they speak. Unless it is meant to be a quirky first-person narration (think: Catcher in the Rye), DON'T DO IT. If I'm reading "seen" when it should be "saw" and every verb is preceded by "had" (had become, had wanted, had zipped), I can't take that story seriously, and I'll stop reading it.

The final one (and we all are guilty of having a typo our two) is: don't trust Word to find, or even correct, all your grammar and spelling mistakes. Overall, if you want to be taken seriously as a writer, you need to know how to spell and form a sentence. However, sometimes truly proper grammar detracts from the feel and flow of the story i.e.: "a man I was sorry to be with", while grammatically incorrect, flows better than, "a man with whom being made me feel sorrowful."

We also tend to rely on Word to automatically adjust our sentences when we quickly change wording. Hence, lots of small words like "the", "she","it" are either incorrectly left in or out, rendering our sentences flawed. Slowly reading your story out loud can help in identifying most wording errors in general, and especially in cases such as this.

(As an aside, I wrote this on my android and had to edit this post three times because I found either wording that was confusing or that my phone incorrectly auto-predicted. Everyone needs to proof-read. Always.)
Quote by Sarahshort
The Long and Winding Road


Yes! & She's Leaving Home, A Day in the Life, Rocky Racoon...norwegian wood....I've got every album they ever released (minus the newer ones michael jackson sold off/out, but including uk imports), yet I always go back to the songs of my youth...being a teen wearing out my cassettes in my walkman on the beach. {sigh for nostalgia}
Quote by Naughty_Magician
king


Really? We need to have a talk. ;) (You cracked me up on this. You are not King of Friends, but you can get there lol)
Soooo many...how do you choose? Something, Golden Slumbers, While My Guitar Gently Weeps (*thank you, George*), Happiness Is A Warm Gun (So fucking naughty!), Eleanor Rigby, Yesterday...the entire Rubber Soul album is phenomenal. How the hell do you choose?
Probably the past. I think I was meant for the past lol...my values (outside of sex) and even my style is much more in line with the 50s. I would probably end up being a Betty Page by night, and a cookie-baking New Style mommy by day...showing all the neighborhood college boys how to please a woman haha.
Quote by dreamer
"I use tineye to check if people are real or not. It's a reverse image search. You've got to take peoples profile pictures with a pinch of salt. I've found quite a few popular members are completely fake and some of those are seeing others on the site so it makes you wonder how that went down when they found out."


I thought so! (About the really popular members being fake). I guess, originally, I gave people the benefit of the doubt, mainly because I am completely open about who I am (well, within the boundaries of common sense and good taste lol) and just assumed others would feel the same, but it really didn't take long to figure out that some people ARE quite fake. (Mainly, it seems to be more women than men, from what I've seen thus far--but none of the guys running after them, tails wagging, seem to mind, so who does it hurt? I guess it doesn't really hurt anyone, but it says something about how someone feels about him- or herself if he/she has to post pictures of someone else and pretend to be that person instead.

My real worry, though, are the ones of girls saying they are like 24 or even 18. Honey, in your pictures, you are in your room--in front of a single bed and with walls plastered with Little Wayne and Justin Timberlake posters. Aren't you really only like 14? My daughter is 17, and I'd hate for her to find this site (if she hasn't already! lol).

Thanks for the Tineye lead! I am too lazy to track it down, and probably even lazier to try to scrutinize which "Friends" are fake, but it's going to be fun with the ones I already had an eye on lol.
Is there any other way to do it? If my partner isn't absolutely exhausted and dizzy when I'm done with them, then I'm letting my "A" game slip.
A woman's perspective? It used to make me worry if my partner fantasized about the face, so I was against it, thinking it was somehow disrespectful or misogynistic. However, as I've gotten older, I've come to realize men are very visual creatures by nature and that it's more in line with completing the fantasy of "ownership" ....even if just for that moment. Socially, a woman's face is important, after all: it's the first impression others get of who she is, so if she allows a man to do that he must be special, right?

I don't see it as a desire to degrade anymore, but rather a desire to be placed/ranked above a woman's other partners...kind of the voice of the alpha, if you will. Men and women mark their territories in different ways but, like all animals, we still have a drive to mark them.
I feel like shaving is just another progression away from the Dark Ages...similar to the advent of regular bathing, deodorant use, teeth brushing and other rituals of personal hygiene are. Not only have I been shaving bare for the last twenty two years, but in that time I have converted my lovers into shavers as well (makes for much nicer oral). If your guy has never tried shaving or "manscaping", why not do it for him one night? Make it part of sexual play, and let him know it makes oral much better for everyone. ;)
I love a young, eager lover, but hubby is sixty & still would/could have sex four or five times a day if I could handle it. I definitely have to have a connection (or chemistry) with someone--if that's there, it's all good. But I love everything about my hubby, from the grey in his beard to the way we never run out of things to talk about and teach each other.

I never saw myself marrying someone twenty years older, but if I'd turned him down when he first asked me to lunch, I never would have met the man who is clearly my soul mate. Only down side is, the "growing old together" part. sad
Actually, I have to say, there seems to be an amazing amount of politeness here! I have great appreciation for well-mannered people and, thus far, 99.9% of the people I've come into contact with have been nothing but polite, respectful, and pleasant. Just saying: it's a sex-oriented site where people can remain anonymous; You might expect manners and civility to be not be a priority when sex and anonymity intermingle! lol But, it's been great. smile