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naughtyannie
44 minutes ago
Bisexual Female, 34
0 miles · London

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My New Year Resolution would be to wipe the slate clean after a crappy 2017 and start 2018 looking positively into the future.

But sadly I don't think I'll be given the chance to do that.
Delighted to make the acquaintance of Ms Huggable, she of the delectable bottom.
We could hear our friends downstairs chanting the countdown to midnight, as Dave fucked me vigorously on the bed. "Three, two, one... hurrah!" they cheered, and right on cue he ejaculated, filling my wet pussy with his hot semen. Thus my last fuck of 2017 became my first of 2018.
Thinking a bit more about this, early on in my Lush life (December 2011) I wrote an -themed story (with the catchy title "Open Air Sex With Daddy, Mummy and Brother") that was written purely and simply to attract as many hits as possible, because I knew that was a popular category. It was deliberately over-the-top, and quite honestly it wasn't my best work, although it was fairly popular, and I wasn't too disappointed when it was taken offline in 2014 during the purge on such stories.

I subsequently rewrote it as "Alfresco Orgy", and I do think the revised version was better (though maybe I was just a better writer by then).

However, the original story then reappeared online in 2017, when " fantasies" was restored as a category.

So you now have the chance to compare the two, and see which you prefer!

https://www.lushstories.com/stories/incest/open-air-sex-with-daddy-mummy-and.aspx (NB only read if you're okay with fantasies)

https://www.lushstories.com/stories/group-sex/alfresco-orgy.aspx
I've experimented with different styles and genres, but usually to push myself as a writer, not to please other people. On the couple of occasions when I have tried to write a deliberate "crowd-pleaser", I've never been totally happy with the results. And they've generally done less well than the ones that have come from the heart, so maybe that's a sign.
"I want you," he whispers, pressing me against the wall. I hitch my skirt up while he takes out his hard cock, yanks my knickers off, and thrusts straight into me. A few brief jerks and grunts and he comes inside me. As we go back to the party I feel his cum run out down my legs.
Not to get rid of the taste, no. I like the flavour of both semen and pussy juice.
Best wishes for Christmas, this special time for goodwill and forgiveness.
I do read quite a lot of stories by my fellow Lush authors, though sometimes I get discouraged by just how good some of them are. But I still like to be aroused and stimulated by good erotic writing.
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#26 on what list?


Yes, is there such a list? It might do my damaged ego a bit of good to know where I was on it.
Ah fuck. I've had a wonderful idea for a story that would fit this perfectly.
I bought a vibrator from a branch of Ann Summers, in the nearest big town to me. I'd gone specially to do that, and almost chickened out at the last minute. And of course no-one batted an eyelid when I took it to the counter.
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My latest story is about a girl falling for the same guy as her sister. I kind of rushed it tbh. I also meant for it to be a sort of specific style but maybe I was too subtle or occasional about it because nobody's really picked up on it lol. Anyway it's kinda Christmas themed. Well, half of it is. Not themed. Like half of it is set in December so whatever. I liked writing it. I feel bad for rushing it though. It could have been so much more!

It's entitled Off Limits

https://www.lushstories.com/stories/straight-sex/off-limits.aspx


It's pretty damn good as it is. Please read it, you lot.
“Girls on the Nudist Beach”

Link - https://www.lushstories.com/stories/lesbian/girls-on-the-nudist-beach.aspx

Date online - 2 July 2011

Category – Lesbian

Number of reads to date – 41,930

Badges – Famous Story

Reader comments:

"Lots of cheeky, sporty open airs romps with a big dash of furtive hotel sex to round it off-- energetic smutty fun!"

"Another of naughtyannie's superbly sensuous stories. I got creamed while reading it, and I don't mean by sun screen."

"I love the pace you set and the storyline being so believable."


This was my first story to be set on the nudist beach at Brighton – others (so far) being “Where’s My Clothes?” and “Inappropriate Behaviour”.

For non-UK readers, the seaside town of Brighton is on the south coast only 50 miles from London. Among its many attractions is the UK’s first official nudist beach – established in 1980. The first time I went there was in circumstances similar to this story, although sadly nothing this exciting happened. It was someone’s birthday, so four of us went down to Brighton for the day, and someone (okay, me) persuaded the group to go bare. It was great, and I’ve been down several times since. If I actually lived in Brighton, I’d be there every day. The characters of the girls are based roughly on people I knew at the time, although their names are taken from people I was particularly friendly with on Lush at the time.

I think the story fits well with the structure that I often like to use, of building up the sexual tension with some erotic detail (the girls undressing and playing in the sea) before progressing to the “meat” of the story – the seduction and sex. A lot of my stories are definitely written with the thought that whoever is reading them will be masturbating, and hopefully climaxing at the same time as the characters. So it seems important to introduce some general sexual undertones from quite early on, to get the reader steadily aroused (wet or erect as appropriate), then working up to a mutual climax.

I’m less keen these days on the first-person present tense narrative, but it does make for an immediate connection with the reader. I do sometimes start writing a story in one narrative tense, then change my mind halfway through (or even at the end) and have to change it all. Sometimes I don’t know until I’ve written a lot which seems right for the particular story. I’ve got a couple that have been through various rewrites.

[Spoilers] The thing that still niggles me slightly about the story is the “cheat” I use to get the girls into the hotel room at the end. I’ve never seen a hotel key-card that has the room number actually printed on it (or if it did you’d need an access code as well, otherwise it would be far too easy to break in). But I wanted Annie and Lizzie to have somewhere to finish off, and things like a public toilet or shop changing-room didn’t feel right. So it’s a narrative cheat. I usually really try to avoid this sort of thing – I want readers to feel that my stories could actually happen, however improbable the actual events.