
So the first one is…
Wet Mountain | Lush Stories
First Published - 8 June 2011
Revised version – 13 July 2015
Category – Straight Sex
Reads – 15,927
Reader comments:
"Hot, sexy, funny, everything it needed, it just the right amounts! Can't wait to read more!"
"Very, very erotic story.... got me hard and ready... pity I couldn't get to see those lovely tiny tits"
"Excellently paced and superbly written"
This was the story that brought me to Lush in the first place. I’d written it for my own pleasure, but then decided I wanted to find somewhere online to post it, and hopefully get some feedback from readers on whether they liked it or not. I looked at a couple of places, and I think I just liked the way the stories on Lush were laid out. So I registered, and submitted the story.
It’s not the first erotic story I wrote by a long way. Most of the earlier stuff isn’t really up to scratch for Lush without some major re-writing, which I might get round to one day. The only piece that’s really any good is a pretty filthy piece of “fan fiction” that I wrote about the TV show “iCarly” that I used to love as a kid, but Lush doesn’t allow that sort of thing, so bad luck!
It was originally published under the title “A Walk, a Swim, and a Fuck.” That pretty much describes what it’s about, and at the time I thought getting the word “fuck” into the title would make it more likely to be read. For a new writer that’s probably true, but a couple of years ago I decided “Wet Mountain” was a better title. If you want to know why, you’d better read the story.
It’s also the only one of my stories where I’ve rewritten parts of it to improve the structure and characterisation. Originally, it was written in the first person, but the “Annie” in the story, while being like me in many ways, had a different “back-story” to the “Annie” persona I now use.
It’s not had a huge number of hits, but it was my first story, so maybe that’s not surprising. It had to make it by itself.
Quote by DeepBlue
I'm sure rhyming 'tits' with 'slits' has its place..