freaking hell we have some good writers on the site. just spent the last 3 days reading ALL of the comp entries, and damn - lot of good stuff came in (a lot of it at the last minute lol). that all said, i think i earned a couple of free drinks... and umm... not sure why everyone decided it's a good idea to sit on me?
you guys are just skirting the issue.
don't start every sentence with the name of your character followed by a verb. it starts getting obnoxiously repetitive.
ie.
George sat at the piano and drink coffee while thinking of Fred. lots of other words.
George had once gotten a tattoo of Fred on his ass. lots of other words.
George decided to call Fred and ask him out. lots of other words.
etc.
now, picture a story with 40 paragraphs in it that all start just like that and you'll see what i mean...
btw, since this is the lgbt forum, it's kinda weird that the guys are posting in here. lol. just sayin'.
we talking vaginas or cats?
ps - if i have to send a story back for editing, that doubles the time it takes to verify. it's pretty simple. read through your story carefully before submitting. if there are THREE misspellings in the very first sentence, it's NOT ready for publishing.
thanks,
a very tired sprite with a nasty cold.