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Hiya,
BJintheUK here. Is it okay for me to post here that I've just had my first story put up on the site? It's called Sweet Memories, and is semi-autobiographical. Parts of the story (particularly the quotes) are almost word for word, but the action that actually took place on the night was a little different from that portrayed in the story.
If this one gets a good response then I may try to put up in a different story what actually happened! It was much dirtier, and very unexpected, coming (pardon the pun) completely out of the blue, and it left me with a very different aspect on inter-human relations.
If you do get a chance to read Sweet Memories, as well as scoring the story could you please leave a comment as well? I'd be grateful for any criticism good or bad, that could help me to improve my writing, so please comment away.
Many thanks,
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I appreciate all of our mods for donating their time!
I haven't dealt with many so far, but I really enjoyed KatieElizabeth. She was very helpful when I submitted my first story and gave me great advice.
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Here's the chat.
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Somewhere in the conversation the box that you got by mistake, is supposed to fit. now can YOU see anywhere I said you can't cope?
NO PERSONAL INFO? she just said that and more in her own post!! but I understand.
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Hilarious. THIS is what I'm used to hearing from people who ARE paranoid. Individuals more afraid of fellow law abiding citizens with guns than they are concerned about criminals whose intent is to harm them. Twisted logic at best.
Oh and regarding your "battalion" remark (as my comment to THAT didn't post. As I recall Sgt Alvin York controlled an entire battalion he'd taken POW with an EMPTY bolt action rifle... BECAUSE "In the kingdom of the blind the one eyed man is king". AND, in the kingdom of the unarmed he who HAS a gun IS also!
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The only problem is that more laws are NOT needed what IS needed is ENFORCEMENT of the ones that ALREADY EXIST. So, it's just a "whittling" process by means of which ever further inroads are made until nothing remains. Those who would take our rights from us KNOW that they can not get it done in one big bite...so they settle for little ones.
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Lawful gun owners are not our problem!!!!!! The black market guns are wake up! If someone wa Td a gun bad enough they get one. Cocaine is not leagal but that's not stoping any people from doing it. Stricter laws yes I agree but you will never take my freedom!!!!!!
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Yes he was a great man, and yes; I do value his words. That however does NOT mean that the entire rest of the world WILL cooperate. On those rare occasions when they don't, the prepared live and the unprepared die. I prefer living thanks.
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As a combat vet I understand how dangerous weapons are. As a conservative I support the right to own guns, however not without sensible controls. Children being killed or maimed by weapons is appalling. I choose not to own a weapon in my home. I believe that if you own one that you should be legally responsible for that weapon. The second amendment talks about choice just as Roe Wade talks about choice. I choose not to have a gun as i would encourage women to not have an abortion.
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Enough already!!!! I own guns. My children have been strictly taught gun safety
. They now own guns and there children will be trained in gun safety and also own guns. It was the way of our for fathers and is a freedom I have. Gun in the hands of responsible people are not the problem. People kill people guns don't.
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I'm very used to living a normal life but SURVIVING on those occasions when life makes it necessary in THE REAL WORLD.
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Yeah I know it will. I was being as "flip" as you were.
We disagree. Enuf said. You and the other liperals on here are certain that anyone who DOESN'T agree with you about guns must be some ignorant lout and are convinced that you're vastly more intelligent. I'm not.
Fantasy is great...HERE...on this adult fantasy site. But, buying into the FANTASY that someone someday will pass some magical legislation that criminals will CHOSE to obey is a different matter. I'm very used to living a normal life but SURVIVING on those occasions when life makes it necessary in THE REAL WORLD.
How you or anyone else CHOOSES to live is your right and your business. Now, if those of us who've put our lives on the line for YOUR rights could only be ALLOWED to enjoy THOSE SAME RIGHTS. But, that is ALWAYS asking too much when you liperals decide that YOU KNOW WHAT'S BEST FOR US ALL.
Yeah, ZIG ... she's a little slow at times 
