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Quote by slipperywhenwet2012
I have to submit a story into a competition just to be considered for said competition?? I didn't read any of that in the fine print. I know my rights, and I don't have to take this. I'm leaving Lush indefinitely!
my non-existent comp entry story was better than your non-existent comp entry story!
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Quote by DirtyMartini
You can write a poem in any category you want, it does not have to be a traditional "love poem" so to speak...you can always add the specific categories in the tags...
For example...let's say you submitted this classic...
Ode To My Sister
My favorite family member is my sister,
And she really is so dear,
She keeps her butt hole clean and bleached,
And she lets me do her in the rear.
She keeps cucumbers in the fridge,
Though she's never made a salad,
She always buys fresh ginger too,
Though her cooking skills aren't valid.
She invites the neighbors over at night,
And we take turns passing her around,
When she goes back in her room alone,
We hear a buzzing sound.
See...you could post a classic poem like that in the "Love Poem" category, and just add the rest in the tags, which might read something like " , sister, group sex, toys, ginger, figging, anal sex, anal bleaching, whatever"...
Understand how it works?
how come you haven't submitted this, Alan? seriously, it's way better then umm... your... i mean, some stuff i read... (for those who don't know it, DM is actually a well regarded published author of poetry, and we're sort of proud of him, even tho some of us will never admit it - oh, and he has a book out. i've heard it's good).
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Quote by BlueEyes031886
I see where you are coming from. Unfortunately, I had been involved with some pretty manipulative people and I guess I just developed trust issues. I was the stereotypical white knight and ended up in a lot of bad relationships. That's why I'm here trying to get all of this worked out.
I guess I'm lost in my own point regarding dating and friendship... I see dating as a natural outgrowth of friendship, so I kind of felt like maybe I just wasn't a good enough friend, so I would do more and try to be a better friend and end up in a world of hurt. My fault, I know, but again, that's why I'm trying to gain some insight... not trying to claim my position is right. If I thought my perspective was absolutely correct, I wouldn't have posted in here looking for feedback.
me too. major trust issues. but seriously, if i was to date every friend i had... well, it would be a lot of work. sometimes a friendship is just a friendship. enjoy it for what it is, don't hate it for what it's not.
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Quote by Magical_felix
How great would it be really? I'm being serious. Like watching every facet of their lives.
Like warming up a hot pocket in his full on dom outfit waiting for the sub to get there 'n' shit. Getting upset when someone cuts in line and watching the dom give a disapproving look. Watching him get mad road rage on his way home from his job before he becomes Mr. Professional. Arguing with kids while playing video games online... Him phoning his friend asking him when he's gonna return his copy of lord of the rings already... Fuck!
no, i know you are, and so was i - like, instead of big brother, it'd be Big Dom/Little Sub or something like that. i'd totally tune in every week to watch it!
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Quote by Magical_felix
I don't know... Dudealicious says he used to be straight before trying strap on sex for guys. I can happen. Not all the time... But sometimes.
*nods* i used to be straight. True story. Then one day my boyfriend put on a strap on vagina and it was like BOOM! lesbo city.
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Quote by Magical_felix
I think observing a "real life" dom that lives the "lifestyle" would probably be even funnier than observing internet doms.
Like, with the suit and the rules... Like, watching him walk out of the porn shop with a brown bag full of cheaply made sexual aids and get into his dodge stratus. Getting all frustrated if the bindings rip if the sub jerks too hard on them... Putting on his cock ring... The bored look on the low end prostitute pretending to be a sub... Watching him getting yelled at from above his cubicle then going home to put on his power suit and light some candles to become his alter ego, Mr. Professional or whatever. I would pay to watch that. Would be such an awesome reality show.
dude, no, seriously, i think you're on to something here!
edit: i was going to post more on the subject, but SWW pretty much nailed it on the head and saved me some time.
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Quote by RumpleForeskin
The primary purpose of an opening is NOT to inform the reader, but to hook them into reading more of the story. This is hard enough, but trying to pull it off in a opening backstory is a huge challenge best avoided if at all possible...IMO.
this is really key for me... typically a lot of stories here start with... my name is jill, i have blue eyes, blonde hair, i'm 120 pounds with DD tits... that's not a hook for me, that's not a story, that's a list. authors; draw your audience in - make the first paragraph grab them and MAKE them want to read more - stand out. Think of your favorite not erotica story - does it start with a list of physical attribute for the main character? no, it finds a way to set the scene, the tone, the setting - and it hooks you into wanting to read more - you can sneak the rest in later, but first, make someone want to read your story - personally, i tend to gloss over all that stuff or worse, just put it aside and go find something else.
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Quote by Mysteria27
I think it would be kind of interesting if you could do poems in every category. Instead of just leaving it to love poems.
Do you think that might happen someday?
Any thoughts?
as it stands you can write poems in any category you wish, as long as they have an erotic or love theme to them - that said, they still will be placed under love poems - i think, if we're being honest here, the majority of the people read to be aroused and are looking for stories - separating the two allows them to get what they want as well as for people like you to easily find poems if that is what you prefer. seriously, do we really want to double the front page chapter list by adding poem to the end of each category as well?
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Quote by flytoomuch
Haha now that's a theme I can EMBRACE!! Luckily my hotel in Beijing does not block "Lush Stories" otherwise I'd be going through story-withdrawl. The Chinese probably got confused by the whole "Lush" concept? Flying too much is actually a pretty good theme.....perhaps "travel sex"?? I adore travel sex.
in all seriousness, noted. i'll bring it up during the next comp. discussion. might be a good one for the holiday season due to all the travelling that goes on, in fact.
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funny, to me, if i guys in the 'friend zone' it means we're friends. i don't use him, i don't string him along, i am there for him when he needs me as much as he is there for me. i wasn't aware i being my friend was so much work! wow - you paint this picture of women as being just manipulative bitches - this might be why they aren't really interested in dating you, you know: they want to cause anguish in my life to know they have the ability to do so? wow.
btw, dating and being friends are two different animals. so, you're implying that anyone that is your friend should also be interested in dating you? just curious - are you willing to ask your male friends for a date under the same presumption?
btw, dating and being friends are two different animals. so, you're implying that anyone that is your friend should also be interested in dating you? just curious - are you willing to ask your male friends for a date under the same presumption?