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Quote by stephanie
i kind of want to see this now....
(Mind you, I'd watch Maggie Gyllenhall if she were in a crime scene photo...)
xx SF
"Amphetamines and Penis Envy, Sir!"
Actually, that IS a better line....
it might have been good if you're written it - that is kind of a great line
i just today realized that this was ky and not toothpaste... 
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Quote by Dancing_Doll
Haha. That story might be the exception. I'll probably go back to that one for a re-read before I bring Babydoll out for another literary spin. Rereads can help to get back into the same headspace and tone of a character. And yeah, I'm sure it'll get the juices flowing too.
creative juices, or...
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Quote by Dancing_Doll
Only during the process of creating and writing.
I almost never go back and re-read a story I've written once it's published. It's not so much that I don't think it's hot anymore but by the time I actually finish writing a story and it gets put through the tedious editing and redrafts and rewrites, it tends to dull the effects of the initial fantasy that inspired it. If I reread it, I'm likely to still be looking at it with a critical eye rather than just enjoying the ride and indulging the fantasy as a turn-on.
you should re-read Hard Candy, Doll... seriously. still can't get through more than half the story at a time without...
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Quote by gav
Congratulations SJ, a well deserved win.
Summer, you did not need any help from me on this one, you won this competition on your own two feet (legs and boobies).
Thanks for your generous gift of the prize money, I shall put it to good use.
i have a few suggestions, but i'll keep them to myself ;)
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Quote by Magical_felix
Oh please... I did answer the question and I was on topic about how some toys like ones made of glass or metals can be cleaned properly. Like dish ware. It's okay to reuse a dish isn't it? Not saying I would reuse a plug, just giving some tips to the more broke dudes amongst us on how to recycle, reduce and reuse. If you actually read this thread you will see it's me who is being harassed by trinket and that other one, I forgot her name already.
Also seems weird for a mod to delete my entire post because of a picture of a kid and not just the picture while leaving up trinket and the other ones post where it seems like they are implying I posted something inappropriate containing a child when that was not the case. Seems slanderous.
not today. i'm tired, i have a headache, i'm in a bad mood, and this wasn't an official mod request, just me telling you to knock it off. i didn't pull the post. that's probably a mod with some authority. this goes for Trinket and Kiera too, btw, just let it go please. what part of adult site don't people understand?
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Quote by Buz
Lesbians like cats, raisin cookies, Mack trucks, fishnet stockings, apple fritters, low rise jeans, cartoon character panties, frolicking naked in the beach surf, that TV show Duck Dynasty, and rolling people in dark alleys for their wallets?
you got everything right for rolling people in dark alleys, buz.
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i don't hate you. that would mean i care about you. you are an insignificant little piece of shit. nothing you have every done or will ever do will make a difference to anyone. you should just accept that and drink a gallon of draino and crawl off to die somewhere that you'll never be found. when you're gone, no one will think about you or care about what happened to you or even remember you. you are dead, not only to me, but to every single member of the human race. you're not even worth being angry about so i'm not going to waste my energy.
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i have several. A 1.5 inch wide scar between my ribs, below my right breast and another along my left jawline, both knife wounds picked up last summer. An inch long scar above my left knee cap from a surgery when I was 19. A half inch scar on my right bicep from a fight during High School. Several more that are souvenirs from a now ex-boyfriend who, among other things, threw me through a sliding glass door when I was 21; 3 inch scar above my left ear. A 2 inch scar over my right shoulder blade. Another 3 inch one on my back just above my waist, and a 2 inch one on my abs.
Those are the ones that haven’t completely faded. I am proud of the fact that he didn’t come out of that one unscathed. I clocked him good with a wine bottle. I truly regret that my aim was off – I was aiming for his head, got him in the shoulder.
Am I proud of any of them? Not proud no, but they are battle scars and I am not embarrassed that I have them. That said, I tend to not show them off, but I also don’t try to hide them. They are part of me. Thankfully, with the exception of the two from last year, if you don’t know where to look they have grown unnoticeable over time.
as for guys with scars, they don't make me think any more or any less of them - it's past history. they're not sexy nor do they bother me. they just are.
Those are the ones that haven’t completely faded. I am proud of the fact that he didn’t come out of that one unscathed. I clocked him good with a wine bottle. I truly regret that my aim was off – I was aiming for his head, got him in the shoulder.
Am I proud of any of them? Not proud no, but they are battle scars and I am not embarrassed that I have them. That said, I tend to not show them off, but I also don’t try to hide them. They are part of me. Thankfully, with the exception of the two from last year, if you don’t know where to look they have grown unnoticeable over time.
as for guys with scars, they don't make me think any more or any less of them - it's past history. they're not sexy nor do they bother me. they just are.
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Quote by real69luvr
Yeah I have abandoned one. I was on my third story when I found out the second one was rejected. I thought I had followed allo the suggestions from the first one, but apparantly when I get to writing my exuberance takes over and it does not fit the parameters of good grammar or form or whatever. So I just read the stories now and comment. Nothing worse than taking 30 or 40 minutes to write a story and have it rejected.
quite honestly, if you're only spending 30-40 minutes on a story, the reason it was rejected should be fairly obvious. many of the better writers here will spend that much time on a single paragraph if you add up the time from when they start writing until it's published. personally, it takes me 2-3 weeks from the time i start writing until i send it in, depending on the length - sometimes longer, but rarely less. i count myself lucky if i can hit 1k words a day just in raw unedited form, and that usually means several hours worth of writing.
don't take this as a put down, btw, just a little goal to set for the authors here - writing a story isn't like making a forum post - it's work, yes, it's fun work, but it's still something that takes a lot of effort to do - if you WANT to be good at it, you need to put the time in, just like any other skill.
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OMG! one of my very favorite people here! usually, i hand out balloons and cake, but i know something that Ms OWA will appreciate a little more...
Happy birthday to one of the sweetest, most hard working people i know as well as well as an excellent writer. *hugs*
Happy birthday to one of the sweetest, most hard working people i know as well as well as an excellent writer. *hugs*
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Quote by Emerys
1) Mods, please let me know if this isn't allowed. I'll change the question to something more appropriate.
2) I've received a few messages from people who I suppose didn't feel all that comfortable making public requests, so don't hesitate to PM me if that's the case.
mods give you the official thumbs up! as long as people keep them the suggestions Lush safe i don't see any reason you shouldn't be able to do this, E.
btw, i loved the super hero suggestion - can i add to it saying that it would be fun to write a series of the sexual misadventures of a comic book heroine? some fun bondagey stuff where the villian of the month captures her and does diabolical things - you could bill her as the worlds worst superhero