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Her Royal Spriteness
Quote by nicola
http://www.teaonearth.com/hibiscus-tea-benefits/
A little red wine and dark chocolate also have similar health benefits
i have gotten into the habit of having a small square of dark chocolate and a cup of tea in the morning along with my breakfast which really does seem to help settle me down.
Her Royal Spriteness
i only do sequels if i have planned on a multi part story from the beginning - otherwise, i find that they just don't work. you told the story, you moved on - coming back to it, you never have the same fire, the same passion as the original, and it usually shows. only write a sequel if YOU have something to say and passionately want to - don't write it just to please people, you'll only end up disappointing yourself and possibly your readers.
Her Royal Spriteness
Quote by TexasSon
my head!
http://instantrimshot.com/
you stole my answer, you... you... you... answer stealer!
Her Royal Spriteness
Quote by Mazza
Well, I had a guy PM me today - he's been trying to chat me up with the most pathetic lines, in bloody text speak I might add (which I really hate, as you know)
Anyway, today he actually called me an OLD LADY!! Idiot!!
Block and delete... grrr
yeah, the nerve of him calling you a lady! umm... i meant old, honest it did! LOL - omg, so yeah, so sometimes they don't even bother to ask! like you get those "i' stick my cock in your mouth and cum" i mean, like hello, nice to meet you too! wtf?
Her Royal Spriteness
Quote by Dudealicious
Actually it was me that sent it, I honestly thought it would have worked!
I should go back to the drawing board to find a new line....
i prefer your other line, Dude... "i'm desperate! for the love of god, would you please give my cyber head? i'll even pay you!" *giggles*
Her Royal Spriteness
Quote by lafayettemister
That's so selfish. He should say, "hi baby im hard for u wanna fuck" His way, he just wants you to suck him off and not do anything for you. My way shows how sensitive he is and that he cares about your needs too!
you are nothing, if not sensitive to our needs, LM *dreamy sigh*
btw, this is actually better then the one i sometimes get: "I M bored and horny. U wanna chat?"
Her Royal Spriteness
Quote by gypsymoth
Please read this thread then:
Proofreading: What is THAT all about?
Part of the problem is submitting a story as soon as you have finished it and made as many corrections as you think necessary. A lapse of time, minimum 24 hours, maximum ten years or so, is a good idea. The mistakes, typos, repetitions etc suddenly seem all too obvious when you reread the text after being away from it for a while.
oh, how true this is - i shudder at some of the glaring mistakes in some of my older stories, and the only thing keeping me from fixing them is making all the mods cranky at me - i look on it a reminder to edit more carefully and a learning experience
that said, someday i might sneak a few fixes into one or two...