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The Commanding Mistress And Her Devoted Slave

"She ordered him to get on his knees, and he obeyed without hesitation, ready to serve his Mistress in any way she desired."

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"This lovely tale of submission was written with a man in mind but dont let that discourage you from reading it ladies.... it could easily be you kneeling at my feet worshiping me!!"

Her voice was already in your head before she even uttered a word, curling around your spine like a command you couldn’t ignore—sharp, unyielding, and utterly intoxicating. "Kneel." The word echoed in your mind, and you obeyed instantly, your knees hitting the floor with a quiet thud. The hardwood was cold against your skin, but the chill was nothing compared to the molten heat pooling low in your stomach, a visceral reminder of her power over you.

She stood over you now, taller, her shadow engulfing you, her presence heavy and suffocating in the most delicious way. One finger, cool and deliberate, trailed along your chin, coaxing your head back until your eyes locked with hers. Her gaze was dark, hungry, and piercing, a silent promise of control that sent shivers racing down your spine.

“You like being good for me, don’t you?” Her voice was low, smooth, and impossible to disobey. It wasn’t a question—it was a fact.

You nodded, your tongue heavy in your mouth, but she wasn’t having it.

“Use your words.”

"Yes, ma'am," you breathed, the words quivering like a whisper in the stillness, each syllable laden with submission. Her approval flickered in her eyes—a fleeting spark that ignited something deep within you, tightening your chest until it felt as though the air itself belonged to her.

She stepped back, her movement deliberate, her heels striking the floor with a rhythm that reverberated through your very core. Click. Click. Click. The sound was hypnotic, each tap a stark reminder of her dominance, her control over every fiber of your being. As she circled you, her fingers trailed lightly over your shoulders, the touch a ghostly caress that sent electric shivers rippling across your skin. You trembled, every nerve alight, every inch of you aching for more of her, more of this—her power, her presence, her command.

“Good,” she purred, her voice closer now, low and velvety, her breath brushing against your ear in a teasing caress that made your pulse quicken. Her lips hovered just inches from your skin, the warmth of her exhale sending a shiver cascading down your spine. “Stay still,” she commanded, her tone firm yet laced with a dark, intoxicating sweetness that tightened your chest.

“Don’t move unless I tell you to. Not a muscle, not even a breath without my permission. You are mine to control, you exist only to obey.” Her words wrapped around you like a vice, binding you more effectively than any rope or cuff ever could, leaving you trembling with anticipation and devotion.

You swallowed hard, your hands clenched into fists at your sides, as she stepped in front of you again. Her auburn hair framed her face like a fiery halo, and her piercing green eyes raked over you, inspecting every inch with a predatory intensity.

Her fingers found the hem of her skirt, and she lifted it slowly, inch by inch, revealing the smooth expanse of her thighs. You couldn’t look away, your mouth going dry as she hooked her thumbs into the waistband of her panties, revealing a tantalizing glimpse of her red-trimmed, fluffy pubes.

She slid the panties down her legs, stepping out of them and leaving them pooled on the floor, and your eyes dropped instinctively to the space between her legs, captivated by the bold contrast of her vibrant hair against her flawless skin.

Your tongue darted out instinctively to wet your lips, your breath hitching as you imagined the taste of her on your tongue—sweet, tangy, intoxicating. She noticed, of course, and smirked, her green eyes gleaming with amusement and something darker, something that made your stomach tighten with anticipation.

“Eager, aren’t we?” she murmured, her voice dripping with satisfaction, knowing exactly how much power she held over you in that moment.

“Take off your clothes.” Her voice was sharp, commanding, and you scrambled to obey, fumbling with your shirt and pants until you were naked before her. Your cock was already hard, throbbing with need, the tip slick with precum that glistened in the dim light. The thick, sticky fluid coated your length, almost dripping down the shaft, a tantalizing sheen that betrayed your desperation. She eyed it with a predatory gleam, her tongue flicking across her bottom lip as if savoring the sight of your arousal laid bare before her.

“Good boy,” she murmured, tracing a finger along your jawline. “Now, show me how much you want to please me.”

Her hand fisted in your hair, tugging you forward until your face was level with her pussy. The scent was overwhelming this close, and you could see every detail—the way her labia glistened with arousal, the way her clit peeked out from its hood, swollen and begging for attention. You leaned in, your breath fanning over her, and heard her sharp intake of air.

“Go on,” she urged, her grip tightening in your hair. “Taste me.”

You didn’t need to be told twice. Your tongue darted out, dragging along her slit from bottom to top, savoring the way she jerked against your mouth. Her flavor exploded on your tongue—sweet and tangy. You moaned against her, the sound vibrating through her folds as you lapped at her hungrily.

Her hips bucked forward, grinding against your face as you plunged your tongue inside her, exploring the tight, wet heat of her channel. Her walls clenched around you, gripping your tongue like they were trying to pull you deeper, and you obliged, fucking her with your lips and tongue as her breath came in short, sharp gasps above you.

“Yes,” she hissed, her fingers tightening in your hair. “Just like that. Don’t stop.”

You didn’t stop. With precision that bordered on worship, your tongue danced around her clit, tracing delicate circles before flicking against the sensitive bud with rapid, almost imperceptible strokes. Her thighs quivered, pressing tighter as if to trap you there, her body betraying just how much she needed this.

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Her moans crescendoed, raw and unfiltered, each one a testament to the pleasure she was drowning in. You could feel it building within her—the way her muscles coiled like a spring, the way her warmth grew slicker, her juices spilling into your mouth, rich and heady.

You doubled down, your lips sealing around her clit as you sucked it firmly into your mouth, swirling your tongue around the hardened nub with relentless focus. She gasped, her back arching, and then she came hard. Her body jerked violently, her cry echoing in the room as her pussy pulsed against your lips, flooding your mouth with her release. You stayed locked in place, drinking her in, savoring every shudder, every gasp, every drop of her ecstasy.

Her taste was an intoxicating blend of honey and salt, a heady combination that flooded your senses, her arousal coating your tongue and dripping down your chin in thick, glistening strands.

The slick warmth of her release lingered on your lips as you continued to lap eagerly at her swollen folds, your tongue tracing delicate patterns over her sensitive clit and labia, teasing out every last shuddering gasp that escaped her trembling lips.

Her thighs clamped tighter, her hands gripping your hair with desperate urgency as her body convulsed in wave after wave of pleasure. The air was thick with the scent of her ecstasy, savoring the way her pussy pulsed against your mouth, each contraction sending another surge of her juices spilling into your waiting mouth.

Finally, with a shaky breath and a gentle push, she stepped backwards, signaling for you to stop. Her body was spent but still quivering with the lingering aftershocks of her climax.

“Good boy,” she panted, her voice a husky, sultry purr that sent a shiver racing down your spine like electricity coursing through your veins. Her chest rose and fell rapidly, the flush of her skin glowing in the dim light, a vivid testament to the pleasure you’d just wrung from her body.

Her gaze locked onto yours, unwavering and dark, not just with satisfaction, but with something far more primal, something that made your pulse quicken and your cock twitch with renewed need. Her lips parted as she drew in a shaky breath, the curve of her mouth wicked, promising more—so much more—in the way it twisted into a sly, intoxicating smile.

“Come here,” she murmured, her tone low and commanding, yet laced with a hint of sweetness that made your heart pound against your ribs like a drum. Her hand extended toward you, fingers beckoning you closer with deliberate slowness, each movement dripping with authority and the unspoken promise of what was to come.

You obeyed without hesitation, crawling forward on your hands and knees, the smooth floor cool beneath your palms. The sensation of her essence still lingered on your skin, sticky and warm, a tangible reminder of her dominance. Every movement felt deliberate, every inch closer to her amplifying the electric tension in the air. As you positioned yourself at her feet, your breath hitched, your body trembling with anticipation. You were her devoted servant, and the mere thought of her approval sent a thrill coursing through your veins.

She cupped your face with a tenderness that somehow made her dominance even more potent. Her thumbs grazed your cheeks, wiping away the glistening streaks of her essence from your chin with deliberate care. Her touch was possessive, yet laced with an intimacy that made your heart race. Her green eyes bore into yours, dark and commanding, as if she could see straight into your soul. “Mine,” her gaze seemed to say, and you nodded silently, utterly consumed by her presence.

When she leaned down, her lips met yours in a kiss that was both reward and demand. The moment her tongue slid into your mouth, you were lost. Her taste—sweet, tangy, and utterly intoxicating—flooded her senses, sending sparks of pleasure racing through her body. She moaned into you, the sound vibrating deep in her throat as her flavor enveloped her. Her tongue moved with a slow, deliberate rhythm, claiming every inch of your mouth as if marking you hers. You responded eagerly, your own tongue intertwining with hers, desperate to savor every drop of her essence.

Her hands moved to the back of your head, fingers tangling in your hair as she deepened the kiss, her dominance flaring hotter with every passing second. The way she held you, so firmly yet so tenderly, made your chest tighten with a mix of adoration and need. Your cock ached between your legs, throbbing with a need so fierce it bordered on pain. Precum slickened the tip, a glistening testament to your desperation, and you could feel your hips instinctively twitching forward, craving even the faintest touch of her skin.

Every fiber of your being was attuned to her—the rhythm of her breath, the subtle shifts of her body, the way her lips curved into a smirk as she pulled back slightly, teasing you with the promise of more. You craved her like a starving man craves food, every moment without her touch feeling like an eternity. “You’re mine,” she murmured against your lips, her voice low and husky, sending shivers down your spine.

“Always,” you breathed, your voice trembling with sincerity. Her smirk deepened, and she kissed you again, harder this time, her dominance surging like a tidal wave. You were hers, utterly and completely, and you wouldn’t have it any other way. Every touch, every word, every breath she took was a reminder of the power she held over you, and you reveled in it, your body trembling under her control. You craved more, always more, and she knew it. She always knew.

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