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The Crack In The Ceiling

"Desire slipped through and obsession took over"

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Competition Entry: Obsession

Author's Notes

"I like entering competitions because they push me as a writer, challenging me to explore new territory. This story let me dive into obsession—how it twists between desire and transformation. It’s my entry for the Obsession competition, and I loved writing it. I hope you enjoy reading it."

This is the story of Claire’s awakening—she moved to the city for her first job, but it was the moans bleeding through the ceiling and the filthy notes under her door that lured her into desire, and drove her into obsession.

The First Night

Claire lay on her bed, taking it all in—her first apartment, her first real job, her first time truly alone in the city. Fresh out of college, a small-town girl now dropped into the chaos of downtown. The brownstone was crooked and cracked, with thin walls, warped floors, and a jagged scar cutting across the ceiling. Imperfect, but hers. That was enough.

Through the window came the faint hum of the city—horns, voices, the steady rush of traffic. Then another sound rose above it. Stirring upstairs. Footsteps. A shift of weight.

She stilled.

A sigh slipped down through the plaster. Then a moan.

The rhythm followed—springs shrieking, floorboards pounding. Then sharper, filthier, the wet slap of skin, a man’s guttural grunt, a woman’s broken cries. She couldn’t make out words, only the moans, the raw sounds of pleasure seeping through, dripping heat into her room.

Claire couldn’t stop listening. Her chest tightened, heat pooling low in her belly, thighs pressing together as wetness spread. It was hot—too hot. Shameful. And yet it turned her on.

The sounds above only grew louder, harder, desperate. Claire lay trembling, breath shallow, eyes fixed on the crack overhead as if it might split wide and pull her straight into their filthy, desperate rhythm.

Claire's hands slid up her ribcage, trembling as if she could press the ache back down. Her palms brushed her breasts, and she froze. Her nipples had gone hard, sensitive even to the lightest touch. She cupped them, testing, squeezing gently. The shock of pleasure made her arch against her mattress.

Another moan from above. Claire rolled her nipples between her fingers, pinched them until they throbbed. A whimper slipped from her lips, shame and lust tangled together.

Her hand drifted lower, down the flat of her stomach, stopping at the elastic of her panties. She pressed her palm there, feeling the heat of her pussy through the thin cotton. It was unbearable—her whole body buzzing, alive, trembling.

The woman’s moans grew louder overhead, wild and desperate. Claire slipped her hand under the elastic waistband of her panties. Her fingers brushed her mound, and she could feel how wet she was.

Slowly, almost fearfully, she parted herself. Her fingertips glided through her slick folds, spreading her wetness over her clit. The first touch made her jolt, a helpless cry caught in her throat. She circled herself, soft and tentative at first, then harder when the man’s grunts above grew more urgent.

Her thighs parted wider. Her hips began to rise with her hand. Every moan above seemed to pulse through her body, syncing her to their rhythm.

Claire pushed a finger inside her needy pussy, her body welcoming it greedily. Another followed, stretching her as she thrust into herself, thumb grinding against her clit. Her breath grew ragged, her body twisting.

The ceiling echoed with frenzy now—skin slapping skin, a chorus of grunts and cries. Claire fucked herself to the sounds of strangers, to the rhythm bleeding through the plaster. Her body jerked with need, her pussy dripping, coating her hand.

The woman above cried out, shattering, and Claire came with her. Her orgasm spread through her like fire, her back arching, her pussy clenching around her fingers. She buried her face into the pillow to muffle her own cries, screaming into the fabric—“God, yes, ohhh fuck yes”—as her climax rolled through her.

Her moans mingled with theirs until she couldn’t tell where theirs ended and hers began.

And then—silence.

Claire lay trembling, chest heaving, her hand still buried inside her soaked pussy. Shame flushed hot in her cheeks. She hadn’t expected this.

The Morning After

All morning, Claire drifted through her little apartment, restless and unsettled. She kept catching herself staring up at the ceiling, as if the crack in the plaster might confess what had really happened. Her body still tingled, and she fought to suppress a low hum between her legs.

Every step reminded Claire of the night before—how she had writhed in the dark, biting her pillow to stifle cries she hadn’t known she was capable of. She told herself it was wrong, that she shouldn’t think of it again.

When she bent to slip on her shoes, she froze.

Claire noticed a piece of paper slid halfway under her door.

Her stomach lurched. Slowly, she bent and pulled it free.

“Claire, you are our slut, 3B,” written across the white sheet.

The words scribbled in thick black ink, the handwriting jagged, unsettling. Almost familiar.

Her breath caught. Fear shot through her veins, cold and sharp. But beneath it, her thighs pressed together, a shameful reflex she immediately tried to fight.

The apartment walls closed in on Claire, thick with silence with only the faint hum of the radiator. She couldn’t breathe the room felt claustrophobic. She slipped into the hall, the air was cooler there she took a deep breath. Her bare feet whispered on the boards as she drifted upward, her heart pounding like she was trespassing in her own building.

On the landing, she caught an older woman with a laundry basket jammed against her hip. Claire’s voice came out raw and urgent.

“Do you know who lives in 3B?”

The woman paused, eyes narrowing. “3B? Empty, I think. Has been for a while.”

Her certainty only deepened Claire’s unease. She muttered thanks and moved on, pulse quickening.

Halfway up the hall, a young guy leaned against the banister, scrolling his phone. “Hi there, do you know who lives in 3B?” she asked, her words sharp and to the point.

He shrugged without looking up. “Dunno. Pretty sure nobody even lives up there.”

Everyone said the same thing: 3B is empty! But Claire knew what she’d heard—what she’d felt. It hadn’t been the building settling or the heating. It was sex—raw, filthy, desperate sex that had dragged her hand between her legs last night until she masterbated staring up at the crack in her ceiling.

Maybe Claire was losing her mind. But she had to find out.

She climbed to the top of the stairs, and down the hall. A plain door with peeling paint, the number 3B crooked on the brass plate. She stood frozen, her pulse so loud it filled her head. Her palms were slick. Then anger surged. She balled her fists and hammered against the wood, the sound echoing down the stairwell.

“I know you’re in there! Show yourself!”

Silence. Not a creak, not a whisper.

Claire’s chest heaved. She dug into her pocket slowly, pulling out the note she’d jammed in there earlier. She uncapped the pen with trembling fingers and scrawled over the back in jagged ink:

Stop this. Leave me alone.”

She shoved it under the door, her hand lingering on the warped threshold, half-praying for someone to grab it from the other side.

Nothing.

Back in her apartment, Claire leaned against her door, trembling, skin hot and damp. Her fear should have been enough to smother the hunger. But it wasn’t.

Claire couldn’t stop replaying it—the invisible couple in 3B, bodies colliding, voices spilling through plaster.

Maybe it was madness. But the truth cut sharply; it had awakened something in Claire.

The Waiting

The word haunted her all day.

Slut…

It followed her from room to room, whispering through her head no matter how she tried to bury it. She folded clothes, scrubbed dishes, and paced the floor until her legs ached, but the note still pulsed inside her, black ink carved into her mind.

“You are our slut.”

Claire wasn’t. She had never been. She built her life on self-control—good grades, careful choices, and perfect steps. But the word clung to her, scraping at that perfect shell until it began to feel less like a taunt and more like a truth she’d spent years trying to deny.

When night fell, she stopped pretending.

Claire lay on her bed, eyes fixed on the ceiling crack, the dark pressing down heavy as if it were listening. She held her breath, waiting for the sounds to return—for the cries and the pounding like the night before.

But the silence was merciless.

Her lips parted. Barely a whisper escaped. “Are you there?”

Nothing.

She shifted restlessly, the ache between her thighs sharper now, her pulse racing. The words came again, louder this time, unsteady.

“Please… are you there?”

Still nothing.

Claire's breath caught, her chest heaving. The silence crushed her until the truth broke out in a rush.

“Yes… I want it, do you hear me? I want to feel it again.”

Claire’s own voice startled her. She froze, trembling. And then, before she could stop herself, the words spilled out, raw and final.

“I want to be your slut,” Claire screamed out.

The confession stunned her. The sound of it hung in the dark like a secret she’d held her whole life. Her lips trembled, but they moved again, softer, pleading.

“Tell me what to do.”

The room gave her nothing back.

Claire lay there disappointed, her chest rising and falling, her pussy throbbing. Fear coiled tight inside her, but hunger pulsed—thick, undeniable, alive beneath it.

And as sleep finally dragged her under, the truth burned inside her.

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Claire no longer feared what waited in 3B. She longed for it.

The Next Day

Claire had begged the night before, whispering into the crack above her bed, waiting for an answer. She wanted them back—the moaning, the cries, the rhythm that made her ache. But silence pressed down, cruel and heavy. And in that silence, she realized it wasn’t just them she wanted. It was herself—the shameless self she’d buried. The crack wasn’t just in the ceiling. It was in her.

Then she saw it.

Another note, slipped under her door.

Her hands trembled as she picked it up. The handwriting was rough, rushed, still with that familiar swirl

“If you’re serious, make yourself cum tonight; with us.”

Heat rushed through Claire, she could feel her panties getting wet already. Proof she hadn’t imagined it. Proof they’d heard—the pleading, the cries, the filthy surrender.

The note became her obsession. She read it on the train, in the bathroom stall, at her desk, her thighs pressed tight. Each time her chest squeezed, her clit throbbed, and her pussy clenched at the thought

On her way home the adult shop Claire always hurried past glowed with its neon sign, but today she couldn’t keep walking by. Her reflection in the glass looked flushed, guilty, desperate. She pushed the door open.

The air smelled of latex and pure lust. Toys gleamed under soft lights, daring Claire to touch them. Claire’s pulse pounded in her ears as she drifted through the aisles. She almost fled, but the words replayed in her head.

Make yourself cum with us.

Her hand landed on one. A realistic looking cock—thick, veined, shamelessly hard even in silicone. Heavy in her palm, smooth at the tip, ridged where it would drag against her walls. Her pussy throbbed just holding the large toy. This was her offering to the couple in 3B.

Claire grabbed it, hurried to the counter, and shoved cash at the clerk without meeting her eyes.

Outside, she clutched the discreet bag to her chest, walking faster, heat prickling across her skin. The toy seemed heavier with every block she walked, like it pulsed through the bag.

When Claire unlocked her apartment door, her whole body was trembling.

The cock was hers now. And tonight, she would use it for them.

Nightfall Finally Came

The hours dragged. Claire tried to read, eat, and lose herself in television, but nothing worked. Heat throbbed through her veins, restless and sharp. The discreet paper bag on her bed seemed to pulse like a living thing, humming with promise.

She stripped slowly—unbuttoning, unzipping—until she stood in just her panties and a thin white tank. Her skin burned, her breath came quick, nipples stiff beneath the cotton. Sliding under the sheets, she fixed her eyes on the jagged crack in the ceiling. It wasn’t plaster anymore. It was her window.

She waited, trembling.

Then it began.

A thump overhead. A creak. Bedsprings groaning.

A woman’s moan—high, breathless.

Claire gasped, lips parting. “I’m here,” she whispered to the ceiling, her body twitching with need.

The moan rose into a broken cry. A man’s grunt followed, rough and guttural, and then the headboard slammed the wall hard enough to startle her.

Claire’s hand slid down. Her panties were soaked, clinging to her pussy, sticky with arousal. She hooked her thumbs under the waistband, tugged them down, baring herself—smooth, swollen, wet. Cool air brushed her folds, and she shivered.

The bag waited. Claire reached for the toy.

Thick. Veined. Heavy like a real cock. Claire slicked it with lube until it gleamed. Above her, the woman shrieked again, the man groaned deep, and the wall shook with brutal rhythm.

Claire spread herself open and rubbed the tip over her pussy. The first push made her squeal —a low, guttural sound she barely recognized as her own. She lingered on the stretch, savouring the feeling , then slid it deeper. Inch by inch until she was trembling, gasping, lips parted in shock at how badly she wanted it.

The pounding above grew savage—springs shrieking, skin smacking, the woman’s cries ripping through the night. Claire matched them, rocking her hips, fucking herself with the toy in time with the couple’s rhythm. Every thrust dragged another sound from her throat, raw and shameless.

She clutched the cock tighter, driving it deeper, while her free hand circled her swollen nub in desperate strokes. Each scream above pushed her closer. Each grunt made her pussy clamp harder around the toy. Her moans rose to meet theirs, spilling into the crack as if she were offering herself to it.

The pressure built up was relentless. Claire’s hips bucked. Sweat slicked her skin. The sheets beneath her grew wet. Then it broke—an orgasm ripped through her, violent and messy.

Claire had never cum like that. Never squirted like that. A hot gush spilled out of her, soaking her thighs, drenching the sheets. She screamed, thrashing, her voice raw.

“F-fuck—yes! Oh god, I’m cumming, I’m—ahhh!”

But it wasn’t enough. The pounding above kept going—and so did Claire. She shoved the toy deeper, slammed it into her pussy harder, wringing another climax out of her quaking body. She came again, harder this time, her juices spraying, her screams colliding with theirs, until it felt like they were all one body, sweat, release, echoing through plaster and cracks.

At last, the toy slipped free with a wet sound. Claire collapsed into her soaked sheets, chest heaving, gaze locked on the jagged crack above.

A weak, blissful smile curved her lips. Her voice was hoarse, reverent, when she whispered, “Thank you, I’m your slut!”

The Next Few Weeks

The notes from 3B kept coming. Not regular, never expected. Some mornings, there’d be nothing, and Claire would pace her apartment, wet and restless, panties sticking to her pussy, begging the crack above to feed her hunger. Other mornings, there’d be a folded slip waiting, and she’d tear it open on her knees, shaking before she even read the words.

The orders started simple. No panties today. Touch yourself at work. Claire obeyed like a schoolgirl caught in a dare. She walked the office bare and dripping, cheeks flushed, or locked herself in a stall to finger herself until she bit her own hand to keep from moaning.

Then the notes got filthier. Wear clamps on your nipples under your blouse all day. Slide a plug into your ass before work and keep it there until you’re home. Masturbate at your desk until your thighs shake, but don’t you dare cum until you’re back under the crack.

She did it all. Plugged, clamped, soaked. Typing with her nipples pinched, her ass stretched, her pussy gushing so hard she had to wad tissues into her panties just to make it through a meeting. The orgasms when she got home were incredible, squirting across her sheets, one after another, until she was exhausted.

Nights became her ritual. The crack wasn’t plaster anymore—it was Claire’s stage, her altar. Above it, the couple’s pounding bed, the woman’s raw cries, the man’s savage grunts. She performed for them, moan for moan, thrust for thrust, giving her orgasms to the ceiling.

The notes grew even filthier, and so did Claire. Her toy drawer overflowed, each new piece a tool for her lust. She fucked herself relentlessly, both holes filled—pussy stuffed, ass stretched—rocking against the mattress until the bed shook. She moaned around her own fingers, tasting her cum, licking it greedily as if it were theirs.

Every orgasm left her trembling, swearing it would be the last. But the notes always came; with them, she sank deeper, dirtier, hungrier than before.

Claire wasn’t just masturbating anymore. She was performing, and the notes gave her permission. She was at the mercy of the invisible couple upstairs. A partner in their sex, even if they never touched her, and she never saw them.

And the more the notes pushed, the more she transformed loving every minute and obsessed when she would get the next command.

The Final Note

The slip was waiting at her door. Like the others, folded neatly, almost ordinary. But the moment Claire picked it up, she felt it—different. Not a request. Not an order. A revelation.

Claire carried it to her bed, her heart pounding and her fingers shaking, and unfolded it.

“Claire, this is what you always wanted.”

Her smile collapsed. The words pierced her. She reread it over and over. Hoping the note might shift into something else. It didn’t.

Her throat closed. “No…” The paper shook in her fist. “No, I didn’t want this. I didn’t want to be this girl. I didn’t want to be a slut.”

Claire paced, trembling, the words clawing up her throat. She tried to choke them back, but they broke free in a hoarse whisper. “I loved it… all of it. The feeling. The orgasms. The naughtiness.” Her eyes widened as she grappled with the truth. “God, I wanted it.”

The notes were too precise, too perfect. Every filthy command echoed Claire’s secret fantasies perfectly—the things she wanted but would never dare speak. Maybe someone upstairs had written them. Perhaps they were only her obsession, spilled onto paper. Either way, they transformed her.

Claire stopped beneath the crack, staring at it like an open mouth. Her voice trembled, part plea, part confession.

“I was a good girl—a simple woman. And you…you made me into this. You showed me who I really am.”

The paper fell from her hand, drifting slowly to the floor. Claire stood trembling, eyes locked on the jagged line in the ceiling above her.

Had there ever been anyone upstairs? Had she written the notes, some darker part of her breaking through? Were the moans and pounding real, or just her desires echoing back at her?

The questions flickered through her, sharp as glass, and then dissolved.

Because, in the end, Claire doesn’t care.

Her lips curved into a smile, soft and filthy, she whisped, “I want more.”

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