Two stories, both within about 1k votes of being famous:
Locked Out of My College Dorm 28,949 views
Homeowners' Association Hussy 29,088
Which will get there first? The latter is probably a bit better as a tightly plotted story, but I like the atmosphere of the first one a lot more.
Locked Out is about a guy attending his 25th college reunion who gets locked out of the dorm room he's staying in and gets saved by a graduating senior.
HOA Hussy is about a neighborhood queen bee who takes her love of the rules too far and pushes a local dad past his breaking point.
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Mike I PROMISE I will hit you up with some more reads soon but I'm really struggling with longer stories at the moment. You're a brilliant writer with the skill to captivate my attention in your storytelling I just have the concentration span of a three year old ?
No worries at all! I was just doing some story pimping. I know exactly how it is. I am engrossed in Stormdog's Glamlur Shots series right now and other things have fallen by the wayside. Apparitions is on my list!
So I'm feeling nostalgic right now. Even trying my hand at poetry, trying to write about the first girl who ever held my heart in her hands. (Don't hold your breath; it's not good yet, and may never be. May never be good, and may never be finished as a poem. Writing poetry is HARD.)
It occurred to me that my college stories are generally on the sweet side, even when the characters get up to sweaty, raunchy fun. I think back to that time as more uncomplicated in certain ways, and it comes out in a generally more innocent tone.
If you're interested in that right now, if you're feeling nostalgic for what things might have felt like the first time, or the second, why don't you check out any of these:
Locked Out - a man returning for his 25th college reunion encounters a college girl about to graduate.
Curious for Cock: Jenny's Dormroom Deepthroat - despite the blunt title, it's a sweet story about a college girl's first blowjob. There are two more installments (linked).
Harder! Harder! Harder! is a story about a college athlete, a runner (natch), who reunites with the high-school coach she'd always had a crush on.
I personally think these are really good, as good as some of my better known, more "accoladed" (not a word, I know) work. But who knows, maybe I'm fooling myself. But if you're so inclined, read them and decide for yourself!
thank you, and have a great night!
It occurred to me that my college stories are generally on the sweet side, even when the characters get up to sweaty, raunchy fun. I think back to that time as more uncomplicated in certain ways, and it comes out in a generally more innocent tone.
If you're interested in that right now, if you're feeling nostalgic for what things might have felt like the first time, or the second, why don't you check out any of these:
Locked Out - a man returning for his 25th college reunion encounters a college girl about to graduate.
Curious for Cock: Jenny's Dormroom Deepthroat - despite the blunt title, it's a sweet story about a college girl's first blowjob. There are two more installments (linked).
Harder! Harder! Harder! is a story about a college athlete, a runner (natch), who reunites with the high-school coach she'd always had a crush on.
I personally think these are really good, as good as some of my better known, more "accoladed" (not a word, I know) work. But who knows, maybe I'm fooling myself. But if you're so inclined, read them and decide for yourself!
thank you, and have a great night!
On a very snowy day in the Northeast US, I thought this might be a fun story to get warm to.
Snow Day
It starts fairly slowly (I guess I was feeling atmospheric), but the sex is I hope all the better for that delayed gratification. It's about a young teacher (early 20s) back teaching at his old high school. A snow day brings him into accidental proximity with the older teacher (early 40s) he'd had a crush on in his student days. I hope you enjoy it!
Snow Day
It starts fairly slowly (I guess I was feeling atmospheric), but the sex is I hope all the better for that delayed gratification. It's about a young teacher (early 20s) back teaching at his old high school. A snow day brings him into accidental proximity with the older teacher (early 40s) he'd had a crush on in his student days. I hope you enjoy it!
Wrote something new, a collaboration w Browncoffee, who was a blast to work with.
It's called The Best Laid Plans. It's about a frustrated woman who takes a friend's advice and meets a stranger in a hotel room. He's meant to be a "safe" fling but things don't always go according to plan. It earned an RR.
I hope you'll read and enjoy!
The Best Laid Plans.
It's called The Best Laid Plans. It's about a frustrated woman who takes a friend's advice and meets a stranger in a hotel room. He's meant to be a "safe" fling but things don't always go according to plan. It earned an RR.
I hope you'll read and enjoy!
The Best Laid Plans.
These images, while not 100% plot accurate, all depict the general feeling that my new story, The Best Laid Plans, a collaboration w browncoffee, evoked in my head. I hope you'll consider reading it!
The Best Laid Plans
The Best Laid Plans
Well, I wrote a poem. Not sure how good it is. Maybe you can let me know. It's for the passion competition.
It's called "Instruments of Pain" and it's about how words are the harshest things. Not sticks and stones or whips and chains.
Be gentle, please. Words hurt. ;)
It's called "Instruments of Pain" and it's about how words are the harshest things. Not sticks and stones or whips and chains.
Be gentle, please. Words hurt. ;)
My newest story, a collaboration between the incomparable VirgoGo and me, is up!
It's called The Hello Blowjob. It's about a woman who can't say no to a dare, or who maybe doesn't actually want to. Say no that is.
I hope you'll check it out. It even has the blue thumb lush seal of approval. It was a blast working with VirgoGo again -- I just realized our most recent collaboration was almost a year ago!
The Hello Blowjob
It's called The Hello Blowjob. It's about a woman who can't say no to a dare, or who maybe doesn't actually want to. Say no that is.
I hope you'll check it out. It even has the blue thumb lush seal of approval. It was a blast working with VirgoGo again -- I just realized our most recent collaboration was almost a year ago!
The Hello Blowjob
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A minor quibble....It was our very first collaboration that happened a year ago -- Extra Virgin. And then in June, we did our second piece about a clear-eyed adulteress, The Price of Admission. You've since "collaborated" with others....which might be why your memory is a bit muddled. It's tough keeping all those partners straight when you're a collaborative slut! Believe me, I know how it is. ;-)
As always, it was a hoot. Can't wait til next time!!
I said "our" last collaboration, which means that the "others" were not part of the equation. Besides, it's only been "other," i.e., singular.
And in my mind, 10 months (june to now) counts as almost one year. Jeez, I can't get away with anything around here.
(btw, Price of Admission, linked above, has a special place in my heart. I think it's the best I (we) have ever done in such a short space.)
Coco Pop
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It's tough keeping all those partners straight when you're a collaborative slut! Believe me, I know how it is. ;-)
Amen to that! I have so many on the go - jeez. Gotta keep them happy with Skittles and stuff. Whew.
Anyway, I think The Hello Blowjob is utterly fantastic. There's a very wonderful thing - the characters could be normal, regular people who just do a mad thing. It's brilliant.
A frothy (soapy?) little piece about a man who has some fun in the shower while his wife talks him through some increasingly improbably erotic scenarios. Good, clean fun.
Whatcha Doing in There?
Whatcha Doing in There?
So I have a request that I think we all make, but I really mean it this time, or at least I hope I do. A nice thing about this site is that the feedback on stories is overwhelmingly positive. People here, in my experience, tend to be polite and supportive. When I post a story, I get a lot of lovely comments, and it's fantastic to read them - they make me feel good.
However, real criticism is rarer. There may be the occasional troll-y "this sucked," but it would seem that for the most part any reviews but raves are few and far between. It can be hard to tell when you've posted something decent vs something really special. Any comment less than a rave and any vote less than a 5 is so rare that I think that's why some people get so bent out of shape about 4s and below.
(Rumpleforskin / Bill, however, is a gem at giving some actual "this didn't work for me and here's why" feedback, usually in a PM).
For the most part, I think I've gotten better about judging my own work. There is one story, however, that is a blind spot for me.
Last Tango With Malena is a story I wrote about a year ago. It was my first story that I tried to write that was maybe not straight-up porn (and there's nothing wrong w straight-up porn -- i write a ton of it!). Sometimes I think it's brilliant -- sometimes I think it's, well, not brilliant.
The sex, admittedly, comes rather late, after a long build-up, and is much more r-rated than x, which a few readers have pointed to as a fault of the story, which is perfectly understandable. It's not a story that is probably going to make you undo your clothes and read one-handed.
Still, that said, could I ask for two related favors, if you're still reading?
Could you read the story, and then tell me what you actually think? Even if, or maybe especially if, you don't like it. I won't be offended, I promise. I really just can't tell if it's good, so-so, brilliant, or some combination. If you'd rather leave your comment in a PM, that's fine too, though I think it would be nice to get a few "negative" comments on the story itself, particularly if the criticism is constructive. Could be a neat experiment.
Last Tango With Malena
Thank you in advance.
Mike
However, real criticism is rarer. There may be the occasional troll-y "this sucked," but it would seem that for the most part any reviews but raves are few and far between. It can be hard to tell when you've posted something decent vs something really special. Any comment less than a rave and any vote less than a 5 is so rare that I think that's why some people get so bent out of shape about 4s and below.
(Rumpleforskin / Bill, however, is a gem at giving some actual "this didn't work for me and here's why" feedback, usually in a PM).
For the most part, I think I've gotten better about judging my own work. There is one story, however, that is a blind spot for me.
Last Tango With Malena is a story I wrote about a year ago. It was my first story that I tried to write that was maybe not straight-up porn (and there's nothing wrong w straight-up porn -- i write a ton of it!). Sometimes I think it's brilliant -- sometimes I think it's, well, not brilliant.
The sex, admittedly, comes rather late, after a long build-up, and is much more r-rated than x, which a few readers have pointed to as a fault of the story, which is perfectly understandable. It's not a story that is probably going to make you undo your clothes and read one-handed.
Still, that said, could I ask for two related favors, if you're still reading?
Could you read the story, and then tell me what you actually think? Even if, or maybe especially if, you don't like it. I won't be offended, I promise. I really just can't tell if it's good, so-so, brilliant, or some combination. If you'd rather leave your comment in a PM, that's fine too, though I think it would be nice to get a few "negative" comments on the story itself, particularly if the criticism is constructive. Could be a neat experiment.
Last Tango With Malena
Thank you in advance.
Mike
Just posted (yesterday) a new story about a married couple whose sex steps up in intensity after they attend a wedding. They know each other well, but can still occasionally surprise each other. There's bondage, oral, anal, and a even a little women's beach volleyball. Oh yeah, and love and reluctance.
I can't tell if it's any good (and its scores range from 2 to 5).
Would love to know what you think.
A Wedding, a Tie, and a Test of Wills
I can't tell if it's any good (and its scores range from 2 to 5).
Would love to know what you think.
A Wedding, a Tie, and a Test of Wills
I've written a story about a decadent couple that sets its sights on seducing a reluctant college girl. I think it just may be pretty decent, and I hope you give it a shot.
The Corruption of Kat
The Corruption of Kat
Some Readings in Reluctance.
Without really intending it, I've written two Reluctance stories in a row, which were quite different.
It made me look back to all the stories I've written in that category, which are in a range of the genre. Some of them are old-ish, but I think pretty good, and if you enjoyed the new ones, maybe you'd like the older ones too.
In order of publication.
Parent-Teacher Conference. A young mom prostitutes herself to her son's teacher to make the money she needs to be able to send him on an important school trip.
Turnabout - A predatory professor grooms a beautiful college girl into sexual favors in exchange for higher grades, but doesn't realize he may have picked on the wrong girl.
Homeowners-Association Hussy - The queen bee of a HOA goes too far in enforcing her punctilious rules and pushes a single dad over the edge. Recommended Read
Gold-Medal Whore - A dedicated, even obsessed, track runner does whatever it takes to win gold at the Games, no matter what the obstacle. Editors' Pick
A Wedding, a Tie, and a Test of Wills - The reluctance here is more a question of the internal struggles a couple, even this loving couple, has when each wants to win, and neither wants to give in to the other.
The Corruption of Kat - the newest one. A decadent, wealthy couple seduces a reluctant college girl. Recommended Read
If you like the category, I think there a few there you may like.
Without really intending it, I've written two Reluctance stories in a row, which were quite different.
It made me look back to all the stories I've written in that category, which are in a range of the genre. Some of them are old-ish, but I think pretty good, and if you enjoyed the new ones, maybe you'd like the older ones too.
In order of publication.
Parent-Teacher Conference. A young mom prostitutes herself to her son's teacher to make the money she needs to be able to send him on an important school trip.
Turnabout - A predatory professor grooms a beautiful college girl into sexual favors in exchange for higher grades, but doesn't realize he may have picked on the wrong girl.
Homeowners-Association Hussy - The queen bee of a HOA goes too far in enforcing her punctilious rules and pushes a single dad over the edge. Recommended Read
Gold-Medal Whore - A dedicated, even obsessed, track runner does whatever it takes to win gold at the Games, no matter what the obstacle. Editors' Pick
A Wedding, a Tie, and a Test of Wills - The reluctance here is more a question of the internal struggles a couple, even this loving couple, has when each wants to win, and neither wants to give in to the other.
The Corruption of Kat - the newest one. A decadent, wealthy couple seduces a reluctant college girl. Recommended Read
If you like the category, I think there a few there you may like.
At the risk of sounding like a petulant asshole, I thought I'd share the backstory of a story that by two metrics, views and votes, is my second most popular or successful story.
About a year ago I wrote a story I was very fond of, a story of tension and deferred gratification, and very little sex, which had the further disadvantage of being in the "love stories" category. It got very few views, which at the time annoyed me, even though I fully understood "why" this was the case.
So I set out to write a popular story. I said to myself, "ok, this one will be . It will have reluctance, first time, anal, teenagers, etc etc." I was feeling peevish and maybe a little sorry for myself (like I said, petulant asshole).
But what happened as I started writing was that I got really into it, and I wrote something that I am very proud of, and which I think is more than the sum of the genre and tags. I just re-read it and I think it's very hot
If the " " worries you, it's but not what I think of as yucky or abusive . It's about two 18-yr-olds whose parents marry each other. So they only become step-siblings when they're already 18. They haven't grown up as sister and brother.
I riffed a little on the idea of it all happening in an attic (I.e., Flowers in the Attic).
I hope you'll check it out if you missed it a year or so ago.
Steps in the Attic.
About a year ago I wrote a story I was very fond of, a story of tension and deferred gratification, and very little sex, which had the further disadvantage of being in the "love stories" category. It got very few views, which at the time annoyed me, even though I fully understood "why" this was the case.
So I set out to write a popular story. I said to myself, "ok, this one will be . It will have reluctance, first time, anal, teenagers, etc etc." I was feeling peevish and maybe a little sorry for myself (like I said, petulant asshole).
But what happened as I started writing was that I got really into it, and I wrote something that I am very proud of, and which I think is more than the sum of the genre and tags. I just re-read it and I think it's very hot
If the " " worries you, it's but not what I think of as yucky or abusive . It's about two 18-yr-olds whose parents marry each other. So they only become step-siblings when they're already 18. They haven't grown up as sister and brother.
I riffed a little on the idea of it all happening in an attic (I.e., Flowers in the Attic).
I hope you'll check it out if you missed it a year or so ago.
Steps in the Attic.
The Right Rev of Lush
Ocean Runner wrote: At the risk of sounding like a petulant asshole....
To which Rumple writes: Mike, you petulant asshole, you!;)
But semi-seriously, I'll swear on the head of my favorite Playboy centerfold that I read this story. But if so, I didn't vote or comment. No statistical loss to you or your story, not with over 50 votes, an average score of 5.00, and 50K of reads.
Anyway, if I kept a story cue, this would be #1. Not having one, I'll be getting over to it this weekend and give it the old RVC (read, vote, comment) , I swear.
To which Rumple writes: Mike, you petulant asshole, you!;)
But semi-seriously, I'll swear on the head of my favorite Playboy centerfold that I read this story. But if so, I didn't vote or comment. No statistical loss to you or your story, not with over 50 votes, an average score of 5.00, and 50K of reads.
Anyway, if I kept a story cue, this would be #1. Not having one, I'll be getting over to it this weekend and give it the old RVC (read, vote, comment) , I swear.
RUMPLATIONS: AwesomeHonky Tonk and Cyber Bar
Home of the Lush "IN" crowd: indecent, intoxicated, and insolvent
a place to gossip, share news, talk sports, pimp a story, piss & moan, or just grab a drink. Check it out.
Writing is not necessarily something to be ashamed of, but do it in private and wash your hands afterwords. -- ROBERT HEINLEIN
Home of the Lush "IN" crowd: indecent, intoxicated, and insolvent
a place to gossip, share news, talk sports, pimp a story, piss & moan, or just grab a drink. Check it out.
Writing is not necessarily something to be ashamed of, but do it in private and wash your hands afterwords. -- ROBERT HEINLEIN
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Ocean Runner wrote: At the risk of sounding like a petulant asshole....
To which Rumple writes: Mike, you petulant asshole, you!;)
But semi-seriously, I'll swear on the head of my favorite Playboy centerfold that I read this story. But if so, I didn't vote or comment. No statistical loss to you or your story, not with over 50 votes, an average score of 5.00, and 50K of reads.
Anyway, if I kept a story cue, this would be #1. Not having one, I'll be getting over to it this weekend and give it the old RVC (read, vote, comment) , I swear.
Thanks, Bill! Looking forward to seeing what you think about my tale, whenever you get to it.
In the meantime, I have something new up, still on the front page as of my posting this...
I have a new story out, a frothy little fun thing, only my second entry in the Group Sex category (and, with six characters, by far the most I've had in a sex scene). I wrote it quickly, which may show, but it was one of those fun things where the situation was fully formed when I started writing. I hope you enjoy it if you check it out. It's about a very superstitious hockey fan who finds herself in the position of having to strip down at a party in order not to hurt the chances of her NHL team winning the Stanley Cup. The title (and it's just supposed to be funny -- it has nothing to do with its allusion) is "Two Girls, One (Stanley) Cup"
Would love to know what you think. Thanks!
Couldn't resist mining some of the warnings in one of those "don't write erotica like this" and writing a sort of porn parody. It's supposed to be bad and funny. Maybe it'll make you smile. It lives in the world where all women have 36DD tits, and all men have at least 9'' cocks. And everyone just fucks at the drop of a hat.
A Laundry List, and Other Sins: A Porn Parody
One thing that can be said for it is that it's not long ("that's NOT what she said...").
A Laundry List, and Other Sins: A Porn Parody
One thing that can be said for it is that it's not long ("that's NOT what she said...").
The brilliant, sexy, talented HeraTeleia and I have written a new story. It's about two writers of erotica (where on earth do we get our inspiration?) who get together for some raunchy fun, letting their overdeveloped imaginations run wild.
Losing It
I hope you'll check it out and tell us what you think. (Oh, and it has an RR.)
Losing It
I hope you'll check it out and tell us what you think. (Oh, and it has an RR.)
Top Shot
Mike, you're the one who is brilliant and sexy. And good. So very damn good. Did I mention it was good? It was good. You're good.
Stop with the complimenting of the Canadian who has only managed to turn out 15 stories in 3 1/2 years on Lush--two of those stories, "Losing It" and "Blood Lust", being posted in the space of less than seven days.
Stop with the complimenting of the Canadian who has only managed to turn out 15 stories in 3 1/2 years on Lush--two of those stories, "Losing It" and "Blood Lust", being posted in the space of less than seven days.
Want to spend some time wallowing in a Recommended Read? Pick one! Or two! Or seven!
Just saw that I have a few stories nearing arbitrary fame.
If you want to check them out, that would be cool.
Harder! Harder! Harder!
About a college runner with her former coach.
https://www.lushstories.com/stories/college-sex/harder-harder-harder.aspx
Gold-Medal Whore
A professional athlete is willing to do anything to win gold.
https://www.lushstories.com/stories/reluctance/goldmedal-whore.aspx
Casting Amber
A gonzo porn audition (casting-couch style) is more than it seems.
https://www.lushstories.com/stories/hardcore/casting-amber.aspx
If you want to check them out, that would be cool.
Harder! Harder! Harder!
About a college runner with her former coach.
https://www.lushstories.com/stories/college-sex/harder-harder-harder.aspx
Gold-Medal Whore
A professional athlete is willing to do anything to win gold.
https://www.lushstories.com/stories/reluctance/goldmedal-whore.aspx
Casting Amber
A gonzo porn audition (casting-couch style) is more than it seems.
https://www.lushstories.com/stories/hardcore/casting-amber.aspx
So, after dithering far too long, I was able to get a comp entry in to the "filth" competition, and here it is.
I'd very much appreciate your help in getting to the necessary number of votes for it to move on.
Cougar Clickbait is the story of a woman in her late 30s whose online affair backfires when her stepson catfishes her, and then makes her pay for his silence in depraved and increasingly filthy ways.
For anyone concerned about the stepmom/stepson stuff, it's set up so that he was already in college when she met / married his father. I didn't say that explicitly in the story, but it's quite clear she didn't have any part in raising him. It's not that kind of .
I hope you enjoy, if you have time to check it out.
I'd very much appreciate your help in getting to the necessary number of votes for it to move on.
Cougar Clickbait is the story of a woman in her late 30s whose online affair backfires when her stepson catfishes her, and then makes her pay for his silence in depraved and increasingly filthy ways.
For anyone concerned about the stepmom/stepson stuff, it's set up so that he was already in college when she met / married his father. I didn't say that explicitly in the story, but it's quite clear she didn't have any part in raising him. It's not that kind of .
I hope you enjoy, if you have time to check it out.
Thought I'd bump this, just in case it helps. I really can't tell if this story is any good, so maybe you can let me know if you haven't had a chance to check it out. It's my entry into the still pending filth competition.
Cougar Clickbait
Cougar Clickbait