

The Wild Girl anthology need not be read in any order but does take place in the following timeframe
Wild at Heart- 1968. The story of Dani’s Great Aunt Evie.
https://www.lushstories.com/stories/first-time/wild-at-heart
Wild Oats. Part 1&2. -2021. Dani is 16 and sets her sights on her stepfather.
https://www.lushstories.com/stories/taboo/wild-oats-part-1
https://www.lushstories.com/stories/taboo/wild-oats-part-2
Wild Child. 2025. Dani is now 20 years old.
Quote by Milik_The_Red
Most of my stories are long, my last being almost 12 thousand words. I'll usually spend 3 to 5 weeks on each story from typing the first word to time of submission. Fortunalty for me, I love to write and don't mind long hours at the keyboard.
My poems though are a completly differant story. Both of the poems I submitted were written in about an hour.
Quote by chefkathleenQuote by Milik_The_Red
Most of my stories are long, my last being almost 12 thousand words. I'll usually spend 3 to 5 weeks on each story from typing the first word to time of submission. Fortunalty for me, I love to write and don't mind long hours at the keyboard.
My poems though are a completly differant story. Both of the poems I submitted were written in about an hour.
I was thinking that. If it's a short story that's one thing. If it's a novel that's a whole other "story". LOL
The Wild Girl anthology need not be read in any order but does take place in the following timeframe
Wild at Heart- 1968. The story of Dani’s Great Aunt Evie.
https://www.lushstories.com/stories/first-time/wild-at-heart
Wild Oats. Part 1&2. -2021. Dani is 16 and sets her sights on her stepfather.
https://www.lushstories.com/stories/taboo/wild-oats-part-1
https://www.lushstories.com/stories/taboo/wild-oats-part-2
Wild Child. 2025. Dani is now 20 years old.
Quote by PrivateEye
I write stories under different "Pen" names.
Depending who I am at the time, the stories differ in length and
the time I spend writing them.
Luckily, I took "typing class" in High School.
I have known a few people that can type faster that me with two
fingers, and I think having both hands on the keyboard at the
same time if beginning to be a thing of the past.
From what I see on the television and internet, all you need is
your thumbs.
Using your thumbs comes in handy while eating a "Big Mac",
smoking a cigarette and sending a a message to your friend
sitting in the car next to you.
The Wild Girl anthology need not be read in any order but does take place in the following timeframe
Wild at Heart- 1968. The story of Dani’s Great Aunt Evie.
https://www.lushstories.com/stories/first-time/wild-at-heart
Wild Oats. Part 1&2. -2021. Dani is 16 and sets her sights on her stepfather.
https://www.lushstories.com/stories/taboo/wild-oats-part-1
https://www.lushstories.com/stories/taboo/wild-oats-part-2
Wild Child. 2025. Dani is now 20 years old.
Quote by chefkathleenQuote by Milik_The_Red
Most of my stories are long, my last being almost 12 thousand words. I'll usually spend 3 to 5 weeks on each story from typing the first word to time of submission. Fortunalty for me, I love to write and don't mind long hours at the keyboard.
My poems though are a completly differant story. Both of the poems I submitted were written in about an hour.
I was thinking that. If it's a short story that's one thing. If it's a novel that's a whole other "story". LOL

Quote by chefkathleenQuote by Milik_The_Red
Most of my stories are long, my last being almost 12 thousand words. I'll usually spend 3 to 5 weeks on each story from typing the first word to time of submission. Fortunalty for me, I love to write and don't mind long hours at the keyboard.
My poems though are a completly differant story. Both of the poems I submitted were written in about an hour.
I was thinking that. If it's a short story that's one thing. If it's a novel that's a whole other "story". LOL

Quote by Exakta66
I don't write "rough drafts" and then go back through them. I sit there and get it right the first time.
Quote by Exakta66Quote by chefkathleenQuote by Milik_The_Red
Most of my stories are long, my last being almost 12 thousand words. I'll usually spend 3 to 5 weeks on each story from typing the first word to time of submission. Fortunalty for me, I love to write and don't mind long hours at the keyboard.
My poems though are a completly differant story. Both of the poems I submitted were written in about an hour.
I was thinking that. If it's a short story that's one thing. If it's a novel that's a whole other "story". LOL
Have you done a novel? And how long did that take???
That's what I'm attempting to do now...right now it is nine pages of notes and two opening sentences...seems novel writing is a whole different animal...
And I agree with others here that poems are usually fairly quick...though it took me three days to do "I'd Do It For You"...longer than any story...
Later,
Alan.
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The Wild Girl anthology need not be read in any order but does take place in the following timeframe
Wild at Heart- 1968. The story of Dani’s Great Aunt Evie.
https://www.lushstories.com/stories/first-time/wild-at-heart
Wild Oats. Part 1&2. -2021. Dani is 16 and sets her sights on her stepfather.
https://www.lushstories.com/stories/taboo/wild-oats-part-1
https://www.lushstories.com/stories/taboo/wild-oats-part-2
Wild Child. 2025. Dani is now 20 years old.
Quote by freefallin1309Quote by Exakta66
I don't write "rough drafts" and then go back through them. I sit there and get it right the first time.
Anyone thinking they do it right the first time should read it again just because of their overconfidence.
I hate to pick you out of the crowd Exakta, but you sit amongst a crowd of authors who do check their writing and tell them you do it better because you "get it right the first time"; insinuating that the others do not do it correctly.
I've only read one of your stories (The Woman in the Blue Chair), but you misused the word "passed" instead of "past" since it is the past participle of the verb “to pass” when someone walked by something, "walked" putting it in the past.
Another misused word is "caste" which is a societal term and not to cast light on something.
**"Oh fuck." I thought to myself.** Oh Fuck should not be in quotations, it is a thought and not spoken words.
And a few commas were needed where there were none, and a few semi-colons in place of a few commas or periods would work better as well.
This is from one story of no proof reading. If you read the story after finishing, you will notice things that spell-checker's do not.
Sorry, no one is perfect.

Quote by Exakta66Quote by freefallin1309Quote by Exakta66
I don't write "rough drafts" and then go back through them. I sit there and get it right the first time.
Anyone thinking they do it right the first time should read it again just because of their overconfidence.
I hate to pick you out of the crowd Exakta, but you sit amongst a crowd of authors who do check their writing and tell them you do it better because you "get it right the first time"; insinuating that the others do not do it correctly.
I've only read one of your stories (The Woman in the Blue Chair), but you misused the word "passed" instead of "past" since it is the past participle of the verb “to pass” when someone walked by something, "walked" putting it in the past.
Another misused word is "caste" which is a societal term and not to cast light on something.
**"Oh fuck." I thought to myself.** Oh Fuck should not be in quotations, it is a thought and not spoken words.
And a few commas were needed where there were none, and a few semi-colons in place of a few commas or periods would work better as well.
This is from one story of no proof reading. If you read the story after finishing, you will notice things that spell-checker's do not.
Sorry, no one is perfect.
That's pretty much what I was trying to say. I would like to go back and edit my stories, but am hesitating because I don't want to burden the staff with having to re read all of it just to correct typos.
Hey FF...never implying that I was pefect or that one way is really better than another, just the way I do it...but, thanks for pointing out things that needed to be corrected...I mentioned in another forum post recently on editing, that I have a hard time correcting my own errors because my mind seems to automatically correct them as I read my own stuff, no matter how many times I try...
Actually, shouldn't 'Oh fuck' be in single quotes? I did notice that one later...
Alan.
The Wild Girl anthology need not be read in any order but does take place in the following timeframe
Wild at Heart- 1968. The story of Dani’s Great Aunt Evie.
https://www.lushstories.com/stories/first-time/wild-at-heart
Wild Oats. Part 1&2. -2021. Dani is 16 and sets her sights on her stepfather.
https://www.lushstories.com/stories/taboo/wild-oats-part-1
https://www.lushstories.com/stories/taboo/wild-oats-part-2
Wild Child. 2025. Dani is now 20 years old.
Quote by Exakta66
I don't even read the story until after it posts, and then only to correct any errors I might have missed...the site I post on first allows a 24 hour edit period.
Quote by Exakta66
Hey FF...never implying that I was pefect or that one way is really better than another, just the way I do it...but, thanks for pointing out things that needed to be corrected...I mentioned in another forum post recently on editing, that I have a hard time correcting my own errors because my mind seems to automatically correct them as I read my own stuff, no matter how many times I try...
Actually, shouldn't 'Oh fuck' be in single quotes? I did notice that one later...
Alan.
Quote by Exakta66
I sit there and get it right the first time. In fact, once I type the last word and put the date, I post the story on another site. I don't even read the story until after it posts, and then only to correct any errors I might have missed...the site I post on first allows a 24 hour edit period.

Quote by LadyX
I hear all that Alan but get a damn proofreader before you submit it. I bet you would get more readers and less attitude if you took that one simple step. As for me I got two people proofing after a moderator was nice enough to tell me to fix my mistakes before they rejected it. That goodwill dont last forever though baby, so now I have others help me on the back end too. Okay I said enough here but that just pissed me off when I read it. Sorry everyone.

Quote by Bunny12
Can't really vote in the pole it varies so much. I can whip out the poems pretty quick but the stories are a whole other animal. Some in a day some a whole month or more as the inspiration hits me.