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CarltonStJames
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Good day,

Hope everyone is alright. Life is stressful, so I hope you are all experiencing some level of joy to counter it. Blessings.

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Yes! yes

Because I have more of that shit inside me… biggrin

More dark erotica. Yeth, yeth!!

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I echo this. Like, I think dating Angela White, Ana Foxxx or Misty Stone for a bit would be cool, but long term... meh.

Changing Misty Stone out for Kira Noir. She sounds and looks like fun, likes wrestling and obviously can fuck. I think she's more attractive now that she's older too.

I'll plug myself and say "The Shadows Of Doubt And How They Fuck Us."

If this thread stays alive and I remember more, I will post.

I just published a Sugar Daddy/Baby story, and now have to select what I will edit next. It will be from a pile drafted anywhere from January 2025, going back to a year or two earlier than that probably.

Fact: I haven't drafted a single story since my Island comp entry. Anything you have seen published since that, I had drafted eons before that.

Rather than use AI, do tons of novel/short story reading to get used to prose. Watch some YouTube videos to assist with learning to write. The same way you are creating outlines and feeding AI, you can do drafts from your own mind, utilizing said created outlines.

Edit those completed drafts. Review for plot and character logic. Edit for wordiness and such. Long story short, use what is within you and tell AI to kick rocks.

My first comp entry is still my favourite story I have ever written. One Last Chance still hits for me whenever I skim it. I think I am a better writer now and compared to almost 6 years ago, but something about that story shows so much heart in my opinion. It had a score of 28, which is just below my batting average(cricket) so nothing monumental.

What is popular with the masses almost never aligns with what we consider our best. RDJ says Kiss Kiss Bang Bang is the best movie he's ever done. How many people even know about that film?

One Last Chance

"I’ve got to try Syd. Fuck it, I need to try.”

Fantasy & Sci-Fi

I'd have angry sex with Kristi. Don't care for her as a person, but it's just a fuck. 🤷🏾‍♂️

Clapping Cardi B's giant BBL cheeks.

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What? Feeling a lil... ya know.

My reading has dropped a ton, but Kimmi, techgoddess, sprite, WannabeWordsmith never disappoint. RowanThorn has jumped my rankings with my current reading of his Pussycat Park series also.

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Lastly, if you write multi-chapter series, you can expect diminishing returns on views, likes and comments. This is the voice of bitter experience speaking. Lol. The longer the series, the greater the diminishing returns. In 16 years, I've only ever had one person read and comment on all eight chapters of one of my multi-chapter stories. That's why I don't write series anymore.

A big reason I never moved forward with tons of series ideas I had in my head too. Doesn't feel worth it, especially since series are way harder to write and edit.

Sigh, I want to dive face first into these booties in this thread 😭.

Good morning everyone,

Hope your weekends are going well. I procrastinate too much for a proper collaboration to work 😆.

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Sick as a dog most of the day, but I sucked it up and helped Kevin put our new bed together. Yes, for those inquiring minds, we did break our bed and had to get a new one. (That feels like a micro or flash erotica waiting to be written)

Anyway, I'm off to bed. Hoping to wake up feeling better.

Firstly, I hope you get better. Secondly, that bolded part turned me on, because how hard were you all fucking? 💀😭

But most importantly, get better. Being sick is infuriating.

Dragon Ball is turning 40 this year. Whoop-whoop!!!

And this year marks 30 years since it first hit North America. 28 years since it debuted on Toonami.

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I look forward to catching up next week, currently at the gate waiting to fly home from Barbados. A cup of tea (Yorkshire of course) while I wait. Thank you. 😎

Hope you had a good time.

Good morning everyone,

About to sort out breakfast. Have a good to great day today.

I say go for it.

Leaning more erotic than explicit ain't really my thing, but there is absolutely an audience here for it. An audience who wants something more "Days of Our Lives" than "Booty Talk #25".

Congratulations on 300 stories, Kimmi. A feat not to be understated because that is a ton of writing!