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GrushaVashnadze
12 hours ago
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Dear Lushies,
I really wasn't sure about writing anything for the current competition. I have been told that my stories are too "vulgar" and "disgusting" - and now they ask for a "debauched" story! I ask you, how do you square that circle?! Well, I thought I'd buck the trend by writing a gentle, lovely, heart-warming tale about marital love and fidelity. And here it is:
Our Porge
There really is nothing vulgar or disgusting about it, I promise... Though it is, without doubt, "debauched"! Go figure... ;-)
xxx Grusha
I really wasn't sure about writing anything for the current competition. I have been told that my stories are too "vulgar" and "disgusting" - and now they ask for a "debauched" story! I ask you, how do you square that circle?! Well, I thought I'd buck the trend by writing a gentle, lovely, heart-warming tale about marital love and fidelity. And here it is:
Our Porge
There really is nothing vulgar or disgusting about it, I promise... Though it is, without doubt, "debauched"! Go figure... ;-)
xxx Grusha
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Quote by LucaByDesign
Really, Grusha? I'd never have guessed.
Ha ha! Even I can get guilt-tripped by all the powers-that-be telling me that my writing is "vulgar" and "disgusting"... for a while... [smiles innocently]
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Most people want to jerk off to a story that’s dirty and nasty.
Porn stories are what readers want.
Thanks, Mysteria, for being honest and unpretentious enough to say that. I frequently need reminding of that fact.
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Quote by LucaByDesign
Why the name, though? I know its provenance but why did you choose it for this account?
I've just always been a Brecht fan, and thought Grusha Vashnadze would work better than Polly Peachum or Mother Courage. Pirate Jenny might have been good though, come to think of it...
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Also, how do those who layer large social issues and themes over the plot plan it out?
Do you decide before you write that you want religion/ politics/ insert a large overarching theme here to be the background noise to all the action in the forefront, or do you find it naturally reveals itself to you while you tinker around with the first draft?
The original inspiration for my Alison Goes to London series came, as so many things do, from Harry Potter. I was thinking about it for a long time before I dared to start writing. I was wondering whether, if there were a "Hogwarts School of Fucking", what it would look like. Then, the next question was: What sort of world would it have to be to host a such an Academy? It could not be a magically hidden school, but could only subsist in a sex-obsessed future where no-holds-barred fucking is the pinnacle of human ambition and respectability - hence, my imagined 2050 post-"Enlightenment" world, where this series is set.
But then - what would be the unintended consequences of such a social order? What/who would be the casualties? What would happen to love - in a world where the link between love and sex is completely broken? And what would happen to spirituality - in a world where physical pleasure is everything? And how would this affect the young people who grow up in this world, not knowing that their parents loved each other, or them, or that they too might face such hard choices in their lives? And how would such a society control people's minds enough to maintain the status quo?
In sum, I created a world in my mind. Then I wondered what sort of people might inhabit such a world. And then, what would happen to such people as they encountered each other? So, for me, the characters and the world they live in came first - and everything else, including the sex, was a consequence of that.
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I wrote on Literotica about seven six ago under a female pen name for the reasons this thread is investigating.
It received almost double the reads one of my male-authored stories would garner in the first few weeks.
I'm sure there are guys writing as girls here on Lush — not catfishing (or maybe they are), but for the reasons that we are discussing.
Fascinating, Luca. I had hoped to be able to post stories here without revealing my sex - but Lush won't permit that, and I'm really bad at lying. Hence my female user name and the big pair of tits in my avatar - though it is clear on my profile that I am male.
Now that I've got to know some people here, I am glad I didn't try the gender subterfuge: it means I can be more honest with friends, which I hope is (often) reciprocated.
Nowt so queer as folk...
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I can assure you that she and I haven't used a double headed dildo, let alone a time travel one and restarted the universe via a visit to the garden of Eden.
You disappoint me, Annie!
Sh, don't tell anyone though - but, despite the evidence here, I'm not actually an opera-singing dickgirl...
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You'll know if you got your fetish story right is when someone with a smoking fetish comments on your story and tells you so.
Ha ha! Well, Lushies are of course far too respectable to admit if they have a smoking fetish [winks]. But someone on the smoking fetish stories subreddit (how niche can you get, eh?) wrote, "Wow this is one hot story x" - which is a good start...
Thanks, Morgan.
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In Fetish Fiction, the featured FETISH is detailed.
In Fetish Fiction -- The FETISH drives the plot.
A Fetish ISN'T Play.
A Fetish is a very personal, very individual, and a very private APPETITE. Fetishes are something one NEEDS like food, water, or air to breathe -- to get off, and that 'getting off' ISN'T always Sexual.
Where the Fetish comes into play, every thought, feeling, and sensation that focuses on that fetish MUST be written in loving detail.
Where will this Fetish take your main character? What will become of them because of this Fetish? Will it make their lives better -- or worse? Will they find a safe outlet to satisfy their Fetish, or make a terrible error in judgment that destroys them? Do you want a happy ending, or a tragic one?
A Fetish isn't something that goes away. A Fetish is NOT an addiction -- though a Kink can be! Fetishes are rooted deep in the psyche and while a shrink might be able to find the cause, there is No Cure.
Those of us that have fetishes really appreciate it when someone actually tells the Truth.
What wonderful advice from Morgan, which I have only recently discovered - but which, I am happy to say, chimes entirely with my own thoughts when I wrote my smoking fetish story A Worthless Filthy Fucking Smoking Trash Cunt Whore. The smoking fetish is a bit niche these days - but my experience of it completely chimes with Morgan's advice. Thank you, Morgan, for crystallising these thoughts so cogently. I hope that in my story I have managed, in some way, to "tell the Truth".
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even Grusha, he of the copious snot and cum farting in his stories, said he found it disgusting and depraved (he did also say he was enraptured, in case the other adjectives are not what you're after in a story).
One mod told me recently that some people love my stories, whilst others find them disgusting. Which begs the question: Why can one not do both, i.e. love a story and be disgusted at the same time (in the same way that one might love a horror story whilst being terrified)?
BTW, whilst I am indeed fond of anal gaping, whiteshit and the like in my stories (oh yeah, and snot, I admit it), I am also very fond of religion. I challenge you to find another author on Lush who quotes the Bible as much as I do...
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"Attention whore"? Perish the thought, Annie! Just inspirational - and a fine friend. Thanks for being there.
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those writers I look up to on here like GrushaVashnadze and Sprite.
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That's very kind of you, Emma! First time I've ever been in the same subordinate clause as Sprite; I hope she doesn't mind...?
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you're a dead man. sorry, but that's just how it is. blame Emma.
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Are you gonna deprive us of Grusha's (sight unseen) filth because of your silly pride (no pun intended – much)?
What kind of taste do you have?
Oh, wait – you and your wife were the ones with the horse dildo lamp, weren't you?
It's OK, James, I've always wanted to share a subordinate clause with Sprite...
Better than sharing the horse dildo, anyway...
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Sprite's phone number on restroom walls.
Ah, I thought I recognised it from somewhere...
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Whoa, you two are serious! I don't go to that extent, but I appreciate people who do. I tend to stick with what I know so that I don't have to spend too much time doing research. I even got in trouble about what order the jam and cream go when eating a scone, so I can imagine the hell someone could take about misplacing Star Wars in 1975!
Yeah, sorry about the cream and jam thing, K - it's a British obsession...
However, on dates and realism: my Alison Goes to London series is set in London in 2050. So I had a calendar of 2050 up, to make sure the days of the week, and dates of holidays, were right. And, through lockdown, I was googling London street images, trying to imagine what it would be like 30 years hence. Sad, isn't it?
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Grusha, do you have any filth left in you after your Alison series? I hope so! Cunty swear you will enter this one! Haha!
You too are very kind, Kimmi. But, you know, filthy is never my starting-point. Alison was filthy because it was set in a fucked-up loveless dystopia; and it was the characters' journey to either escape or accommodate themselves to that world. Two Angels was filthy because it was set in Sodom; but it was a story about maternal love.
But I'll do my best - cunty-promise!
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those writers I look up to on here like GrushaVashnadze and Sprite.
That's very kind of you, Emma! First time I've ever been in the same subordinate clause as Sprite; I hope she doesn't mind...?
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Skinny dipping with Vanessa? Hmmm... So long as she promises there are no tentacled monsters lurking in the water. Or vampires. Or serial killers. Other than that, that's fine...
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Here is a story (with a recommended read) about fucking on a church altar:
https://www.lushstories.com/stories/straight-sex/-alison-goes-to-london-chapter-17-.aspx
https://www.lushstories.com/stories/straight-sex/-alison-goes-to-london-chapter-17-.aspx