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From a guy, just say it straight up as you like. i simply dont attempt contact with women who quite plainly say they have no interest in friend requests etc from men. most sensible blokes wont be offended.
lol...the more persistant the guy will get it once you tell him to fuck off if hes still having trouble getting it!.
good luck and fair play to you...shit im good with women or men hitting me up. not for everyone though!.
lol...the more persistant the guy will get it once you tell him to fuck off if hes still having trouble getting it!.
good luck and fair play to you...shit im good with women or men hitting me up. not for everyone though!.
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Upset?...nah not really. I was having a whinge, thing is, I do get that if there wern't some basic rules/guidelines on the members writing to keep it up to some sort of standard the REALLY GOOD stuff would likely get sidelined by stuff that is just overly loud and tasteless...fair enough. There are other sites seemingly dripping in erotic fiction but its all to a very poor standard....NOT on here though!.
Oh yeah it is Bosch avrgblkgrl...the garden of earthly delight...good pick up!.
You know what you've inspired me...i'll get onto something!.
xx
Oh yeah it is Bosch avrgblkgrl...the garden of earthly delight...good pick up!.
You know what you've inspired me...i'll get onto something!.
xx
Quote by avrgblkgrl
JB, you sound a little upset and I'm sorry for that. I also understand, and I bet a lot of the writers here no matter what level they are on understand too. Everyone has experienced that type of frustration--specifically after spending "5 to 7 hours crafting" and "drawing" a story only to have it sent back for corrections. Writing is sensitive stuff.
You are absolutely right though, there are some extremely fine writers here. I'm learning from them all the time. I read some of my earlier stuff and cringe from embarrassment. This is an excellent place to learn. The volunteers that verify submissions and do slight editing put a lot into learning the art of writing. Establishing consistency as far as requirements are concerned among all our writers (including the ones doing the editing) is also important to them. Keep in mind too that correcting your own errors when they have been pointed out to you is actually a quicker way to get rid of bad writing habits. We all have some bad habits when it comes to our own writing--even when we are in a "humanities doctorate mode". Believe me.
Here's the thick of it: When writer's block hits or you feel stifled, it is an excellence chance to just sit back and research some of your bad habits. Go through your edits and suggestions from the staff or friends, and make lists of your own weaknesses. (I actually wish I would pay more attention to my own before I press the publish button.) Get something like Strunk and White's The Elements of Style and read it like you would a novel. Write all in the margins and underline shit that catches your attention or you just never knew. It will make you bold.
Boldness is needed when, as you said, "we as a society reach an entirely different level of understanding when we set aside the rules of convention...particularly in the pursuit of STORY." Pursue that story but don't ignore grammar, structure or punctuation in the process, it only distracts from all the hard work you put into that unique story. That's "5-7" hours you won't get back. Phonetics is nice in theatrical manuscripts if that's what the actor needs, but the beauty of writing really establishes itself in being able to lead your readers in such a way that you don't have to resort to that, outside of dialogue, to get them to get "insight into [your] base idea."
I hope you find the time to come on back with something new.MnI1MEFOVKzKRFg0
PS Is that a Bosch piece for your AV? I can't see it clearly but it looks familiar.
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I tell ya one thing that utterly DESTROYS the immediacy of a story about something like sex...its pedantic nitpicking of syntax and punctuation. then a long slow protracted re admission only to find more minute mistakes a real editor would simply fix and or ignore in the interests of the tale and the punch its delivered with.
after many years in rock and roll, movie and production of plays etc. the BIG guys couldn't give brass fuck if there's the odd spelling mistake....some real actors, for instance, actually insist on some things being actually written phonetically to get an insight into the writers base idea of the character.
The writing on here IS good (great infact) and there are some FINE writers, but much of it is to a certain level...we want voices of people whom don't necessarily write for a living, writing should be either tough, gritty, and in this case passonate and realistic OR its simply wallpaper.
we as a society reach an entirely different level of understanding when we set aside the rules of convention...particularly in the pursuit of STORY.
I'll get back on here soon with another story, but right now I just do not the time to write about a sexual experience and be in full university of Harvard humanities doctorate mode to complete it to a level that MIGHT be required on this site.
PS: I say this because writers block can often be exacerbated by a feeling of "damn, I spent 5 to 7 hours crafting that story and drawing it out of my head and the boss says its got too many exclamation points...whats the point...hey facebook, cooking, actual sex and living might actually be far less time consuming".
Writers need encouragement not smug (somewhat triumphal) rapped knuckles for not quite sticking to the rules....are we not artists (or with the pretence of becoming artists) after all??....dahh im old fashioned and likely pretty dull but there it is.
after many years in rock and roll, movie and production of plays etc. the BIG guys couldn't give brass fuck if there's the odd spelling mistake....some real actors, for instance, actually insist on some things being actually written phonetically to get an insight into the writers base idea of the character.
The writing on here IS good (great infact) and there are some FINE writers, but much of it is to a certain level...we want voices of people whom don't necessarily write for a living, writing should be either tough, gritty, and in this case passonate and realistic OR its simply wallpaper.
we as a society reach an entirely different level of understanding when we set aside the rules of convention...particularly in the pursuit of STORY.
I'll get back on here soon with another story, but right now I just do not the time to write about a sexual experience and be in full university of Harvard humanities doctorate mode to complete it to a level that MIGHT be required on this site.
PS: I say this because writers block can often be exacerbated by a feeling of "damn, I spent 5 to 7 hours crafting that story and drawing it out of my head and the boss says its got too many exclamation points...whats the point...hey facebook, cooking, actual sex and living might actually be far less time consuming".
Writers need encouragement not smug (somewhat triumphal) rapped knuckles for not quite sticking to the rules....are we not artists (or with the pretence of becoming artists) after all??....dahh im old fashioned and likely pretty dull but there it is.
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I have two actually, same artist... "Attention Whore" and "Hey Baby" by...shit forget her name!.
How does a hard rock fan find these hardcore house dance numbers horny?, I saw this hot as hell blonde working some moves to "hey Baby" on her home pole dancing pole on you tube a few years back....killer lines all the way through suggestive and bald facedly about fucking....HOT!
How does a hard rock fan find these hardcore house dance numbers horny?, I saw this hot as hell blonde working some moves to "hey Baby" on her home pole dancing pole on you tube a few years back....killer lines all the way through suggestive and bald facedly about fucking....HOT!
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The fleshlight is awesome...a bit TOO awesome though, it's kind of too much all at once I shoot it within 5 to 6 strokes.
The hand is better because it's controllable, the fleshlight is pleasure as soon as your glans slides across the lubed up "labia"...I've often pushed on in and lost it then and there.
Mines a Whorey looking clear case and clear sleeve one.
The hand is better because it's controllable, the fleshlight is pleasure as soon as your glans slides across the lubed up "labia"...I've often pushed on in and lost it then and there.
Mines a Whorey looking clear case and clear sleeve one.
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Can boys answer?...i rocked up to band practice in my whorey torn jeans (no manties mind you)...had a rip that was only obvious from a certain angle...the exact angle a female friend noticed. On a break she came up and whispered "I looove your jeans, theres much to see"...lol.
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they are...good point!. Genital to Genital sex is like a roast dinner...whereas a blow job is like the most decadent after dinner dessert (or decadent snack) I could think of!.
Well actually my above line appears that ive delivered the odd blow job...not so...though, I wouldn't be totally ruling it out....lolz.
Well actually my above line appears that ive delivered the odd blow job...not so...though, I wouldn't be totally ruling it out....lolz.
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Ok awesome...how then do you broach the subject with your wife that you want her to plow you?. I mean we started out pretty kinky and i think she knows id like my ass messed with...i keep it shaved for god sakes!. Are we seriously going to have to wait for our kids to move out and we are both old and gross...lol.
my fear is being old and kind of gross dressed up in bdsm gear and one of the kids walk in on us with me on all fours and my wife rockin a big fat fake dick afixed to her lubed and ready to plunder my septugenarian ass...
my fear is being old and kind of gross dressed up in bdsm gear and one of the kids walk in on us with me on all fours and my wife rockin a big fat fake dick afixed to her lubed and ready to plunder my septugenarian ass...
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as a lad in my 20's my repeated record of 6 times with two different female friends.
my first real girlfriend and I we went away for the first time and we shagged all night and rested next day.
the other I poached off a bass playing friend, we found a treed spot and just fucked like animals until dawn and went our separate ways.
I am now in my mid 40's and feel I may never top this feat ever again. actually I don't think I could lol.
my first real girlfriend and I we went away for the first time and we shagged all night and rested next day.
the other I poached off a bass playing friend, we found a treed spot and just fucked like animals until dawn and went our separate ways.
I am now in my mid 40's and feel I may never top this feat ever again. actually I don't think I could lol.
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really daisy if your penis is offensive to you the option of surgery is viable BUT maybe that's the part that makes you...you.
you see yourself as a woman who happens to have a penis and don't identify as otherwise, let those who understand that into your world!....think very carefully about surgery daisy, not for some banal idea that "you might get sick of being a woman" or anything as small minded as that, I mean from a standpoint of surgery being invasive and very risky...if you are asking for an opion, id say keep your penis and leave labelling to others...be who you are.
you see yourself as a woman who happens to have a penis and don't identify as otherwise, let those who understand that into your world!....think very carefully about surgery daisy, not for some banal idea that "you might get sick of being a woman" or anything as small minded as that, I mean from a standpoint of surgery being invasive and very risky...if you are asking for an opion, id say keep your penis and leave labelling to others...be who you are.
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I actually think this question itself is only a recent phenomena. To me if two men are engaged in an act with a woman there will be an element of bi-sexual behaviour pretty much as might be expected of two women with one man. Wether the guy performs oral on the other dude is irrelevant, the fact their sex organs are in close proximity to one another's is if not homosexual is at the least skating pretty close to bi-sexuality.
If I was ever to lucky enough to be in a threesome with another dude or another woman (together with my wife) either would be pretty awesome.
My answer is YES (please even!).
If I was ever to lucky enough to be in a threesome with another dude or another woman (together with my wife) either would be pretty awesome.
My answer is YES (please even!).
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A willing mouth and plenty of spit?....maybe monitor teeth use, suck capacity, tongue use. I LOVE it when partners kind of wave my cock around and smack themselves on the face with it n stuff (im not an especially hung guy but theres enough there to play with as required).
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A willing mouth and plenty of spit?....maybe monitor teeth use, suck capacity, tongue use. I LOVE it when partners kind of wave my cock around and smack themselves on the face with it n stuff (im not an especially hung guy but theres enough there to play with as required).
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YES!...precisely because i am trying my best to describe a hot sexual fantasy I may be having that week in as much detail and resolution as I can....If you can describe any action sequence of any activity well and in detail you are on the way to being a good writer. sex is a topic i felt i needed to work on and damn its a LOT of hot fun!.
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Small review of Velv'Or's Jnaja Ergonmomic Cockring.
Pro's: Great shape, easy to put on, perinium tab, space age manufactured (3d printed).
Con's: Expensive, hard to get in australia.
Price: $65
Sizes: 45mm and 55mm (after a fairly graphic conversation with the online sex shop prop (a dude) i went for the suggested biggest 55mm. i am not overly hung but i have big balls and am fairly girthy...if i was a really well hung guy, this thing would be tight).
Colours: black, white and red. Go on Velv'Or site and they offer these in all colours as well. Get this they even have the same ring in solid gold, silver and titanium...big $$$$.
First time I used it was a test run in the shower. It was relatively easy to put on, p-tab at the bottom (of course), slip one ball through, then the second (I found right to left best for me) and try to not get hard before pushing your cock through.
By the time I had it on I was very hard, vein definition on my shaft was awesome, but i did not feel uncomfortably restricted...just a nice tight sensation. I took some time pulling through my my lose scrotal skin so the tab sat just right over my prostate.
pull a kegal and the ring pulls up tight. really porny looking when your cock and enringed balls bounces around. The whole idea of cockrings is often two fold; keep the penis hard and take the edge off your sensitivity long enough to prolong your shagging session. But to me I also love the look and most of all the feeling of restriction.
Anyway, look sorry this is so graphic...lol, when I eventually ejaculated I felt I wasn't restricted in doing so. i've used rings just that little too tight that it restricts the ejaculation too much.
my 2 cents...i also have an oxballs harness cock and ball ring...that thing is frightening!.
Pro's: Great shape, easy to put on, perinium tab, space age manufactured (3d printed).
Con's: Expensive, hard to get in australia.
Price: $65
Sizes: 45mm and 55mm (after a fairly graphic conversation with the online sex shop prop (a dude) i went for the suggested biggest 55mm. i am not overly hung but i have big balls and am fairly girthy...if i was a really well hung guy, this thing would be tight).
Colours: black, white and red. Go on Velv'Or site and they offer these in all colours as well. Get this they even have the same ring in solid gold, silver and titanium...big $$$$.
First time I used it was a test run in the shower. It was relatively easy to put on, p-tab at the bottom (of course), slip one ball through, then the second (I found right to left best for me) and try to not get hard before pushing your cock through.
By the time I had it on I was very hard, vein definition on my shaft was awesome, but i did not feel uncomfortably restricted...just a nice tight sensation. I took some time pulling through my my lose scrotal skin so the tab sat just right over my prostate.
pull a kegal and the ring pulls up tight. really porny looking when your cock and enringed balls bounces around. The whole idea of cockrings is often two fold; keep the penis hard and take the edge off your sensitivity long enough to prolong your shagging session. But to me I also love the look and most of all the feeling of restriction.
Anyway, look sorry this is so graphic...lol, when I eventually ejaculated I felt I wasn't restricted in doing so. i've used rings just that little too tight that it restricts the ejaculation too much.
my 2 cents...i also have an oxballs harness cock and ball ring...that thing is frightening!.
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Gillian Anderson...NOT X Files era, I like the look of her now...super thin, fucking awesome big long blonde hair. She's on this crime show The Fall...she even kisses another woman with that sexy mouth of hers.
Actually: I saw her on top gear last year, she is a pretty full on alpha female, loves old porsches and seems like she'd kick your ass into next week if you got on the wrong side of her.
Actually: I saw her on top gear last year, she is a pretty full on alpha female, loves old porsches and seems like she'd kick your ass into next week if you got on the wrong side of her.
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with the very greatest of respect. why? could you not simply scroll past the offending story?. I mean is it truly that bad you cant even bear to look at it?.
i really am genuinley interested TooShy and i mean no disrespect.
lol....hmmm my competitive streak makes me want to scroll past A LOT of heller good writing on here.
i really am genuinley interested TooShy and i mean no disrespect.
lol....hmmm my competitive streak makes me want to scroll past A LOT of heller good writing on here.
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Quote by trinket
The bloody bastard! Not the fuckin Kingswood!! Was he the guy named Bevan, wearing a flanno, stubbies and double pluggers? This guy needs a big toe up his ass and more than the black dog up him, he needs to be locked up in old Melbourne Goal with Ned. oh wait... Ned's dead. Well they can hang this bloke too. They still do neck re-alignment down there? You NEVER EVER EVER touch somebody's Kingswood. Especially a ute. Is it blue? I'll bet it's fuckin blue.
Yeah naAAAAHHH!, yeah she's fuckin blue mate...blue as the goins on in ere trinket!.