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Man, my THIRD attempt at a story for this is flaming out. Maybe I've lost my touch at writing porn.

Dude, your writing talent is far beyond just a touch. Write a Shard?

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Well, Miss Pixel is still the ground-based part of our security forces, as well as being our bouncer. Nobody messes with her – at least, not more than once.

Not sure what kind of mouser she is – but you can ask her, if you want to take the risk.

I'll put on a fresh batch of popcorn to watch the results.

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My apologies to Miss Pixel. She must be so stealthy I didn't see her. Well this may not be my first drink. Gin and tonic please and a round of tequila on my tab, (actually Ping's tab.) Next time I come in I'll bring fresh salmon, I know how to make friends with cats.

I don't understand why road repair takes so long, why don't they just fill the holes with the bumps?

With that avi, Hammer must be a spy of some kind.

Have to change my diaper

Holy Fuck. Bigfoot IS real.

Introduce the title of your story: The Cellist: Glissando
Genre/Category: Fetish
Provide the link: The Cellist: Glissando | Lush Stories

1. What first inspired you to write this particular story? It started with the word “glissando” which I immediately thought sounded like a Lush story. Then I came up with the opening line which was deliberately provoking but on its own could have multiple meanings.  I love the sound of a cello and I wanted to portray a woman being ‘played like an instrument’ but in a very different way. I actually wrote the ending first then needed to find the way there.  

2. How did you come up with these characters? Chloe, the female character is partly based on a friend, at least in physical appearance, Anton is more how I imagined an aging musician. I have an obsession with the name Chloe and use it in other stories too. For some reason I felt Anton had to be European. I wanted both characters to seem slightly flawed, more human. To an extent the characters, older teacher seduces young protégé, is a well used theme.

3. How does it differ from some of your other stories? It’s my first Fetish piece and although I have stories that feature bdsm elements this story is more extreme or at least unusual. I think this is the first story where I use music as central to the theme. Overall the story is, I think, simply ‘different’ due to the subject matter and unique circumstances.

4. What was the most challenging thing about writing this piece? I love the sound of a cello but know absolutely nothing about cellos except they have strings and a bow. I had to do a bit of reading to understand more about the cello, how it is played and familiarize myself with the terminology. Not sure how well I used the terminology, it would be great to hear from a cellist.

5. Anything else you want to tell us about it? I really attempted to make this a quality story and agonized over editing far more than I usually do. I debated putting the story in a category that would generate more views but in the end decided it belonged in “Fetish.” I feel the story is pretty good but it will likely disappear in to oblivion. I hope you’ll give it a read.

Morning all, coffee please. Balzac and French Toast? Very clever Mr Bear. I think I forgot my SS password, have to fix that up and take a look at y'all's stories.

How come we don't have a bar cat? It will keep the mice out.

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That story is superb! Would be an RR from me if I had the power to give one. 😊

Thanx Kimmi, that's very kind to say. 😊 I had fun writing that one. Appreciate the other posts and comments too!

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i keep telling them to reject yours. but apparently, no one listens to me anymore.

Try standing on a milk crate? 😈😘

Pretty sure your readership numbers confirm lots of people listen to you. Even me.

Hey, been away for a while but managed to drop 3 stories in about a week. There is a least a mention of Xmas in each. Would love if you gave one or more a look. They may not be your cup of tea but I promise they don’t totally suck. Ok, maybe they do.

The Cellist: Glissando | Lush Stories (a cellist seduces his young protege)

Southbound On The U-Line | Lush Stories (chance encounter leads to a Quickie, Comp Entry)

Home For Christmas: When Angels Fall | Lush Stories (filthy tale of a stepsister being taught a lesson)

The Mods are amazing, can't believe how fast stories are being approved. Got another one up, a Fetish piece that's a bit unusual. Its 5.7K words but if you have that much time give it a look. Hopefully I did the link right.

The Cellist: Glissando | Lush Stories

Morning all! Coffee with Cinnamon Baileys please. Congrats James, that's exactly what happened to me with the Comp. lol

Been slowly organizing a huge backlog of drafts. Finished one last night, I think about 6000 words. I want to submit it whole but I'm debating breaking it into 2. Found the perfect cover art but it was copyrighted. Might have an alternate.

If Sprite drops in tell her I'm out back playing with the kitty. Her curiousity will get the better of her and she will fall into my nefarious trap.

Coffee please, hoping to finish another story today. Appreciate folks sharing their trials with Comp entries. Like a few others i went way over the 1000 words but at least i got 2 stories out of it.

Kimmi: hope you get an enormous bonus, I loved year end bonus time.

Seeker: count me IN!

Hi folks, coffee please.

Cat hair issue resolved, I found a pair of kitty ears. Now I'm thinking about the Ensorceled/Verbal/Sprite collab "Purr."

Happy writing all!

I somehow got the phrase "soaking eloquence" into a story. Not sure it will survive editing but I'm a bit smug about it.

Slowly bringing a story together that I'm starting to like.

Can anyone explain why I have kitty hair in my mouth?

Coffee please with a splash of cinnamon Baileys. James you really do put on quite the breakfast spread. I may have to start wearing a blindfold so I don't gain 50 pounds. Its cool to watch the views on Comp entries, definitely gratifying. Meanwhile over on the sibling revelry category the Comp entry I fucked up is going gangbusters. Been working on multiple stories and have one that I'm really starting to like. Teaser: it involves "fuck holes." 😊

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And someone rather foolishly let the ape into the competition. There's a bit of a pun, mostly unintended, built into it. See if you can find it and comment if you do.

https://www.lushstories.com/stories/quickie-sex/minnies-merry-mall-christmas

I'll be favoriting that one just for the cover art!

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My story is published, but I missed the bit about it being flash-related, so I had to pull it out (heh) of the comp. Bah humbug. Anyway, here's my non-comp flash, if anyone cares to read it.

https://www.lushstories.com/stories/flash-erotica/gift-rapt

I did something similar on a previous Comp. I kinda liked that story, it was sufficiently evil. lol My first attempt on this Comp ran away on me and ended up at 2000 words. Working my way through the entries and will def give yours a read.

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I am a bit surprised that this needed to be defined on this site of all places.

You shush. Kimmi and I are still waiting for visuals.

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Dontmind me. Just stalking you. 😎

I know. 😈 Notice how easy it is?

Good to see you Ensorceled; that description sounds like a great afternoon except for the knee part.

Like others I may start with a phrase or vague idea and it goes where it goes. I think I actually laid out a rough storyline exactly once. About half the time a story more or less follows what's in my head the other half veer down unexpected paths.

Coffee please. That yogurt does look good and I have some strawberries to add too. Getting the word count down can be a challenge. I had to trim about 150 words on my Comp entry but it was a good edit, changed a lot of sentences to make them more active. My story production in the last week (2) has exceeded my production over the last 2 or 3 years by 2. lol

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i do, actually. 😈😈😇

Good that you included that angel. Have an idea for that...

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And Kimmi & LYF (is there an easier thing we could call you, BTW?), I have already posted "Dear Father Christmas…" on SS, so great minds and all that.

Call me lyf or whatever is convenient. I went grocery shopping yesterday and nothing in my house looks as appealing as your lunch.

It just crossed my mind that the real danger in 4th place is if Sprite does get it.

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Well, beat the big furball in, but I’m not packing donuts and don’t know how to make coffee or tea.

Lyfbuz, have you thought your offering of yourself as a 4th place prize through? What if Sprite isn’t fourth? There are some kinky fuckers on here. Just as an example: are you prepared to be perhaps hogtied naked and helpless in a cornfield in KY to be used by hillbillies and our backward minds?

I may have issues with impulse control. As for being hogtied and helpless well let's just say I have varied experience. I thought the risk was worth it, surely I can trust the good graces of Lush members? Right seeker?

Coffee please.

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i could have pruned it for you if you would have asked. i might do so anyway

😲 Thanks for the pruning threat. It motivated me to bang out another story for a Comp entry. I like yours better though.

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what is this sleep you speak of?

Go to bed! 😘

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Bear, I think you should put Father Christmas on SS, too. Easy change. Remove the sex in dream and change it to a romantic dance with a kiss.

My 2 cents

Great idea, it stands really well just as a great story!

My Comp entry went astray to 2100 words. I probably could have carved 500 but I didn't really want to slash it that much. So I just sent it as a non-Comp story. It ain't stellar but it is pretty dirty. Its been a couple of years at least since I posted anything. Be warned its in one of those nasty categories...

If I get another idea I might still get in a Comp entry. Maybe.

Morning all, coffee please. Ok, since you asked I will have a splash of Jameson's.

That's a fine looking Cape Cod there James, I'd forgotten that's what the drink is called. Sounds like a bunch of us have Comp entries, most currently above 1000 words. Should be a busy Comp!

Anyone doing anything exciting this weekend?