It doesn't sound like my kind of thing, but then, a well-written story will engage the reader, almost regardless of content...
You got some good advice above...
You might want to take a look at the Anne Rice, Beauty books
http://www.amazon.com/The-Claiming-Sleeping-Beauty-Trilogy/dp/0452281423/ref=pd_bxgy_b_text_z
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Mazza
Over 90 days ago
Straight Female, 54
0 miles · Lanark
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Mazztastic
It would be good if when someone replies on a comment that you've made on a story, you get a notification...
It's not often that I revisit a story after I've scored and commented, but sometimes the author will give a lovely response and I would never know...
A wee notification (perhaps showing their actual response) would fix that - I guess that people returning to see what the author said about their comment would increase story views as well...
It's not often that I revisit a story after I've scored and commented, but sometimes the author will give a lovely response and I would never know...
A wee notification (perhaps showing their actual response) would fix that - I guess that people returning to see what the author said about their comment would increase story views as well...
Mazztastic
Generally speaking, I'd say for the same reasons that women do... Because something is missing. That could be in their relationship or simply because of their personal "baggage".
You can break it down, but it becomes so individual that the reasons are different for everyone...
From what I've seen and experienced, the person is simply looking for something that they don't get in their steady relationship.
You can break it down, but it becomes so individual that the reasons are different for everyone...
From what I've seen and experienced, the person is simply looking for something that they don't get in their steady relationship.
Mazztastic
I've heard them say that "Three's a crowd"
But I must disagree
For more than two should be allowed
To let your love run free
A hand in your cunt, a mouth on your tit
Can make a gal feel swell
And that is not the end of it
You get cock, and pussy as well!
Sticky cum is everywhere
And orgasms together
Oh yes! Both put your fingers there
3somes rule, forever!
My challenge is...
Sticky Situations...
But I must disagree
For more than two should be allowed
To let your love run free
A hand in your cunt, a mouth on your tit
Can make a gal feel swell
And that is not the end of it
You get cock, and pussy as well!
Sticky cum is everywhere
And orgasms together
Oh yes! Both put your fingers there
3somes rule, forever!
My challenge is...
Sticky Situations...
Mazztastic
Quote by WellMadeMale
Yours would probably look pretty decent with 10% transparency.
This is yet another of the changes/additions I enjoy.
Thanks Gav!
You know, I am open to new things and I had a play around with the transparency feature, but it seemed to take forever for my page to load (perhaps because I have a gif as my background)
Anyway, I changed it back to normal (whatever that is)
(I do want to point out that I think it's a fun feature, but just not for me)
Mazztastic
Quote by overmykneenow
The horror. Sorry Nic, I think it looks awful.
And just wait until you see one with an animated gif as the background. They should probably come with a PSE warning.
The little icons were obviously made for a white background so all look a bit ropey now (the FR button in particular). Callisto's profile looks terrible, Possibly's even worse.
Shit, the more I see, the more I keep thinking "MySpace"
I don't really like it either - most of the ones I've seen just look kind of half loaded and are difficult and confusing to try and read...
Generally speaking though, I think the improvements on the site are fab, just not this one.
I think that for the transparency to look good, you'd have to really pay attention to the background you choose...
