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yes she would - don't listen to her.
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I'd rather get honest feedback whether positive or negative. I appreciate the generous scores and comments but I don't think anything I've written so far is particularly noteworthy. Ideally any negative feedback includes something constructive. If someone wants to trash my story that's cool; tastes vary.
Conversely, I do agree a PM is the best route for most. I personally feel no need to bash anyone in public. I usually won't score on a story that I feel is poor and in my experience suggesting anyone's work is less than perfect is often met with alarming rage.
I often privately write scathing comments/reviews of my work to myself. I find the feedback helpful. E.g. "LYFBUZ, your work is sophomoric dreck, completely lacking in originality. My advice is to restrict your work to bathroom walls or erasable whiteboards. Please buy a thesaurus or better yet just stop. Please, I beg you, STOP!"
Maybe I should give up my writing aspirations and become a motivational speaker....
your nose looks funny.
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Quote by JustFriends101
My first response is to punch him in the balls and dump him, and my second is to refrain from my gut reaction of punching him in the balls but bring up the condom situation, let him have it and avoid him then a month later freak him out and lie to him and tell him he got me pregnant and wait till he panics before I told him the truth...then punch him in the balls and dump him.
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Quote by Wilful
I'm definitely in favour of Option D. I want honest and constructive feedback that's going to help me grow as a writer. And in that spirit, I'll just point out that there's a small typo in that option.
To that end, I try and offer constructive feedback on stories myself. I do it publically so that other writers reading the story and comments might hopefully find something useful in it too.
there's a few people, Wilful, Rumple, a couple others, that let me know when i've missed the mark a bit. i actually enjoy those, cause it keeps me on my toes and reminds me not to be lazy, which i can be.
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Quote by Liz
@Noll - I can't speak for older H&K models as this is the first I've played. I loved it that much I bought it. The Tubemeister Deluxe is a fairly new model so perhaps they have improved things in this one.
Sounds like you have some interesting gear - €20 for a pick though? Daaamn. What makes it so special? I'm currently using the Dunlop Tortex Jazz III XL in 1.5mm.
@Sprite - Never heard of Donner Pedals but they look okay. Is there a local music shop you can hang out in for an afternoon and try a load of them out? My local stores all know me on a first name basis now.
Congrats on the Squire! May it bring you many hours of enjoyment.
gee, i don't know, Seattle might have a local music shop... a few things. The Donner Party was notorious for getting lost int the snow and eating each other back in 1980... or 1880... or a long time ago. i have to assume that anyone naming effect peddles after a family that ate their young has to be good. Also, Donner was the name of one of Santa's reindeer - they also called him 'The Executioner' (it's best you don't ask, i kind of like you and don't want you to suffer the same fate as Rudolf "Big Red" Guilianni). and umm... what are barre chords? are they like bar chords? lol - is that an english spelling or am i just clueless?
btw, how do you know i am not already a sexy rock goddess who can play longer and better! i'll have you know that i know 6 chords already - that's 3 more than Johnny Ramone! in 4 days, i am already better than the greatest guitar player who ever lived.
oh, and yeah, thanks for the advice. i have the regular slinky ones. they came in a neon packet so i can find them in the dark, i think... 
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birthdays are hard. i celebrated my 21 by getting the crap beat out of me by an ex, and then . they go hand in hand, tho i have done my best to seperate them over the years. the day of was hard. i was in a dark place, feeling unloved, lost, angry, sad, all that stuff, despite or because, take your pick, of everything that goes along with birthdays. i thought about ending it again, seriously thought about it...
there's a documentary on netflix - it started up thursday. Audrie and Daisy. i watched it at 3am, friday morning. it's hard, it's heartbreaking - Audrie and Daisy were both teens - 14 yo - when they were . 14yo. the aftermath was horrible. video and pictures passed around at school, labled sluts and liars and whores. there were death threats. Audrie took her own life. Daisy tried. eventually, another girl heard of her case and reached out to her - she'd gone through the same thing. Daisy is now 18. she graduated. she's helping to start up an outreach program. she does tattoos - more importantly, she does semi-colon tattoos among the other art she puts on skin. that really hit me. that's why i keep talking, why we keep talking, why we reach out - so we know we're not alone. it helps, i think. i hope so, at least i like to think it does. just a reminder. i know it pulled me back from the edge.
love you all,
peace, rachel
there's a documentary on netflix - it started up thursday. Audrie and Daisy. i watched it at 3am, friday morning. it's hard, it's heartbreaking - Audrie and Daisy were both teens - 14 yo - when they were . 14yo. the aftermath was horrible. video and pictures passed around at school, labled sluts and liars and whores. there were death threats. Audrie took her own life. Daisy tried. eventually, another girl heard of her case and reached out to her - she'd gone through the same thing. Daisy is now 18. she graduated. she's helping to start up an outreach program. she does tattoos - more importantly, she does semi-colon tattoos among the other art she puts on skin. that really hit me. that's why i keep talking, why we keep talking, why we reach out - so we know we're not alone. it helps, i think. i hope so, at least i like to think it does. just a reminder. i know it pulled me back from the edge.
love you all,
peace, rachel
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Quote by seeker4
I'm writing a non-sexual scene for a new story and wonder about the authenticity, so I'm going to run the scenario past the Lush ladies to see if I'm on track.
Scenario:
You're eighteen, a high school senior, and just had sex with your boyfriend. While he is out of the room for a few minutes, you realize that cum is leaking out even though you gave him a condom to put on. Looking over the side of the bed, you see the condom packet on the floor unopened. When he comes back, you hide the packet and innocently ask about the cum. He says the condom probably broke. It's not the first time you suspect he's lied.
How do you react? Let it slide to deal with later? Wait to see if you're pregnant? Blow up there and then? Decide it's not a big thing and carry on?
this is going to vary, based on personality, as i'm sure you're aware. personally, i'd have it out with him soon as i figured it out. that said 1) i'd have made damn sure he was wearing it in the first place and 2) i was on the pill at 18, as are many women.
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i am the proud owner of a somewhat used Fender Squire electric guitar. it's red and it has slinky strings - i know this, cause i put them on myself. laugh all you want, but i'm pretty excited to join the club. i wrote a song on it already. it's about cats. there need to be more cat songs in the world. so far, no stomp boxes, but i do have a small amp - it's a fender as well.
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Quote by Sweden
Hi, everyone. I'm a new member here and I have two questions... would you be so kind as to answer these?
1. If I upload a story when will it be posted?
2. Can I see how much people readed my story?
Thank you, dears.
1. it depends on how busy the que is when you do (i'm a story mod, btw). ideally, within 24-48 hours after posting. on weekends, or if we get a lot of stories dumped on us at once, it might take a little longer. best thing you can do to speed things up is make sure that it's well edited - the easier it is for us to vet, the faster it will be and you won't have to worry about it being sent back to be cleaned up.
2. yes, there will be a counter that allows you to see how many views you have.
and welcome to Lush, looking forward to seeing you post
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Quote by spinneroftales
I've never raged before, but here goes. Why can't people writing understand that i is a letter and I is a word. Are they too lazy to hit the shift key? They do it for something like OMG or to shout. Come on, be literate.
i do it as a matter of style - it comes from writing freehand, because i like getting creative with the dot.
- i'm the angelic one - 
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Quote by adi_me33
No. I hate shopping. Guess it depends on the friend.
i thought you hated clowns...
back on topic, i used to live with a CD and yeah, we'd do shopping trips together, though he always bought his own stuff. it was more like he took ME along. there was this place in the Haight that sold to CDs and they had the best clothes. got lots of really cool stuff for clubbing and raves there.
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ever do something you were really proud of and then have someone come along and tell you how much it sucks? between this thread and the Site Improvement thread, with the Rubrics conversation, i can imagine how the winners feel right now. thanks for being awesome.
