Quote by MadMartigan
I must be the only one routinely annoyed at this thread's title.
IS.
IS.
IS going to win. Oh god, my grammar OCD!
Brazil am going to win.
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Quote by LASARDaddy
SLINKY!
Doesn't the coiled spring pinch you? Come to think of it, watching one walk down the stairs always attracted me so maybe watching one being used like that would work.
Sorry, I cracked up when I read that. Not knowing anything else called a slinky.
it walks down stair, alone or in pairs, and makes a slinkity sound ;)
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Quote by MadMartigan
Bollocks!
Well.......
I accidentally started out writing a competition piece.
Then it exploded to 10.1K words...
And I'm still fucking writing. STILL. STILL!
STILL GODDAMMIT! IT WON'T FUCKING END!
better end soon, or you're going to get dinged for length, MM
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Quote by clum
What about, taking that idea further, being able to set up personal mailing lists?
Then, for example, when people are sending out spam about their new stories, those of their friends who REALLY don't want to receive them (me) could politely request to be removed from that list.
*spams Clum*
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Quote by Verbal
Yeah, I already had to be led through the going private thing, since I was pretty clueless. I was like a cyber-virgin :-).
Thanks Dani. You are indeed "classy as fuck" (I stole that from your profile).
plus, her rack is totally impressive *giggles and runs*
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Quote by Metilda
You can still fully address his racism and even what he says - just without writing it out. More so, I'd focus on the thoughts and psychological responses from the couple instead of giving page-time to the father's actual words.
Something like: . . . he slandered Jake, again, so quiet I couldn't quite hear the words but I got the gist. . .
or... Dad brushed the soot from his otherwise spotless klan robes, his eyes full of raw hate as he stared at my boyfriend.
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this is an erotic stories site - most people want to read either sexy fun stories, or at least ones that make them feel good. while i myself occasionally go a little dark, the idea is to get someone turned on and to end it on an up note. it has nothing to do with the validity of your writing, but rather with you needing to know your audience. people come here, mostly, for escape - they don't want to read stuff that's a downer. as several others have said, branch out. write fantasies that people want to read to get off on, to feel good and then, if you slip something darker in every once in a while, that's okay too, but the constant barrage of anger and sadness and heart break that you've shown here, frankly, yes, it's totally your image, Margot. that is who anyone who reads these posts sees you as; angry, bitter, sad. if that's not you, then change how you're seen -
a good example, i, like most people, have had some rough moments in my life - when i joined, i came on and was upbeat, fun, sexy, and friendly, and because of it, i made a lot of friends - my stories were the same, and i created a readership so that when, eventually, i pushed darker themes, it worked, when i needed to be angry or a little sad, no one saw that as the entirety of my being, because they knew the other girl, too, the fun, silly, happy one. that's what you should think about. i'm not saying don't be yourself, but i am saying that you shouldn't dwell in the darkness so much that you forget to play in the light.
a good example, i, like most people, have had some rough moments in my life - when i joined, i came on and was upbeat, fun, sexy, and friendly, and because of it, i made a lot of friends - my stories were the same, and i created a readership so that when, eventually, i pushed darker themes, it worked, when i needed to be angry or a little sad, no one saw that as the entirety of my being, because they knew the other girl, too, the fun, silly, happy one. that's what you should think about. i'm not saying don't be yourself, but i am saying that you shouldn't dwell in the darkness so much that you forget to play in the light.
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as with any relationship, the most important thing is communication. sit down together, talk to her about her needs and wants and tell her yours. work out what works for you as a Owner/pet couple. everyone is different. btw, if you have specific questions, feel free to contact me via PM - i have some experience with being a kitty and i'd be open to discussing things with either of you in confidentiality, if you'd like.
