They were both writers of erotic stories who’d recently started submitting stories to a website that provided an outlet for their creative and fantastical tales as well as a source of such arousing stories for those who only read them. Another commonality between them was their stories showed a strong interest in impact play; spanking, straps, paddles, and hairbrushes, as foreplay and punishment and while his stories were solely in this genre, hers wandered into other areas as well. The darker BDSM side of this overlapping genre, but also purely romantic and sexual lesbian tales rounded out her portfolio. But that’s where their similarities ended.
For starters, Daphne had only just started writing, while Mark had written the equivalent of a novel or three over many years but had only just started submitting what had become a ‘Life of a Spanko’ tome in small bites, while also writing just as many new stories.
Their personal lives were quite different as well. She was a pretty, young lesbian from southern California, who was in a committed D/S relationship with a woman whom she clearly loved and adored … and obeyed, while he was a straight, retired IT executive from Florida, three times her age who is married to a woman who had no interest in this lifestyle, so in an odd twist of the usual age vs. experience cliché, she probably had more personal experience than he.
Daphne’s stories were occasionally autobiographical and if not, rooted in the reality of her life, while his were mostly fantasy inspired by either series of actual of events upon which various levels of pure fantasy were built, or a tiny, real spark of an experience or idea that gradually formed in his mind into his adventures of naughty boys and girls.
Still, they connected and became ‘friends’ of a sort while reading, enjoying, and commenting on each other’s stories. The comments were always of an appreciative nature, occasionally drawing a parallel or describing a connection they’d had with the other’s story.
Mark had just submitted the first of a four-part fable describing an unusual service that provided motivation for exceptional college-age students to keep their grades up and when they didn’t that motivation came in the form of bare bottom corporal punishment; an over the knee spanking with hand or hairbrush or a paddling bent over a desk, the severity of which increased with lower grades or the frequency of a grade even one point below the accepted standard.
He was proud of the story and having only released the first episode, was receiving ‘likes’ and comments more quickly than his other stories had. Surprisingly, given this story’s minor success, it was the first story for which Daphne, or for that matter anyone had offered a creative suggestion in the public comments, but also wrote a longer constructive criticism via private message, politely done without any of the other appreciative readers being able to see it.
This episode had just one detailed account of one of these punishments entailing a first-year student who’d earned a hairbrush spanking for a much lower grade than usual. The girl, a naïve, inexperienced virgin who’d only just figured out that she liked to be spanked was described as being very aroused during the painful hairbrush spanking she received over the knee of the headmistress-like woman who provided this service.
His ‘friend,’ Daphne, thought that the level of arousal described was unrealistic as she had received many such hairbrush spankings and described how much she’d love the anticipation before as well as the pain and marks after, but she wouldn’t be aroused during the spanking; quite the opposite in fact sincerely wishing it were over because it just hurt! Also, her bottom would be in much worse shape than just a deep shade of red as described in the story. She acknowledged the fantasy side of such stories that permitted such departures from reality but still felt it was too much.
In this case, Mark had had a personal experience of his own where a Mistress had given him more than double the number of hairbrush swats described in the story and though the second half of this spanking actually did ‘just hurt’, leaving him both bruised and blistered, he had enjoyed the first half. Still, he knew she wasn’t just being critical, noting that even in her message she worried that he might not appreciate her comments, yet he gratefully accepted her thoughts waiting till he decided what to do about them to reply to her message.
He thought that perhaps he’d overlooked some aspect of the scenario and overdone the severity. Some writers would infer that a male could take more punishment than a female, but he very much doubted this point of view. Maybe the character, being so new to this level of punishment, wouldn’t have enjoyed any of it while over ‘Miss Judy’s’ knee. Taking Daphne’s experience into account he decided to modify the story; reduce the number of swats the girl received and suggest minor enjoyment during a rest that was quickly replaced by extraordinary pain when the spanking resumed.
In his reply to her message a day later, he thanked Daphne for taking the time to offer her thoughts and experience, telling her he had already edited and resubmitted the story taking her comments into account and even gratefully acknowledged her input in the ‘author’s notes’. Her reaction surprised him as she hadn’t expected him to change his story because of her comments, though sticking to her assessment of the realism lacking in the story.
They exchanged a few comments back and forth on the subject, both accepting the other’s point of view and no feelings hurt. The message thread then took a completely unrelated turn into a discussion about music, only for her to return to the original subject a couple of days later with a message that, truthfully, shocked him.
Apparently, feeling both that she had ‘called him out’ on this aspect of his story as well as being intrigued by the specifics of this particular hairbrush spanking, she had actually arranged with a friend to receive a spanking patterned exactly on the one described in the story. He didn’t know what to think at first feeling horribly responsible, then honored in a strange sort of way, and finally thought he might be giving himself too much credit.
A message thread followed that showed Daphne to be the true ‘vixen’ her screen name suggested and Mark was proud of how intrigued she’d been with his story, though secretly he was also strangely agitated, the reason for which he could not identify.
Daphne: Just some FYI. I have set up a test spanking with Paula, a Domme-in-training friend, per your story. 100 punishment-level swats, in sets as described, with a wooden hairbrush. I'm actually curious how I will mark.
Mark: Holy S**t Daphne! Why are you doing this?!? Not driven by my story, I hope?
D: Actually, yes. I want to see what it looks like. Never had that exact thing before. My owner normally uses various hourglass timers during my punishments, and corner time. She has a collection of hourglass timers. 1 minute to an actual hour.
M: I'm sorry, I guess I'm overreacting. This is what you do, I suppose, but when you talked about my story you made it sound so severe and that’s why I changed the story. Just be careful, okay? I hope you'll tell me how it turns out?
D: Of course. Pretty much the reason I'm doing it. Haven't been paddled in quite a while, either, and it's about time.
M: Now I'm getting envious wishing I could be in your place. Can't wait to hear the result!
D: Lol. It's actually tame to me. It's a curiosity factor. Mostly about the results, since I kind of called you out on it.
M: You have no idea ... or maybe you do ... how incredibly hot it is to think of you arranging and looking forward to a punishment paddling inspired by a story I wrote.
D: Lol. Tonight. Will be sets of 5, 10, 15 and 20, same spot on each cheek. 5 in a row on the left, then 5 on the right. All sets the same way. Long break and touching between sets, as it's in fun and NOT a true punishment. Should take about 45 minutes.
M: What time tonight?
D: 7pm
M: 10pm here. I'll be in my hot tub thinking about you. Enjoy!!
That entire afternoon his agitation continued, a mixture of arousal imagining this very pretty girl (in actuality he didn’t know what she looked like but decided in his mind that she was gorgeous) willingly submitting to, no asking for this self-described very painful hairbrush spanking, envy at the ease with which she could arrange such a thing, as well as concern for her for something he felt inadvertently responsible for.
He did go into the hot tub that night as he did every other night at around nine o’clock and set an alarm on his phone to remind him when she’d be getting her punishment. He’d usually spend from two to three hours in not-so-hot water to relax or listen to music, but mostly it’s where the ideas for his stories were fleshed out or reviewed, imagining interesting new plotlines, or finding contradictions that needed fixing.
Tonight, though, he couldn’t get his mind on anything but her impending ass beating. He didn’t need the alarm as he looked at his phone every five minutes to see if it was time yet. When the time arrived, he suspected it wouldn’t start at the specific time she gave, rather there’d be pleasantries, and maybe not-so-pleasantries beforehand but by about ten-forty he sent her a message that he knew she wouldn’t see tonight, but when she did, she’d know she had been on his mind while she was getting spanked.
Thinking of you ... trying to imagine what you must be feeling. You must be well into it by now!?
Despite Daphne’s casual messages to Mark all day about it, an anticipation, more like a hunger, had been building, reaching fever pitch hours before Paula was to arrive. If she fed that hunger before an evening with Miss, she’d be caught out without doubt and the evening's unpleasantries would be decidedly more unpleasant, but Paula is still learning to be a Domme. Surely, she won’t know, will she? By late afternoon she’d convinced herself she can get away with it and her well-practiced fingers gave her some momentary relief, although not long after the hunger returned which is frustrating, yet she welcomed the delicious desire returning for what she’d planned, well knowing it would be quite painful.
Daphne let Paula in, who’d arrived on time as expected. They both smiled broadly at Daphne’s naked welcome at the door, remembering when they’d met. Miss loved making her answer her door to strangers completely naked, the first time being a humiliating experience but before long she’d come to enjoy the reactions of her stunned visitors.
Paula was a pretty young thing and a FedEx driver delivering a package who was instantly aroused by her sexy customer feeding a building lesbian desire that she had yet to fully accept. She returned later that evening to Daphne’s delight but wasn’t quite ready to give in to those feelings and left feeling confused. Fortunately, her courage returned a few days later and a new friend entered Daphne’s circle of pain-loving lezzies.
They exchanged a glance that said, ‘You’re sure about this?’, ‘Yes, it’s been too long, and I want it’, after which they kissed quickly but passionately. Heading to Daphne’s bedroom, Paula was only half dressed by the time they got there, and fully naked seconds later as Daphne unwrapped her pretty little present.
This lifestyle had progressed enough for Daphne to have a fully equipped dungeon ready for whatever roleplay or punishment was due, but as this was neither she’d decided to use her bedroom, borrowing only ‘the chair’ from upstairs, a strong, straight-backed chair that was in position ready to be sat on, bent over, or kneeled upon depending upon the position she was to be punished in. Tonight, her heavy, wooden hairbrush sat invitingly on the seat as both an inspiration and a threat.
So as not to waste time and atmosphere having to explain just beforehand, Paula had been fully briefed on the intent and procedure of this paddling to follow as closely as possible the hairbrush spanking the young college student had received in the story Mark wrote. The girl had been sentenced to a hundred swats of the brush in OTK position according to a pre-defined schedule for punishing these over-achieving students when they occasionally slipped up.
The pattern invented by ‘Miss Judy’ skipped the common swats to alternate cheeks, favoring the quickly building pain that was provided by concentrated smacks on one cheek. First, there were five on one cheek, followed by a short break after which another five were received by the other cheek. The girl, ‘Sara’, had gotten a longer break with a bit of her punisher’s soothing hands, before ten on each side were delivered in a similar fashion.
The pain of the first five was considerable, especially for one who’d never been spanked with anything but a hand, but they were almost tolerable. The ten that followed? … not so much, making her question her newfound belief that she might like getting spanked, but as the break wore on, the sensations in her panties made their presence felt yet again. When successive series of fifteen and twenty swats on each side were given, a slight numbing sensation set in allowing a bit of pleasure to return.
It was this pleasure and the description of a bottom only deeply reddened, that Daphne had challenged drawing on her own experience where being spanked with a hairbrush was only pleasurable during the anticipation before and the relief/desire after it was done. During the spanking, she felt only pain and a desperate desire for it to be over. Also, she’d be severely marked with colorful bruises of yellow, blue, and purple that lasted for days at least.
Still, she’d never had a spanking delivered in this fashion, Miss favoring timed punishments using appropriately exotic hourglasses of various time intervals, the ‘sands of time’ oh-so-slowly slipping through as whatever pain was being inflicted, so her intrigue centered on how this pattern worked and what marks she’d be left with.
Paula, though in training to give punishment, also liked receiving it, and it was this side of her that hugged Daphne tightly, pressing their bodies tightly for as much stimulating contact as possible before she had to change into the taskmaster she needed to be to punish Daphne properly.
“It’s time, Daphne. No more delays. Hand me the brush and tell me what punishment you’ve earned today,” Paula commanded slipping into her dominant role.
“Please, Mistress, I deserve to be punished … taken over your knee and spanked with the hairbrush on my bare bottom. Please spank me as we discussed,” Daphne asked with appropriate respect as she handed her the tool that she knew would bring her so much pain.
“Very well,” she said as she sat in the spanking chair, “you know what to do. I needn’t remind you that all the rules about rubbing and interfering still apply, but as this is an extremely specific spanking, ‘extras’ earned will be dispensed in other undesirable ways afterward. Understood?”
“Yes, Mistress,” she agreed an instant before the first five were searing into her perfect, round bottom. She cried out as she would normally as this part at least wasn’t so different from what she’d experienced before, the pleas for leniency not coming yet.
Five more, seemingly a bit harder, on the fresh flesh of her other cheek yielded similar results. The story hadn’t been too specific about what happened between, so Paula took some poetic license and slipped a finger between Daphne’s legs to take her temperature, so to speak. She slid her finger through her suitably wet slit a few times but also took note of some surprising stickiness in surrounding areas, Daphne only feeling the welcome presence of her expert finger.
Without warning, the next ten swats began, with tears forming during the first cheek and flowing freely by the second. Feeling like begging wasn’t proper as she’d asked for this spanking and its very specific delivery, her cries were limited to loud exclamations and declarations of how much it hurt. Believing her initial assessment regarding the accuracy of the story had her now wondering if she could actually complete it as prescribed.
Desire returns slowly once the pain has stopped and with Paula’s fingers firmly planted in and around her pussy she was squirming now for a very different reason, hoping against hope that she’d do it long enough to make her cum. Egging her on, encouraging her to continue felt like a necessity to her, but a luxury to Paula; a luxury she hadn’t earned yet, which became clear to Daphne only when she felt it coming soon, and yet was denied.
The one concession to her condition Paula allowed was a break for hydration, Daphne pouring some Chardonnay for Paula, while only taking vitamin water for herself, not wanting to dull her senses even a little for this painful experiment. Barely ten minutes later a look on Paula’s face told her it was time to resume and took Daphne by the wrist, leading her back to the lap she wasn’t quite so eager this time to lie across.
“Fifteen this time, Daphne,” Paula reminded her knowing full well she was both aware of and dreading the count of this next installment. After a few not-so-soft taps on each cheek, the paddling resumed. Despite the longer rest, the excruciating pain returned instantly, the tears following close behind which turned into loud sobbing while still on the first cheek.
While her left cheek just hurt her right was the focus now of this awful pain! No longer too proud to beg, she cried and pleaded with Paula to stop, even considering using her safeword towards the end, but like the good pain slut she was, toughed it out, her cries turning to screeches when Paula delivered the last few even harder and in quick succession.
“Holy shit, Mistress! That fucking hurt!!”
“Such a mouth! Has my pretty, little cunt forgotten about extras? There will be some now!”
“I’m sorry, Mistress! Please give your naughty slut another break? Please?! Twenty is going to be so hard to take!?”
Miss probably wouldn’t have allowed it, but Paula did, and whether due to lack of training or her empathy as a switch wasn’t clear. Again, they retreated to the kitchen for cool refreshment, which never did anything to cool whatever type of heat Daphne was feeling in her ass, especially not today. She thought ‘I’ve taken much worse, but not like this’ and doubted even more whether she could take the last twenty as the story had described.
This break was longer still with the anticipation only one of dread for the last segment. Paula could feel Daphne’s distress and decided to give her another break, but she wouldn’t tell her about it beforehand and it wouldn’t be to get a drink like this. She waited as long as she felt she could, but eventually, it was time to beat the shit out of the little whore’s ass. Daphne could see it in her face and actually made the first move back to the room.
‘Oh fuck, this is gonna hurt so much!’ she thought as she got back in position over Paula’s knee.
“Ready?” Paula asked.
“NO!” she screamed in response, the enormity of the pain she was about to feel for this stupid experiment coming out.
“Too bad!” Paula said as she began a little slower but the hardest yet with Daphne bawling her eyes out between screams in reaction to each swat! Normally when she’d roleplay with Miss, she’d have escaped in her mind, turning inward she called it, where she’d stop crying and float in another dimension, but this wasn’t roleplay, this wasn’t erotic, this wasn’t even punishment! It was just a dumbass stunt to prove a point and that she could take it. If a guy had done this, they’d call it ‘macho’.
Well, she couldn’t take it. The pain was horrendous, and she just wanted it to stop and again considered using her safeword, but her pride won out again. Just as those thoughts passed, Paula switched to the other cheek. ‘That couldn’t have been twenty!’ she thought the confusion evident despite her tear-covered face.
“I decided to change it to two groups of ten,” Paula said without any explanation and added, “with a small break between.”
“Thank you, Mistress,” she screamed as the hairbrush hadn’t ceased its attack on her already very bruised bottom, it had only switched cheeks! And it still hurt like fucking hell! And she still screamed with each swat! And she still cried, her tears pooling on the floor below her. She wasn’t counting, she trusted Paula implicitly.