Mine was a story called "The Gift." I think I put it up in December of 13 or thereabouts.
I'm happy with the story in terms of plot, sex, etc.
I think my prose is tighter now, so there would likely be a host of small changes throughout if I were to be submitting it now, working from that original as a rough draft.
It's certainly NOT among my best stories, or at least I don't remember it as such. But it's not complete moose vomit.
My first few I deleted. They made me gag.
Before my first solo story I wrote a long series of stories with another Lushie. This first effort was called "Stacey's Choice". The idea for the story came to me thinking about being out and about after a long winter. June days are beautiful in my city, lovelier than the humid heat that comes later in the summer. The days are warm and clear, the sky blue, the parks lush and there are flowers on lampposts and lining sidewalk cafes. I also thought about the vibrancy of the south of France and its colours as reflected in its art. The main character was (I hope) an interesting woman who, like me, had many contradictions. She meets someone by chance and the story unfolds.
I was happy with the story then and would not change it now. It was a debut with some expectations as I was a story moderator then and fairly demanding with others'work. I was relieved that it was well received because it is in the "Love Stories" category, not the most popular one here. It was written two years ago and has earned a "Famous Story" badge for exceeding 30,000 views.
Oh, it was horrendous compared to my new stuff. lol
It was called "An Interesting Ride Home."
I think it was Band Camp. I'm too lazy to go back and check. I love that story. It's still one of my favorites. I wouldn't change a thing, unless I missed a comma or something.
My writing has evidently developed according to the mods' estimation. My first 25 stories here never earned a single RR, then mysteriously, my latest 5 stories have all gotten RR's or an EP one after the other. Why none of my older masterpieces ever won anything is a complete mystery to me. Go back and read my earlier stuff, mods and modettes! You might find some gems you missed the first time around!
My first story here was posted in July of 2012. It no longer appears on the site. It's reincarnation, revised and resubmitted, appeared in April of 2014. Eventhough I reworked it I'm still not overly proud of it, but it has garnered some 13,000 views and is less than a thousand words long.
My punctuation would be worked on if I bothered to make any more revisions. It could certainly have been longer. I did try to achieve a sense of place, and that is still one of my main goals in most of my fiction.
I'm always working to make sure the story is paramount. Even if it is erotica, the reader should still be engaged in the story being told.
If the truth be known, my first, MAY have been one of my better's.
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My first here this time is "My Wedding Gift". I was here a few years ago and don't recall which was first. I definitely see a huge difference in my writing from when I started back in 2005. Someday I'll learn to place a comma in the correct spot.
The first story I had published on Lush was entitled "Brother Sucker" (no blood relation - best friend's brother). It's hidden at the moment but may make a reappearance at some point.
It's interesting to see how dense the text looks on my early Lush stories. I've developed a deliberately choppy style which I now use for stories which will be screen-read, rather than read on paper - whether that's an improvement or not is entirely subjective.
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