About Spleen_Muse


Hi there,

I'm 21 and since recently have this obsession with writing. I try to write a story more than a porno, although I don't always succeed. Of course wouldn't be posting on this site if I didn't like adding in a lot of sex scenes. I hope the result looks somewhat 'realistic" or at least 'fun'

Any advice or thoughts about my writing are welcome. Especially the negative ones.

Oh yeah, my stories will usually be around teens.

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Topic: Like/dislike button on comments/forum posts/pictures
Posted: 14 Jun 2012 21:52

Nope, i think it's borring and for lazy people. if you like something write a comment or you like to comment and just say it "i'm agree with you" something like that

People are lazy, that's just the truth.
Giving them an option to share their opinion with the click of a mouse, might convince them to actually share it instead of just leaving.

What is this lush-button you peeps are talking about? Haven't really noticed it anywhere.

Topic: Like/dislike button on comments/forum posts/pictures
Posted: 14 Jun 2012 11:37

But people don't usually read through an entire topic, to find how many users share an opinion.

Anyway, could be a bad idea. Just thought to throw it out and ask opinions in a poll.

I think the idea is great for pictures and forums and status but not for stories. I mean there's already the scoring option and the comments option.

Wasn't suggesting it for stories. Although i personally believe, that a like/dislike function for stories would be better than the voting system there is now. Three of the five vote options rarely get used anyway. But that was another topic ;)

Topic: Like/dislike button on comments/forum posts/pictures
Posted: 14 Jun 2012 06:04

Titel says enough?

Would you want to be able to 'Like' certain comments/forum posts/pictures/etc...

No idea if it would be something hard to implement,but a lot of other sites have it.


Topic: Are you a soccer fan?
Posted: 13 Jun 2012 14:21

I like playing soccer! Used to play until 2 years ago.

Rarely watch it thou. Have no idea which players play on which team.
But if my friends are watching a game, I'm able to join and enjoy watching it.

Topic: Your Favourite Item Of Clothing You Currently Own? And WHY? (Pick Just One!!!!)
Posted: 13 Jun 2012 14:12

A regular (old) hoodie.
Don't wear it to go out, but it's so cozy and warm.

Sometimes people comment me about wearing a hood indoors.
No, I'm not trying to look like a gangster, it's just comfortable.

Topic: "FORUM GAME" If Lush were a small town what role would the person above you play?
Posted: 12 Jun 2012 13:24

The teacher in the kickboxing gym.

Topic: Timing story submission?
Posted: 12 Jun 2012 13:06

If you post it at peek times, it will get sweeped of homepage faster.
If you post it at low times, it will get fewer viewers.
For the ones who prefer positive thinking.
If you post it at peek times, it will get viewers faster.
If you post it at low times, it will stay on the homepage longer.

That being said,if you want to be listed as story of the month. The beginning of the month would be best, since u have longer time to rack up views/votes.

Topic: What did you have for lunch?
Posted: 11 Jun 2012 14:23

Let me think...


Vegetables and meat, but trying to remember what.


Carrots! Sweet sliced carrots.

Now for the meat.


Oh, just a meat burger.

Topic: Flesch-Kincaid Readabilty Index Calculator
Posted: 11 Jun 2012 08:08

Tried it out on five stories.

They all got:
Grade: 5-7
Readability: 68-72

No, idea what I can do with this information thou...

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Teen in the Castle -1- Welcome to the Castle

This is the story of Alyssa, a sixteen year old girl growing up in the middle ages. Alyssa’s dad, a successful merchant, had gathered a fair amount of wealth during his years of trading. Accompanying him for as long as she could remember, Alyssa had never gotten to know many people her own age. Nevertheless the girl had no problem being raised by her Dad, they got along very well. She...

Added 19 Jun 2012 | Category First Time | Votes 9 | Avg Score 4.56 | Views 15,771

Vacation with Teens -1.1- The Meeting

Lily felt the first rays of sunshine stroke her face. She had been awake for quite a while, still trying to get back to her dream. When she first opened her eyes this morning it was still dark, she knew she had been having a nice dream tonight. But now, she couldn’t even remember what it had been about. Unwillingly she raised herself from her bed, knowing her dream was now lost forever....

Added 05 Jun 2012 | Category Taboo | Votes 26 | Avg Score 4.92 | Views 17,968 | 8 Comments

Vacation with Teens -6- The Afterparty

“Well, I guess I’ll be getting into my own bed.” Leah whispered. By the uproar in the hallway, they heard Lily had returned from the party. The loudness of the noises made her assume that Lily was slightly drunk. “Yeah… you should.” As much as he wanted to keep his little teen close to him, Robert knew his wife must never find out about this. “Remember. You’re not telling anyone...

Added 14 Jun 2012 | Category Taboo | Votes 18 | Avg Score 4.94 | Views 13,988 | 6 Comments

Vacation with Teens -5- Leah's First Time

*This part is meant to be readable without having read the previous chapters.* Together they entered the hotel room. He wondered how they would spend the evening, just the two them. There still were so many hours that had to be filled before they could go to sleep. Without television, the night might prove to become very dull. “I’ll be right back Robert.” The teen informed him, as she...

Added 13 Jun 2012 | Category Taboo | Votes 26 | Avg Score 4.96 | Views 16,016 | 2 Comments

Vacation with Teens -4- The Hotel

Gently he put his arm around Sarah’s body. She was still sleeping. He had dreamt about Leah tonight and woke up with the hardest erection. Hoping his wife would give him some way to release, he softly squeezed her breast. That woke her up instantly. “What?” She stammered. Robert answered by pushing his cock against her back. Still playing with his wife’s boob, he went in for a kiss. ...

Added 12 Jun 2012 | Category Taboo | Votes 9 | Avg Score 4.78 | Views 16,173 | 1 Comment

Vacation with Teens -3- The Camping Site

She was the first to spot them. “Over there.” Lily said. The whiff of excitement in her tone revealed she had gotten sight of a hot guy. The other girls, even Sarah, looked at where Lily had nodded. “Mmm, the right one…” Jessica licked her lips as a way to amplify what she had just said. “What about the blonde guy?” Sarah added. “He looks pretty cute. I think he…” A shout overruled...

Added 09 Jun 2012 | Category Taboo | Votes 10 | Avg Score 4.7 | Views 11,066 | 1 Comment

Vacation with Teens -2- Departure

She rotated her slim body, giving Leah vision of her rear. “How does my back look?” Jessica worriedly asked, as the three girls left the table. “Oh, my.” Leah stammered. The redheaded Jessica had such pale skin, she always got sunburned so easily. The blistering sun definitely hadn’t had any compassion for her back this afternoon. “You lay in the sun for too long Jess.” Lily had come...

Added 07 Jun 2012 | Category Taboo | Votes 13 | Avg Score 4.85 | Views 12,563 | 3 Comments

Vacation with Teens -1.2- The Meeting

*This is the second part of chapter 1 after I split them up* Someone was looking at her, she could feel the gaze on her back as she rhythmically slid her arms into the water. When she turned her head around, she saw Leah was indeed watching her. They exchanged smiles and Lily decided to get out of the water. “Need some help with your suntan?” she asked, seeing Leah hadn’t put on any yet. ...

Added 11 Jun 2012 | Category Taboo | Votes 9 | Avg Score 4.44 | Views 12,785 | 1 Comment

Teen in the Castle -4- Anal in the Morning

The last few days have been pretty hectic for Alyssa. The teen has been exploring new functions for her body, she had never imagined possible. Getting taught by Clover, Damien and Martin is certainly a great way to practice for her marriage. Although she has to keep her virginity until then, she now has a larger knowledge about men and how to please them. Alyssa had been such unknowing...

Added 22 Jun 2012 | Category Anal | Votes 31 | Avg Score 4.83 | Views 31,122 | 4 Comments

Teen in the Castle -3- Teaching Alyssa

She’s late. Martin had prepared everything. He had carefully considered what to say, arranged with Damien to not disturb them and made a comfortable cuddling spot in the hay. Now he just needed Alyssa to show up. He even had his special aid. As he thought about it, he felt into his pocket. It was starting to melt. She’d better come soon. He decided to store it in the hay. “Martin?” ...

Added 21 Jun 2012 | Category Anal | Votes 13 | Avg Score 4.92 | Views 23,276 | 2 Comments

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