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AbigailThornton

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13 Jun 2016

The first story I had published on Lush was entitled "Brother Sucker" (no blood relation - best friend's brother). It's hidden at the moment but may make a reappearance at some point.

It's interesting to see how dense the text looks on my early Lush stories. I've developed a deliberately choppy style which I now use for stories which will be screen-read, rather than read on paper - whether that's an improvement or not is entirely subjective.

26 May 2016

24 May 2016

Two Maltesers

12 Apr 2016

Mouthwash

25 Feb 2016

Quote by naughtyannie
I wore a clit vibrator out.

But I guess it was my fault for using it too much.

*Laughing*

That's exactly what I thought when I saw the post.

31 Jan 2016

The weekend's work is done (and quite literally) dusted. Star Wars soundtrack playing in the background, beer in hand (soon in belly).

31 Jan 2016

Quote by Ace1047
A little background: I was TAing for a (creative) writing class and somebody (a straight white male) chose to write from the perspective of a trans lesbian (is that the right term? Male became female and was a lesbian after becoming female.) Student got a TON of flack for writing from the perspective, on the grounds that there was no way he could understand that position and therefore should not even consider writing from it. As I was reading it, I did not have a problem particularly with writing from an alternate perspective, however the writing was garbage, just not fun to read poorly written et cetera. But it got me thinking, what is the social acceptability of writing something like that. Not even necessarily as different as that, but say a straight male writing from the perspective of a gay male or straight female et cetera. Is it socially acceptable to do this? If it is, can it be done well? I mean obviously it can be done well, plenty of pros write from first person perspectives not their own in experiences that are not their own. I'm not 100% sure what exactly I'm asking there but any feedback would be helpful, both for the roughly 600 drafts I'm considering submitting to this site, TAing and the future in general.

It sounds like the guy should find himself a new class as that is the very basis of creative writing. Let the rest of the class go back to sharing the contents of their dairies as, by their self-imposed constraints, that is all they will ever be able to write.

When you say you've got 600 drafts, does that mean 600 unfinished / unsubmitted stories? If so, stop procrastinating, choose one, finish it, polish it and post it. Repeat.

13 Jan 2016

Quote by sprite
people are way too hung up on scores. that's just an opinion. btw, if any of you fucks give me less than a 6 on my next story, i will come to your house and piss on your rug. thus, have i spoken.

Sprite: "What do you mean you haven't got a rug, Abi?"
Me: "Erm. That's the neighbour's rabbit."

13 Jan 2016

Silence

13 Jan 2016

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How to apply for this competition ?

That competition finished 30 November 2015. I'm sure there will be another opening soon here

8 Jan 2016

Quote by HotWife4U
A combination. I always say the biggest sex organ is the brain. Your attitude and concepts increase Lobito. Forinstance, before Chuck and I were in and open marriage we had sex twice a week, Sunday's and Thursday's. Probably because those were low tv nights. No sex is a daily occurrence between us. Most of the time multiple times. He says that it's just the idea I can have sex with others excites him. See? It's mental.

I've known a few guys where that definitely isn't true!

8 Jan 2016

Not sure. It's was either the gin or the tonic.

28 Dec 2015

Reminds me of a Richard Pryor quote: I like makin' love myself, and I can make love for about three minutes. I do about three minutes of serious fuckin', then I need eight hours sleep! And a bowl of Wheaties!

If a man popped and stopped, I tried not to take it personally - so long as he didn't take it personally if I carried on without him.

14 Dec 2015

Quote by Meggsy
How often do you as an author go back and read your own stories.
I have done it - but rarely.

I re-read my stories occasionally. Some of the characters live large in my imagination and I enjoy going back to them as much as I enjoy writing them. Blaine is my guilty pleasure in Seeing Red. A contract killer with a soft spot for redheads and a brutal beautiful kind of lyricism to his inner thoughts. He's delicious.

14 Dec 2015

Quote by sprite

or i'll get it and add lots of stuff you never intended to write. watersports are always fun to slip in to unsuspecting writers stories.

(Raises hand enthusiastically) Oooh! Oooh! I'm an unsuspecting writer.

12 Dec 2015

You might be able to read Lush stories in public but apparently you're not supposed to masturbate to them. I feel this is an important point which was missed from the article.

Abi Thornton,
Masturbation Jail (which isn't as fun as it sounds)

1 Sep 2015

Quote by Verbal

I would kill to be able to write 5000 words a week. Let alone a day. May I borrow some of your creativity?

No problem...although asking me that is the verbal equivalent of lighting the booster rocket on a Space Shuttle; you'll need to hold on tight while I take you on a ride.

25 Jun 2015

I've found that using the British (amazon.co.uk) link works but doesn't provide the clickable title for the ebook entry. However, the picture is still clickable. This might be a useful work-around for you.

11 May 2015

Scarlett
Nicolette
Natalia
Anaïs
Paulina
Alessandra
Chanel
Soraya
Adrianna
Giuliana

21 Feb 2015

Quote by Canuck2
Been trying to find a specific story series but I'm not having any luck. Does anyone here know the title to the following story?

A guy is just moving into his new house when his neighbour's daughter invites him to the BBQ they're having. The guy and the daughter wind up having a relationship. The guy is a businessman who can fly small planes, and in a later part of the series flies the daughter with him on a business trip.

It sounds like this one by TheGulfCoaster: https://www.lushstories.com/stories/taboo/my-neighbors-teenage-daughter-part.aspx

24 Jan 2015

Some may find this website interesting / useful: Write Like Hemmingway

As well as spelling mistakes, it highlights difficult-to-read sentences, adverbiage, passive voice and gives a 'readability rating'.

Best of all, it's free.

20 Jan 2015

Distressed Coke bottle

2 Nov 2014

Wicked Game - Chris Isaak (thanks Liz!!)

2 Nov 2014

Satisfied :-)

27 Oct 2014

Writer's rule - accept that for every word you write, some people will love it, some people will loath it, some people won't be swayed strongly in either direction.

One editor that I've been working with for about three years surprised me by replying to one of my submissions recently. I had assumed that he liked my writing as he kept publishing it and sending me cheques but I wrote a story with an almighty twist in the tail - it was one of those magic writing moments where you sit back and grin inanely with satisfaction. He simply wrote, "Nice one ;-)" which made me grin inanely all over again... although that could have been the effect of the celebratory gin and tonic.

4 Sep 2014

Quote by workswithsteel
is it wrong to look at all the leaked pics of famous people or should they have been smart and not taken them?

Is it wrong that I had to Google the names of these people to find out why they are supposedly 'famous'?

I wrote a satirical ebook about what it takes to get / be famous - A Star Is Porn:

The 18-year-old winner of a competition in a teen magazine finds herself dropped into the world of Tom Walsh, the world's most notorious photographer. Together, they embark on a game-changing photo shoot which promises to fuse the worlds of porn and high fashion... while simultaneously creating a new superstar.

'A Star is Porn' is a hard, humorous satire about today's celebrity society and the desperation to be famous at any cost. How far is a check-out girl from Whitby prepared to go? Topless? Nude? A savage new haircut? How about having sex with the biggest porn star in France on the streets of Paris? Are there any boundaries left?

18 Aug 2014

I can enjoy anything but I need to make a connection with the girl in a scene to take my enjoyment to the next level.

18 Aug 2014

Quote by BigBull
Here's the deal:

My lover and I have been talking about trying new things in the bedroom and she has recently told me that she has a desire to pee on me while I penetrate her.

Any ladies or gentlemen here have experience with this? I'm not talking about having her pee on my face or anything like that, just while I'm fucking her.

If you do get the chance to try some pee play, I suggest that you start in the bathroom rather than the bedroom from a purely practical point of view.

25 Jul 2014

17 Jul 2014

I've been doing a lot of writing in my lunch at work, so you'll see me wedged into a corner doing an impression of a meerkat whenever anyone comes near me. The problem is that I get engrossed and sometimes forget that I've got cock, tits, pussy and spunk metaphorically dripping down my screen. As such, I'm training myself to Alt-Tab whenever there's an unexpected noise.