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CarltonStJames
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I haven't done it for many years now, but the few times I did, it felt awesome. The first time I growled like a goddamn bear while the girl below me kept repeating, "It's so warm," and moving her face side to side.

My usual go to is over the ass cheeks or abdomen/inner thigh area(cumshots get wild sometimes πŸ€·β€β™‚οΈ).

I've written 1000-1500 words in sessions already- probably more. I don't focus on editing when doing the initial draft as that would take away from getting the story down in my opinion. The editing, I make sure to make separate from the drafting process.

I go with the advice of many writing channels on YouTube which is the above stated. That said, if you find drafting and editing simultaneously works for you, I'm not in a position to tell you how to manage your business.

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A story about a musician running away from her popular public persona and finding both herself and true love. Or something like that. Not sure if it will be for here or SS. Might just work better "clean".

Ah, a story of rediscovery. Sounds like it could work on either site. Maybe a clean and NSFW version like some musical artists did back in the day.

Currently editing a series I drafted in late October to early November. I usually take a while with one story as it is, so multiple chapters... sheesh. I predict it should all be ready in April(at least before May).

I have two completed erotic poems that I just have to create covers for them. As for when I will publish another full story? Very well may be when I finish editing the series, which means I may not publish a full story in March. Taking time from editing my series to edit a one-off, I am unsure of the likeliness. That said, I still have three completed single story drafts that need molding.

I can't choose one, so I will give the following:

Missionary(well variations anyhow) - Legs on top my shoulders is great. My hands in the back of her legs is also great. I love it because I can see the woman's face contorted with pleasure, and it allows me to wrap my hand around her throat. Flicking the clit with my thumb for a little razzle dazzle.

Backshots(Doggy) - The worst kept secret about me on Lush, is that I love a great ass. I love to see that motherfucker jiggling and hear it clapping. Hair pulling and neck grabbing are bonuses. Slow doggy sends women delirious, especially when you angle downward more and roll your hips while balls deep.

Lazy Doggy(Pronebone) - I find this more erotic than regular Doggy in a way because I get to see the natural swell of her ass as if she were standing since her legs are straight. Plank above for a good pounding or nestle close and grab her neck while kissing her and rolling your hips.

She's on her side, I'm standing - Don't know the official name of this one, but this has helped me to bust a ton of nuts. I love this because I get a great view of her ass bouncing, tits jumping and pretty face wincing.

Back story is only as important as it is relevant to the story itself. Can be very brief as the others mentioned, then you move on. Going too deep when unnecessary will make people lose interest in my opinion.

I wrote up a long thing, but the page refreshed and I lost it all 😑 .

Sigh.

Kimmi, I am sorry to hear about the struggles with dad. Seeing your remaining parent's health suffer is a terrible feeling. I really hope there's some improvement.

Maybe I can offer a distraction with my latest story:

Intending to celebrate a fresh lease on life, events take an unexpected turn for two divorcees

Ain't Nothing But A Divorce Party

The most famous one I know is from Missy Elliot's Work It. So much of us thought it was something else, but it literally was just this backwards:

"I put my thang down, flip it, and reverse it'."

For almost 20 years, so many of us sang gibberish, but it literally was what she said the bar before πŸ’€πŸ’€πŸ’€.

Almost nightly, although I've missed about 2 or 3 the last week or so.

It can be really good, but you have to be extra vigilant with your footing.

Also, backshots get really loud. I mean loud.

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Write β€˜em all, WW! I would like the SciFi first though. smile

And I swear my son’s ADHD has rubbed off on me. I used to be able to write a story in one sitting. Now, I have about ten started and nowhere near finished. I can’t stay focused on one once started before I venture off onto another idea. Gonna try to get a shorter one (under 2K probably) finished this weekend though.

Sounds like you have my "too much ideas" syndrome. All I can tell you is make note in your phone of each you have started and next to each one note what is in "drafting" or "editing" status. Choose one for the latter and go from there.

I should take some of my advice and continue editing a draft I completed in late November. It was going to be my comp piece, then I realised I had something written that already utilized the comp's theme so I left it alone.

I started another draft but wasn't feeling it, so I stopped. Have to go over what I wrote so far and figure out what direction I want to go with it.

This is the first time I read the winning story before the results were announced. Excellent!

Jaymal's story was excellent and I favorited it as soon as I finished. Well deserved.

I've only read 3 of the top ten so I will have to cover more of those. Congratulations, everybody!

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Meanwhile, Kimmi inveighled me into cooperating with her spanking fetish. She threatened me, HONEST!

Here's the first part – read it and enjoy!

Spank Me! Part 1

I quite enjoyed that naughty teen being punished for her insolence.