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CarltonStJames
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Have to get my glasses fixed.

If I should self-barber Christmas Eve or Christmas morning so it's fresher.

Editing my comp story will be more tedious due to a tool I use, the websites currently unavailable.

A lot of other miscellaneous shit.

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That a hint? Is some going to flash the county tax assessor in your story? That could make for an original entry, and you would know how to make it spicy.

Pfft, I wish.

The way it's looking, revising the sex may be the only way to get this draft within the threshold. Didn't want to do it, but time's running low.

Son of a Bitch 😔.

My draft is still over 1000 words. Less than 100 words to cut, but Jesus. This is rather... taxing.

Hi all,

Hope you're all well. Throughout all the logic holes I tried to fill(phrasing) in my draft, I fucking forgot to mention fucking Christmas, lol.

Sigh.

So I have to enter it somewhere so it doesn't seem forced or whatever, then I can finally get to editing. Ha, funnily enough, the draft originally ended between 900 to 1000 words, but after filling in logic holes, it's 1250 to 1350 words now. I can already feel my irritation with this entry rising as I have never been that far over in a comp draft before.

Not too long finished chicken stew with rice and green split peas. About to dig in too.

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i mean, you know me. when is reading ANY story of mine while really stoned NOT a good idea? smile

For anyone who hasn't, being stoned while reading fiction is a beautiful experience. The theater of your mind goes into overdrive. I will definitely be reading sprite's submission that way.

Got 900+ words for my draft and close to the story's end, but stopped due to how to logically explain certain happenings within. If I can figure out this logic hole and fill it(phrasing) then I can just worry about editing during the week.

A cooling rack. Used it yesterday to let my breaded swordfish rest and then after it was fried.

Struggling with ideas myself, lol. I have to pick one and do the draft this weekend because I take ages to edit and need to leave room for that.

My fear is writing a story that feels too rushed because of the word limit.

I overheard my neighbour's wife a few years back while I was having a late supper. Sounded like she was having a great time.

My neighbours probably heard me with my ex a few times. One time especially when I went full beast when I nutted. She poked fun at me for the rest of that day for them probably being traumatised 😭💀.

I don't have the link to it now as I'm on my phone but I like to use an online tool that goes through your twenty most frequently used words, 2-word phrases and 3-word phrases. That helps reduce frequency during a single story at least, combined with googling synonyms like Ensorceled mentioned.

Reading novels helps in that area as well, inspiring how you approach certain descriptions and such.

Green/Yellow split peas and rice with Goat stew. My stomach is quite satisfied 😌.

Only similarity between me and DMX is that we're both black, have deep voices and shave our heads. Otherwise, nada.

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Shit makes you feel like a pornstar. You have to be prepared for how ugly your face is going to look, though 🤣.

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I'm gonna need this story. 😏

Now you have my overactive imagination running 😲.

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Why does she look so hot and badass simultaneously while just doing something so simple? Like she's a crime boss or something.

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Hi Rumpies wave

This mornin’, Kimmi pimpin’… Kimmi! 😎

https://www.lushstories.com/stories/microfiction/deviating-desires

I was able to clear the noise in my head for 5 minutes to write 100 words. And I actually like those words. I love the challenge to try and tell a full story within 100 words. It ain’t easy for me.

I’ll take some donuts now, please. smile

This story was excellent!

Deviating Desires

I smelled her all over his face. Anger filled me, but then… …the taste of her in his mouth planted a seed of curiosity upon my tongue. * I walked into her office, my panties stuck to my damp lips. “My husband’s fucking you,” I calmly stated and unzipped my dress. Mischief marked her pretty face as she rose from her chair. “So you want what he gets?” * I crawled into bed that night an enlightened woman. With the scent of h...

Microfiction

My goals have evolved since 2020 when I joined. Initially, I wanted to feel out how people would respond to the three or so stories I already completed and shared here. Before that, those were shared amongst peers, but I had a craving for a bigger, anonymous audience.

I then wanted to gain a RR. First comp story I did surprised me with that achievement. Then I wanted to pen a series, but make it something with a sense of peril. Did that with How Did We Even Get Here? Like I literally thought, "What would publishing a series that has a TV feel like something on Showtime get over?" Yep.

Then I desired making a comp top ten, but doubted my abilities. Early 2022 resolved that.

I then wanted to see if more RRs were possible to prove the first wasn't a fluke. My first top ten resolved that too. Then last year, I was shocked to earn another two.

Since then, I wanted to publish another series, which happened this year. I thought about how much my writing would need to improve to earn an EP. Thought it impossible, then the last comp happened 😳.

I still have a lingering goal of attaining a Prolific badge, but that is on the backburner. My current goal is to have 16 stories finished and ready so that I can publish twice weekly for a 2 month period. This is why I won't be publishing single stories for a while unless they're comp entries. I figured releasing in batches rather than a single every few months would be more beneficial to me in the long run.

I am curious to how much more my goals will evolve.

EDIT: Almost forgot, another I had and still have is writing unhinged female characters. I love them in regular fiction - quite liked Gillian Flynn's representation of them in her books I've read, so wanted a go at them too. My Valentine comp story from last year is probably my favourite outing on that front.