Quote by Seeker4
Based on previous rants, I think that what sprite is complaining about is getting a short piece where that line is the only sex. If it contains a line like this but there is more graphic sex elsewhere, you're good.
Where that leaves a story like the one I have perpetually in development hell, where I am at 4000 words and still no actual sex, just some hints of attraction and arousal, I don't know. It's actually a good fantasy piece without the sex so maybe just scrap the sex and target it at blue site.
Thank you. I was not being entirely serious, but I have added a couple of lines after Glenn mounted Julie, just to be safe.
I think I have got beyond 2000 words into stories before there is any sex but never 4000, in fact, few if any of my stories have reached 4000 words.
In your case, it might be a shame to ruin a very good story by adding sex!
