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browncoffee
33 minutes ago
Straight Female, 31
England

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Hi everyone! Hi Julie, thank you for the most lovely comment on my no vampire story, the comment was better than the whole thing lol

Irn bru, please. (That autocorrects to iron brunette lol)
Hello! Hi to the most kind CG, the spider licking (has he lost his mind?) Verbal, beautiful Sara, charming penman, magnificent bastard (can I say that?) ping and wonderful Tonya. Thanks to everyone who read my new story, you are all more than I deserve. Lemönade, please!
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Welcome back, Hannah! Hope everything in your world is splendiferous. Your latest story is a keeper, imo. Here's your coffee. Enjoy.



Why, thank you! You haven't decreased in your delightfulness. smile Congratulations on the great grandchild btw.

More köffee, please.
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Can we make this a sticky thread? Please? So it will be forever remembered?





It will NEVER be a sticky thread. You're unbelievable. There's only one place you can stick this thread.
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Actually, nothing to add... just didn't want Hannah to miss the link


I THOUGHT WE WERE FRIENDS
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And you've never even read the "hot tub of cum" thread! My all time favorite!


Must you ALWAYS remind me of this?
Hey everyone. I'm back, I think. Did you notice I was gone? I hope verbal didn't lick my throne too much. I'm going to catch up on everyone's stories asap. Köffee, please.
*sits on throne, wearing all black, mourning all the shards*

FFS I wanna write but I can't!! I've posted a story every month of 2018 but September is slipping between my fingers! Send help! Send inspiration! NOT NUDES. Well, nudes are welcome except dick pics. Wait, what have I gotten myself into?

Hey to everyone. smile

Tea, please.
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So the rumors are true! *...glances over shoulder...*


chillax! I'm a delight!
Amazing story, amazing writer, amazing urge to have him killed off. biggrin Seriously, this makes me really happy, thank you for sharing your writing here, it's an honour to read and learn from you.
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My entry is called Detention. and i wrote it on a roll of toilet paper. currently working on transcribing it onto the computer, Ms Flick.


Interesting. What kind of pen did you use to write? It must be very tricky to write on toilet paper, it can get torn so easily. And the ink must run quite easily too. I really admire your dedication to the art. You're an inspiration to us all.
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And one upside to first person is that you can use physical descriptions of other characters to reveal more about your narrator.


You mean like to show how shallow they are? I'm intrigued.
wassup everyone!!! i know you're all very busy on your competition entries! i read Safe Word by verbal the other night and LOVED it. check it out if you haven't already. his competition entry is gonna be awesome, i just know it. biggrin where's lyfbuz? where's sprite? hi grace! hope everyone is well!

köffee, please
I find it SO hard to describe a person when the story is in first person. Once Rumpleforeskin was like 'WTF DOES THIS GIRL LOOK LIKE??' lol.
yes, of course you should see what the agent who is paid to be friendly has to offer. what kind of woman is your wife, eating cookies? what an awful thing to do. i bet she hadn't even had a bad day or anything, though you probably didn't care to ask.

seriously, is this thread a joke?
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I like these. I actually have this one, plus three others in the same style (slightly different looks, obviously) by the same designer, Vince Camuto. The illusion of being covered is crazy sexy, at least to my mind.


i have GOT to get one of those

i love all dresses so i can't choose between maxi/mini however the existence of sleek pockets on a dress makes the length irrelevant
https://www.lushstories.com/stories/flash-erotica/ruin.aspx
https://www.lushstories.com/frank_lee



Flash erotica is a difficult category to write in as there's so little time to build a story as well as making sure it's hot. This piece pulls you in almost instantly, sparking curiosity about the characters and their situation while also providing enough nakedness to make you hold your breath. At under 1,000 words, it's amazing how much detail is encased within one shower scene. Also, it's really hot. Like, seriously.

Congratulations to Frank and to everyone who reads this.