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Is there one poem or story you've written that you would like more people to read?

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anyone of the ones I have posted
I define nothing. Not beauty, not patriotism. I take each thing as it is, without prior rules about what it should be.
- Bob Dylan


Consistent, Persistent and Bullshit Resistant!
- Trinket
Probably this one?

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A new one of mine, Trap House. I went back and forth on this one and wasn't sure about posting due to some of the illegal/illicit content, but it was an experience I'll certainly never forget and wanted to share with others. It's under the "College Sex" category, but easily could've fit into exhibitionism or voyeur as well. In general, I'm still not very comfortable writing dialogue, so my stories rely heavily on description. I'd love any feedback and/or tips.

xo
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A new one of mine, Trap House. I went back and forth on this one and wasn't sure about posting due to some of the illegal/illicit content, but it was an experience I'll certainly never forget and wanted to share with others. It's under the "College Sex" category, but easily couldn't fit into exhibitionism or voyeur a well. In general, I'm still not very comfortable writing dialogue, so my stories rely heavily on description. I'd love any feedback and/or tips.

xo


it's on my radar - soon as i get a chance, i'll sit down and have a read - at a quick glance it looks like something i'd enjoy. thanks for bringing it to my attention smile

You can’t truly call yourself peaceful unless you are capable of violence. If you’re not capable of violence, you’re not peaceful. You’re harmless.

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Although I write stories primarily for myself, the story "Immortal Desires" is the one I'm most proud of.

https://www.lushstories.com/stories/supernatural/immortal-desires.aspx

If after reading this you decide to take a look, let me know what you think.


Andrea, I have read your story and found it very exciting. It is also well informed. I mean you know something thing Vampires which always gets my attention. The plot, once he knows there ate two Vampires of a type in Amsterdam thickens.
You have brought together life/death and eros beautifully. Veiling is very subtle. Everyone has a blind spot and so are vulnerable. Having beautiful endowments always helps. ;)
I think it is a great start into that genre of writing, that's for sure.
Not Enough Time
Because I feel it's my state of mind and heart at the moment and I'd like to share that with the people around me.
A couple years back I actually managed to get into the top 10 in a comp. However, that story doesn't seem to get much love anymore (only c. 4600 views in one and a half years) even though I'm still quite pleased with how it turned out (I wuz robbed, I tell you, robbed ).

The comp theme was Fetishes and I wrote about a young man's discovery of his fur fetish with the help of a lovely neighbour lady, so it combines fetish with first time. Here it is again so, hopefully, some more people can discover and enjoy it.

https://www.lushstories.com/stories/fetish/soft-as-fur-she-was.aspx
Not really. My writings is awesome whether someone reads it or not.
I would have to go with A Shift In Power. It is one of my favorite stories that I've written. I'm not sure if it's because it's in the cuckold category that more people haven't read it or if it was just the timing of when it was posted.

It is a very very mild cuckold story. It's more about a woman learning to take back herself and her sexuality. If you decide to read it, I hope you like it as well.

https://www.lushstories.com/stories/cuckold/a-shift-in-power.aspx

I have a new story out! Wish You Were Here A teasing sub may I have pushed too far, but the punishment is oh so sweet.

If you haven't already, please check out my story with leftlingula. A husband and wife rediscovered each other and It all started with one simple word...
Nightshade Part 1 & Nightshade: Part 2

Its only been on here a little while but I think it is a very sweet story and could use more views.

https://www.lushstories.com/stories/straight-sex/meet-the-wife-part-1.aspx

Remember to check out a few of my stories. You can find them here.

https://www.lushstories.com/profile/Jimwillhavefun/stories


For those who like a change and prefer something a little more PG, check out my stories on Storiespace.
https://www.storiesspace.com/profile/Jimwillhavefun/stories

I only joined a week ago so yes, it would be nice if more people read all 3 of my stories. more to follow too smile
A man in the house is worth two in the street- Mae West
Yea my first story is called forbidden thoughts of u and its up now i worked hard to get approved and i got a lot of views but i just need comments
I would really love a famous story one day so, if anyone wants to help me achieve that the link is below.
I hope you like it.
NOOoooooo, don't read any of my stories! They'll ROT YOUR MIND!!
I can't choose between the two, so I'd say that Under Fire and Tension are the two stories that I would like more people to read.

The former because it's as close to nonfiction as I've ever come, and the latter because...okay, I really love the bar in which the story is set. Thank you in advance for your time and consideration, should you decide to read either or both.
Want to spend some time wallowing in a Recommended Read? Pick one! Or two! Or seven!

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It would be nice if more people would read my story of awakening lesbian love called The Education of Diana. Presently there are three chapters. I hope to continue it in the future.

I also am rather proud of my love poetry. I've received most of my RRs for my poems. Perhaps one might try Desert Dreaming, written using the etheree format.



It's wonderful that one can quote oneself here so easily. I will just point up to what I wrote previously. It still stands. And it's interesting to note that a more "vanilla" version of The Education of Diana was awarded a Recommended Read on the blue site.

I suppose I ought to post links if I want anyone to actually read this stuff.

https://www.lushstories.com/stories/lesbian/the-education-of-diana-ch-01.aspx

https://www.lushstories.com/stories/love-poems/desert-dreaming.aspx
I do wish more people had read my most recent story, The Default Option.

I write the kinds of stories I enjoy reading most, which tend to be on the long, wordy, and talky side with a slow build-up, and it's no skin off my nose that many people seem to skip them. Still, I'm very fond of this one. It was fun to write, for one thing, and had some good characters and decent humor in the mix.
I'd almost forgotten about this one--it has the distinction of being the only one of my scribbles not set in a very real, intimately familiar place. The motel described is a mental amalgam of motel rooms stayed in whilst travelling through the American South with my grandmother. Anyway. Have a read, eh?

Falling
Want to spend some time wallowing in a Recommended Read? Pick one! Or two! Or seven!

This one.

https://www.lushstories.com/stories/cheating/satanic-seduction.aspx

It's called "Satanic Seduction".

It's one of the stories I'm most happy with. It actually has a plot, and a moral, and a twist at the end which I'm quite pleased with. It's also properly funny, and has a great sex scene.

It was a competition entry, for the 2014 "Seduction Stories" Compo, but didn't even make the runners-up list, so maybe that helped it slip down the back of the Lush sofa and disappear.

Or maybe I'm wrong, and it's just a bad story.

Why don't you go and see?

Why not join my popular Lush Group One Tit Out Group | Lush Stories? For all those who enjoy pictures of women showing just one boob. Lots of cheeky flashes and accidental slips. Come on, you know you want to! Annie xxx