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Quote by Milik_Redman


I totally get that. Sometimes they decide they don't WANT to wait for the next scene. They don't seem to give a rats ass if they are in public or if they might get into trouble. Sometimes they just want to do it right there, so you go about creating a scene for them, and you turn around and they are already all over each other!

I'm writing a girl now, a cute, innocent young thing that I've forced to turn tricks because she's broke and has a kid to care for. She's suppose to be RELUCTANT. To not WANT to do it, but hell, the little tart gets one look and a guys shit and the next thing I know, she's bemoaning how long it's been since she got any. Now, she trying to turn it into a happy little sex scene!

I told her, Malory, what the hell? You don't even know this guy?

She looks at me and says, 'hey, piss off, Milik! If I want this guy to drill me in the back seat, it's none of your damn business!

Huh. It would serve her right if I wrote a cop into the scene. Nah, the little tart would just do him too.


Omfg..I love it..


Oh, fuck...laughing....

tries not to ask if I can be her minus the kid.

Quote by Milik_Redman
I totally get that. Sometimes they decide they don't WANT to wait for the next scene. They don't seem to give a rats ass if they are in public or if they might get into trouble. Sometimes they just want to do it right there, so you go about creating a scene for them, and you turn around and they are already all over each other!

I'm writing a girl now, a cute, innocent young thing that I've forced to turn tricks because she's broke and has a kid to care for. She's suppose to be RELUCTANT. To not WANT to do it, but hell, the little tart gets one look and a guys shit and the next thing I know, she's bemoaning how long it's been since she got any. Now, she trying to turn it into a happy little sex scene!

I told her, Malory, what the hell? You don't even know this guy?

She looks at me and says, 'hey, piss off, Milik! If I want this guy to drill me in the back seat, it's none of your damn business!

Huh. It would serve her right if I wrote a cop into the scene. Nah, the little tart would just do him too.


Hehe, that's exactly how it goes. I've hit the 10k mark and I'm fed up for now. This was supposed be a very short short story when I started it this morning. Now, it wants to fold out into something of epic proportions. And yeah, no use trying to add restraining secondary characters. They all get laid and make the tale even longer. My main character now has made it through Candice and her husband, all the husbands of her girl friends, a nice Asian girl who manned the counter at the airport and her boss, the woman at the security check, two business men, an older lady and two flight attendants. And its hardly over. I've taken a bit of revenge and changed her name to Crystal, though. If she wants to behave like a cheap slut, she'll have to carry a popular stripper name. Serves her right, doesn't it?
This is the best thread ever. Now I don't feel quite as nuts and crazy anymore. It seems that I am in very good company!
Quote by ChrissieLecker


Hehe, that's exactly how it goes. I've hit the 10k mark and I'm fed up for now. This was supposed be a very short short story when I started it this morning. Now, it wants to fold out into something of epic proportions. And yeah, no use trying to add restraining secondary characters. They all get laid and make the tale even longer. My main character now has made it through Candice and her husband, all the husbands of her girl friends, a nice Asian girl who manned the counter at the airport and her boss, the woman at the security check, two business men, an older lady and two flight attendants. And its hardly over. I've taken a bit of revenge and changed her name to Crystal, though. If she wants to behave like a cheap slut, she'll have to carry a popular stripper name. Serves her right, doesn't it?


You ought to change her luggage out with coke head Barbie's. See what she says when all she has to wear is a tube top, fishnets and a tiny pair of hot pants.1ZZuzHVGwSQsw9oS

The Wild Girl anthology need not be read in any order but does take place in the following timeframe

Wild at Heart- 1968. The story of Dani’s Great Aunt Evie.

https://www.lushstories.com/stories/first-time/wild-at-heart

Wild Oats. Part 1&2. -2021. Dani is 16 and sets her sights on her stepfather.

https://www.lushstories.com/stories/taboo/wild-oats-part-1

https://www.lushstories.com/stories/taboo/wild-oats-part-2

Wild Child. 2025. Dani is now 20 years old.

https://www.lushstories.com/stories/taboo/wild-child

Quote by Milik_Redman


Don't you hate when that happens?


Milik Red FLIRTS like I BREATHE!

(So funny!)

I'm NOT in The Big Loop anymore but I DO know that The Nurse's story was within a a GNAT's Hair of a place...

(A curly brown haired girl told me that...)

You can say what you like about Lushville but I'm glad I live here. Pity about the neighbours!

LAUGHS!

xx SF
Quote by stephanie


Milik Red FLIRTS like I BREATHE!

(So funny!)

I'm NOT in The Big Loop anymore but I DO know that The Nurse's story was within a a GNAT's Hair of a place...

(A curly brown haired girl told me that...)

You can say what you like about Lushville but I'm glad I live here. Pity about the neighbours!

LAUGHS!

xx SF



Flirting? I never flirt! I'm... Just sayin, that's all.

The Wild Girl anthology need not be read in any order but does take place in the following timeframe

Wild at Heart- 1968. The story of Dani’s Great Aunt Evie.

https://www.lushstories.com/stories/first-time/wild-at-heart

Wild Oats. Part 1&2. -2021. Dani is 16 and sets her sights on her stepfather.

https://www.lushstories.com/stories/taboo/wild-oats-part-1

https://www.lushstories.com/stories/taboo/wild-oats-part-2

Wild Child. 2025. Dani is now 20 years old.

https://www.lushstories.com/stories/taboo/wild-child

Quote by Milik_Redman


Flirting? I never flirt! I'm... Just sayin, that's all.



YOU SAY THAT WITH A STRAIGHT FACE!???!!!???

xx SF

(I'm a HETERO guy and I'm kinda into you!)
Quote by Saga
This is the best thread ever. Now I don't feel quite as nuts and crazy anymore. It seems that I am in very good company!


Nuh uh. I know crazy. I am crazy. You folks have just plain lost the plot...

Quote by TheDevilsWeakness


Nuh uh. I know crazy. I am crazy. You folks have just plain lost the plot...



Whoa, whoa, whoa Lady. Who said anything about plot?
This is not an unfamiliar phenomenon to me. I experience this all the time. Sometimes I'm forced to reallocate characters or stories to my non-erotic work if and when they get a little too 'real' for my Lush work. By the same token, for my characters that just get a little too randy for my non-erotic writings and publishings, I send them here. It's kind of a revolving door, honestly. I have to make sure not to get confused and of course to shuffle some names and personal details around in case of a switch, but if they're not working here, it's time for them to move on, and if they aren't working anywhere else, maybe they should hang out here for a while.

At a practical level, I'm a big proponent of recycling your own work. I keep a scratchpad, a scrap folder, and a misfits folder. Invaluable tools, if you ask me. Hope that helps.
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Quote by Milik_Redman


Don't you hate when that happens?


I BET my CRAP vampire can KILL his cop and I can still do it here...

xx SF
Quote by stephanie

I HATE when my characters ARGUE with me! (Do other writers GET this...) My characters are saying "But this is what we do..." (And I'm saying YOU CAN'T!!!!!!!)

And they are saying but we DID that and you have to write it!

I'm like, FUCK YOU, I WRITE YOU!!!!! I DECIDE!

But they keep saying, "We do what happens... You wrote us, you created us, DEAL with it! It's your fault..."

And I'm trying to be a GOOD Lush writer!

(But my fucking characters are being so unruly! Jesus Christ!)

I LOVE my characters but MEET ME HALF WAY?????


I'm doing my best!

One of mine just killed a Cop.

HOW DO I SELL THAT HERE?????

(And she was gorgeous! Molly Holland, a Homicide detective... Red Head, Pretty...)

I wish they just did what I wanted... But they don't... Fucking Bastards.

xx SF






Maybe they want that Editor's pick that you mentioned, so they're taking things into their own hands. You never know, they may have a point.
Quote by Milik_Redman
You ought to change her luggage out with coke head Barbie's. See what she says when all she has to wear is a tube top, fishnets and a tiny pair of hot pants.iaVlawoGwMBGwaHb


Who says I haven't tried it? One minute she's that embarrassed, innocent neighbor who blushes madly every time she talks about her secret chat buddy, the next she struts through the airport in a tight leather skirt that shows her garter straps, wearing slut heels and an almost see-through blouse, wiggling her bum and not minding at all that her face is painted in glittery fuck-me-red as if she was auditioning for a Cleopatra porn movie. Really, she left me no choice. She's going to get her dripping pussy spanked, and she'd better like it!
I don't want to be party pooper over here, because I find this thread delightful and the cute one there is, but..

Quote by DanielleX


I think this is a great phenomenon and part of the process of character development.

What's happening, is that the characters are acquiring a sort of quasi-sentience as they evolve within the writer's mind. What this does is enable us to give the character greater depth, mould their dialogue and just makes writing their parts all the better.

To a non-writer this probably sounds bizarre, but I know exactly what you mean, Steph.

Danny xxx



..every creative work has the same principle 'issues'. Creativity and imaginations takes their own turns in no matter which field you are, it is almost that people are just tools in hands of art smile
Quote by She
I don't want to be party pooper over here, because I find this thread delightful and the cute one there is, but..




..every creative work has the same principle 'issues'. Creativity and imaginations takes their own turns in no matter which field you are, it is almost that people are just tools in hands of art smile


I'm a tool.

xx SF
Quote by Dirty_D

Whoa, whoa, whoa Lady. Who said anything about plot?


Damn you autocorrect...

Pot! Someone find the pot!
Quote by She
I don't want to be party pooper over here, because I find this thread delightful and the cute one there is, but..




..every creative work has the same principle 'issues'. Creativity and imaginations takes their own turns in no matter which field you are, it is almost that people are just tools in hands of art smile


You can poop all you want, it's not my party.

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A steamy lesbian three way

This thread is funny.

Usually I rule my characters because... I'm a bitchy writer that way - "You'll do what I want!"

But... once I get out of short-story territory (under 10K) and into novella and series territory, the characters totally take over and no longer obey.

I actually had the final two sex scenes in West Coast Games written in a far more dirty/kinky way, and then during edits, my main character forced me to rewrite them and change everything. I actually couldn't believe I was letting him do that to me. I had to sleep on it, to make sure.

Him: "Ash, nope.. you know I just wouldn't do that."

Me: "Well can't you just do it in this one scene... for me?? Will it help if I make you drink more vodka in the scene preceding it?"

Him: "Come on, look what you've done to my life over three chapters of this story! Can't I catch a break here?"

Me: "Fine, grrrr...I'll rewrite it. And for the record - Roxy was right - you are uptight!"

We made up by the final scene though, and he's still one of my favourite characters that I've ever created. smile
Quote by emilykiss


Well...

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I love this quote!

Now, I feel like a late comer to this thread but I wanted to share my own issues. Most of my stories I just document the dialogue I hear or the scenes I see. Such was the case with "Getting Even" my latest piece. I watched & listened, they did the rest. But, "The Lost Tablet", a story that took me almost 3 months to write (and I know... for some that's fast) because when I'd try to force the story a certain direction, the character would stop talking to me. When I deleted what they didn't like, they started to share with me and I could write.

I have also found that if I don't write what I hear... they won't let me fucking sleep as they get louder and louder. I'm surprised my husband can't hear them.

At least he supports & encourages my writing.
I think this is the funniest thread on the forums!

I currently have two characters who are supposed to be getting together...but she's freaking out, and he's freaking out because he's never loved anyone before and she won't talk to him, and really, I just want to handcuff them together and tell them to just get the fuck over it and talk to each other. But no...she has to run off to join a missions trip to Africa. Blink. REALLY? I know next to nothing about Africa, accept almost all the wildlife there can will kill you and its hot as hell there. So now he's insisting on huffing it all over Africa to find her.

ME: Geez buddy, if you want to get laid that badly, I'll give you a hooker to play with.

HIM:"But, But...I love HER!" Whine whine, bitch bitch.

ME: I don't have enough wine to deal with you right now.
I understand how you feel stephanie. I haven't been writing all that long but when I first started, I tried writing a story and putting the characters in it. I quickly found out that was the wrong way to go about it. I discovered that if I let the characters tell ME their story, it is a lot easier. So now when I write I find the characters first. Here's what I mean:

Say I feel like writing a BDSM story, for example. I pick the genre of the story I want, then I go on the lookout for the cover pic for it. The cover pic is usually the main character (although not always) so I use that pic for the "inspiration" for the story. Then I start writing the backstory and from there it just sort of takes off and I write like a madman to get the story as close to finished as the "zone" lasts!

Sometimes I can write a two-part story in a single sitting. Other times it takes a few days. It depends on what distractions, chores, or errands I have to do in the meantime. But fitting the characters to the story rarely works for me. I have to write their story if I want to make it easy for me.
The main character in my stories is always me. Now you'd think I have some control over that wouldn't you? Fat chance!!! The minute I start typing anything even remotely steamy then character me completely takes over real me and drives me into typing sexier and sexier things for me to do. Character me regularly makes real me have to go and lie down and sort myself out

I do love character me lol
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Some of my characters are real people I have known - not know now. I am sure they would kill me if they knew I had taken a little bit of literary licence with their lives.
My fictitious ones don't talk to me but I am sure they would enjoy doing some of the things I have had them do and thank me for if they could, or even accomplish with me what I had them do in my story.
Some turn me on as I write about them and if they appeared in real life the story may never be finished.