She sighed, settling on a barstool in a bar while she stared at a map, turning it this way and that while tracing her fingers over the lines of the streets of Denmark. "Shit... I've only been here for an hour and I'm already lost - it just figures." She sighed, pushing her hair back and looking around for a friendly face to ask for some much needed help. She felt even more lost when no one looked back at her - in fact, th...

She was on fire, the first girl I saw when I walked into the party, her long hair, her sparkling eyes, her laugh that sounded like wind chimes, her slender, yet curvaceous figure.. from head to toe she was pure temptation. I loved how her dark skin shimmered as the lights brushed on and off of her to the beat of the music. I quickly pulled a friend aside to find out her name, he didn't know, she had come alone and no one...

(This is my very first story, but I would love critique/suggestions on it. I know that it's from the father's point of view, and it was a challenge to write it. There's a part two, also, but I'll wait to see how you guys liked it.)Please rate and comment! I wake up with a jolt when I hear the front door slam closed. Surprised at myself for falling asleep on the couch with the reports I was supposed to be reading sitting o...