Reflection Stories

Her voice calls out to me,it reaches beyond the walls.Her love is a brilliant light,which hangs above the shade.Slowly, the shade leaves from view,the light she wields is too much.Her love is a garden,abundant and plentiful.Her love is a treasure,always too wonderful.Her voice sends a request to me,echoing throughout the halls.Her love, the brilliant light,it seems shall never fade.This feeling I bask in is new,I nearly m...

He came to me with soft, careful words, And I took him.He brought to me the touch of a blissful lover, And I felt him. He kissed my skin and stirred its desire, And I laid myself down for him. He captured my heart and fed my soul, And I fell for him. And, then…in a flash It was gone. Gone were the gentle whisperings of need and want Into ears that were hungry to hear them. Gone were the eyes that haunted my own Eyes that...

Okay this is my first story ever, so please would you be so kind as to leave constructive criticism to help me. Let me know if I should add more to this story, as well as do others. I purposely left the characters kind of blank so you can make your own. “I bet you’ve been dreaming about this for a long time.” He said with his low gravelly voice, as he came up behind me in the bathroom. “About what exactly?” I replied look...